【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
* r9 a  Q6 l% q2 a0 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, d; m1 L  v9 IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 \8 C7 w* g# \" v% @) i& P3 RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  t" J5 ~1 X" m; k8 K1 {& n$ q( ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( d2 {' G( h% [. }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; Q% D' N. {- F+ d+ h1 d1 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
! a- m8 t5 H. w( J! n; Q# ^9 KI want to confess that I love you,
$ f: g' a' D% A$ HBut I never did
9 i" S# ?/ b* B8 ^4 ~5 t2 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 _) L0 d: a' H% V: k1 s6 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 }- U6 ?  E& N  k5 ACan I entrust it to you?
. R9 z! \- X1 n- qEntrust my love within your heart
* y' Q8 s7 P2 nLove… just the word love
0 R0 G) M" C$ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ `1 T6 V; |0 M( C/ E* {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 Q8 P# w' j# E% k$ NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 F: Z! s. |  g0 V# OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ ^* F3 H# E/ GEntrust my love within your heart
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5 K# i% s' b& X: C) C2 `, @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. ~( I: D! f/ a( f6 q: L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 w$ f# p# p5 @$ l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% K/ Q# C7 s+ }5 C" x2 Y) W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) V# _+ X( v* D& x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 {; N& y' L* k9 y* W6 N4 C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' L& w+ `7 _  l5 n3 q' d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) A; ^/ G: i% c3 M2 ^7 G% e& W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, q- q* D2 h' a; m6 W- G: H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 g5 O. Y1 r: _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 ?- V/ ^/ e3 t% U7 G  b5 O2 B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 E7 l4 A6 k, w% V, \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% v, t, l' v) S1 b# ^6 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% Y4 K, r. E  j- H7 Y# N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 z( M+ G7 J, ~) Z9 f<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  C/ j: ~, f( J7 \8 X( K2 Q: D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Z; G0 g7 G" a( s) ~' S" M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 P$ C0 K3 D0 z- _9 s8 D# _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# y! V  L# n, c  g0 O3 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: T) c# `$ l) y& B1 `. `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. h; V0 ^- {( {1 \) y& {7 H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 f4 f9 E8 q+ r! _% j, U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' ^5 x- j0 P7 _& D<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 M( G% s" D  Q* g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 `; j7 _# W4 L8 v4 V# Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 P( C. g1 w. S6 @! w; G8 X6 ]# ^6 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& G! ]8 G& E; X3 p4 |* o. i  {8 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# L8 z8 ~2 Y4 `* K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ G; K: `& l1 ~7 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% C0 D2 Y1 t& O4 {$ a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, a0 c9 f# Y* E7 M9 ?% u/ x2 R" @" ^, d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ }7 Z5 q: G/ F3 s5 P$ G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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% B$ r: ~7 ^3 a# c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) g! m& p$ B' Y7 d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) r7 L+ f0 k" C" t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) D7 n9 Q; ]9 x5 T; E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>