【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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) c9 ~+ U3 E2 {$ s4 X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% h( w$ G. r6 V% S1 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ X) D! e  g) _7 u& z$ @: y, M8 tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ \" {1 Z& i( r: {5 g% @5 Z9 [0 @& xWe meet and talk everyday,
( o6 ~/ U0 y9 S% z* L0 Z7 S! m& rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 [6 Q: A3 x- AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# R& M7 \+ a- _$ \; f9 t1 \- }I would probably know how you feel
5 Q# D3 A6 o, @/ l: @" r) s8 QLove… just the word love
5 N/ }# _3 h: i- U0 d( EWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 ~0 t8 U' \2 K6 b+ @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& x$ [# [" E6 w$ e& ]2 r: q+ r/ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% S  k8 L, G5 p" m9 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 m$ m, m' D) b/ SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ I$ s! G: y' h$ n9 n+ ~; K# f7 FIf today isn’t too late,
* y( W' n7 @2 A9 r3 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 u6 y% Y" P8 Q6 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ |/ v3 S  h/ B' R4 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) I( e2 p) }- h) c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( C4 Y- k" W+ D! M2 q- E0 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( H; E( \. P( Z& i. ?1 |4 ], _$ i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. n- A" r& ~3 E( j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. @# P' I+ l  h8 G$ A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: e8 @7 X/ D6 t% b$ e: B- f6 A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. E; s9 ^, O  f, g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' c% @3 u6 B5 e4 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ ]" U, f1 |) Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- Z- a: F, |. t. k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# w# d* V6 i" J* B7 p$ o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 r, J) s5 D- e$ Z9 w' h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ s0 V5 r+ [* y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) m% ]3 X( l  i6 h) o  {1 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! H$ ~" S0 q. b( d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 [$ Q; h& ~8 J5 v1 `: i( v' |3 O0 z' Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 p" n3 P9 d! K1 x3 w1 I- n  Z$ q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) V5 g$ m8 J1 D* p; @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ d% a- }$ @& a' H# E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) g% T, Z+ f9 a  f. ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- @6 J7 @3 g  R. h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 p) F' x, R; `4 T& l% J- t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" N4 d, m- c0 r7 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, {7 U7 Q9 K. ^: I+ m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ i# Y1 W9 Q* u! s* m4 X! ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% B( v! `& d+ K$ x6 P) {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' p9 p: \6 C5 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 m! m; p2 w; `. @" `: q. q+ J  L4 b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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