【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, u. g* a1 D' n3 a& _( V/ t- X8 yI already loved you with all my heart
( F) f* e5 P1 AWe meet and talk everyday,
, a3 A- c& O3 @5 q0 h) dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' u8 T) I, g. s; S5 u8 b# J* C5 YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% `1 ?" D/ H$ _1 j6 ?I would probably know how you feel
% ]  e# ?+ }+ G2 X: z5 @+ t1 SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( S, O* p7 r) j! R' U) XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; a. z' \; K9 i2 y0 KCan I entrust it to you?
. N+ N; M( [- f8 f1 J' ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* c3 |, S) G# [& r3 ZBut I never did
; z1 ^: V; g  s1 l5 e1 L; p, T6 s/ COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 P$ l. z) }. y" E1 _- B% `. nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 N$ m6 x8 l5 e2 c+ M  T3 YCan I entrust it to you?
' W/ b) s! G5 s) HEntrust my love within your heart
5 Q0 t" C* \: qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- j4 ]8 t+ o# f! `" R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ q8 K3 t/ O6 p/ m1 \, O. V, X, [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ D, ?+ [$ n1 L# [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) n3 \& E4 X3 Q( T. Z3 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ @' L2 R! ?$ r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! `' Y$ _; }( k% m) I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 F+ ]# x: ~2 z0 ~& B, l& O: m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 `3 F6 Z& i5 w3 e$ V( S4 ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ U7 S* Q! r+ @( ?$ q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( F& L- A6 _7 i+ u# w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 n( E3 |2 j+ A% u( l" ^<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ a! ?; F/ E1 J/ D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# C% z/ L5 W! v5 g' a# I8 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  q# K. c! [7 D6 h* D5 N; F5 a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' b0 K. Q2 X! D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 s7 m5 g) Q) R, }$ U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 Q% O: ^2 a* U- h6 ~; t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- I, ]* z& [& d. b- h% {+ y. B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 H1 v( _; P& l  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* ~* X' u1 T' B( W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 \) y9 b& a' V' s/ u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 u% i1 i8 Q0 V* {0 s1 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; _$ M- {( N1 K8 e, b. i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 v6 J7 f3 h1 F0 d' }0 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 l0 {3 d! J* u6 \" i( E8 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 H  h& c( z- {: `3 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- d, p! D: P3 V; c. P4 |* A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) L& y/ S/ L9 H/ @( p# t. `  l$ E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- B9 c. y2 F5 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% Y. C2 x6 i- w/ ?+ N  ]7 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 A# l( Y0 A( p8 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Q2 D$ P/ d  S$ U& {1 b$ W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 p. }1 b/ w6 H$ Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' {; q& m2 C4 E  Z5 Q3 L% H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 D1 y3 d5 L; o) n5 D0 j3 j6 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: `0 v# v; [* ~" f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>