【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
  e2 p5 F* o% S7 U' p% sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 {/ `8 f% Z4 d  |) l9 z: C6 jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! o: B, j# _4 n0 U  X3 \9 MI would probably know how you feel
, r( J. h' G" d2 D9 E. @$ ]- V: lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. E) B6 c, U' t$ l* }* BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 D; {8 b5 L, o) d9 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) [! J6 E) h0 k* N# kWhy is it so difficult to express?
- E& z' ^; \- |6 R& O; g0 \I want to confess that I love you,
* J( ^# v. S% r2 [# YBut I never did
3 i* r& B* U8 W$ {1 {& o7 J# M  wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 t  P/ C8 U( T0 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- G" K" f' _+ E$ p; m7 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 D+ |# [" ?, k3 Z6 g9 m+ ?Can I entrust it to you?
) B% g; o* k7 g. K" mEntrust my love within your heart

$ }' q' ~4 ?/ s  O- C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 I6 b7 y# m* I# }# [" Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* E* M% ]* ?, w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 A1 o7 {6 ?4 \1 W* E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 a, I; f! _% T" ]1 o! I* P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; O% r0 V9 M8 H2 z% m1 Q! N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% Y" c; s  N! }6 P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 B* h0 s, p  R) @/ g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  ~' D3 A1 X8 U( ~1 ?+ q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 F; J9 u+ g! l' f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 G6 l! _% _. x# v& c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, l7 l5 P8 W+ y4 N. G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' A( }& x* ]6 G1 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# a' W! B" H! k6 T. ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 |" y# k* e2 I3 D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! M# \1 F6 p/ ?6 v( ^: e: x  _; j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 {$ g5 P: V" |1 S% m, s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' C! H1 N* Y5 `& z; O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) }7 i: c/ e! @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 b( I; x+ ], c, M3 ]# P; d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 @/ ^' A% Y2 k1 j7 A5 g7 _, X) {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; ~* i1 T( @5 J+ |* t% r' u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- x  k% g2 r# S. |( \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. m  v& c* H, i* X. @5 a# m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 `4 z: V' p* }8 o- y' r- ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; k7 J0 e% a! w$ Z$ {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) _" C5 l2 U; |, m+ b- W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 Q! n3 ~* P2 b+ f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ Q) K9 i6 p* O( m" x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! L! [: ?$ z3 L# B! I% {+ i* \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 d; v  K0 U4 M7 d. Y& t9 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# Q9 N* T0 \3 J0 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! G4 L6 \6 u" x+ _& l" U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; r% Z$ ?; o* t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 U1 z# D$ v+ ~: H) U( T+ z9 D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: I( t% |( r) |6 z$ W8 v" F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# v4 y1 s# @4 R, \. z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" u+ W/ n! s1 u% }# j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 M, m0 _) m! t. c* D# O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. ~" _& F( X4 Q5 d# C  }6 T, l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>