【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% x9 t3 d; W5 r% w3 O- ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' |/ ]7 I1 e! Y& P$ b) bFrom the first moment we met,
- i' Q. Z# t! J2 i9 V+ uI already loved you with all my heart
3 T4 M# g& Z0 AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' L& h8 ^! ?9 d( lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' M- u+ u4 Q* ^6 j- A* kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 B& k/ ^! G3 D) k5 c- }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( I1 [& G( z6 a0 O% ]# G) x/ U4 u; oEntrust my love within your heart
4 D" @; j! z! F9 q- Z" XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ X% o0 k$ m7 }; f; K: u8 ?9 KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 {6 @2 Q% S% R. ~& a3 W/ b. r1 }7 HIf today isn’t too late,
# Q( I' ^" F  z) H4 G/ K! VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ {7 G8 E2 u  T3 U" S8 CEntrust my love within your heart
, r, m9 R9 |7 u) B% g/ @7 f! kCan I entrust it to you?
* ], u( M; J+ S* P9 F4 JEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, N. S, D1 m3 q: J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: u0 ?: f4 i. }3 r8 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ `+ x3 @$ Q* u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 e( X7 Y$ H8 Y0 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 {# e8 f4 A7 F* f& A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- ]: W' _1 B+ P" U: m3 S. Z# K# `8 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 Y7 o# q7 e0 o' D" O1 S  E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# s" I; G- l7 v. z7 j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  i5 ~0 j1 }- T$ M3 g0 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ ^8 S+ \8 K* z8 ^6 [: M<P>但我不会</P>
% S7 x& d$ k; {) p9 Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* L6 ?% K$ p" Q9 N) m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 _# t3 r/ k& K# D/ c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ ~* H5 w+ Z# l( X  B( z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 t( H- D# \9 ?# x$ [9 H* j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) t# F# y! i7 y4 a6 a9 n0 i. B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# J4 K4 m5 Q$ o" M% w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( N) L) `2 i7 P( d; }1 c: }/ C9 g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 R( Y" n, C4 s+ k3 B( t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) S  j- E, e* g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 r6 _2 v2 B0 m+ c& r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 r1 k1 m5 b7 `6 d<P>But I never did </P>
, X- ~7 f" E% M; u2 f3 @5 X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ s* M$ Z0 l6 w& x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* L% E3 m  L2 x9 I- ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 s2 E6 T* O5 Q/ D$ X+ ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) Q: K2 L( w! ^7 @, i& E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# [3 K" Z8 Y& C! h" j3 E; X" G! L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& M! f; W' J  k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  {& I4 e9 `' K8 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% ~: R# N/ G& P- f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' U# U2 u2 p- E% ^4 j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ e1 D9 v: ~. Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 t# [% w/ q" E% Q0 }" v' O; w. g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- n6 ~$ p2 z* m% b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- q% o" v# X; Y' v7 H6 u. b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>