【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( y- h0 F- N# vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 k$ W) l( ~) X( r% YFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 @, ?2 v) P5 h1 S3 i. |( eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" j+ ?8 K9 B4 c8 ~5 f& q+ ^% r3 {+ VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 E' H  n! m& P, t5 Z) HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 B1 f  J1 s, E+ A: HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, U( ]3 I1 f7 {2 `, V7 pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; V4 U& [. s, Z4 i$ [) \5 A: x3 [0 f: SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* a5 C" M$ R; |4 O4 u5 v" @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 G' y9 G3 p9 \/ I7 GIf today isn’t too late,
* `: e; U7 Q. e' [( |5 j! g  I' X) N$ O" xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  {! a4 `2 y$ |! JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) u) `, Z9 l) B7 n) m3 R: O: _- uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ O  I; S5 H# g" O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& y, f0 q! f- L  T% q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- g9 |) l3 K6 h3 y: P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" T" C& O$ e: Q. ?9 \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ ^+ B, n/ l' U! ^. X# n. h7 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) y. a0 b4 c* d" E% J9 U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 m. c5 s% `8 H1 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ z  N4 [" }3 }9 w# z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) \. ?' X6 R; s1 W% P3 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* Z3 x0 Z% \7 u1 a' o4 o. `6 z1 [3 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 |- W2 |1 t  P2 G; O$ j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( n! T5 K+ w: g4 r5 ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# Y! R4 u  e/ ]! l, X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" g! _$ U9 y# ~) N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' ]/ k" u. d; x8 T2 }; ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 ?) s& @/ s; z6 w; i& ?7 V4 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 h7 g5 w9 i$ F. V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# K! i- \) F+ V# j; n3 ?. y( \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: I1 p: \9 r' G& J# P6 U& t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 q3 h: O, g" ]. r$ X<P>但我不会 </P>
- f# @: z6 X  T7 r2 o* F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( T( f' t/ X6 @& a) A' m! ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: y2 a0 x8 j2 a) }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ f1 L/ J1 b* q% V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& N7 q2 l% Q5 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  a3 S' ?" Y$ e# {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ]8 \3 b3 i2 B' n# [; B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  v. S8 M3 |$ D1 V% U; @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 t: l6 x- d1 }0 S- e/ ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ~4 T" u1 _1 s( i! Q) d6 o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. y% ^+ `. h( y# R1 B+ L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>