【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 Z0 s4 v: Y0 `! D我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. f+ B0 ]4 t+ }+ r2 B) BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 f( K! E# D; v5 JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" Z8 ~' D6 [9 W2 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& ?5 g( N$ L2 I9 {% ^+ n. ~! A% |; sLove… just the word love
, q) f0 q+ T* V: O2 F; n/ xWhy is it so difficult to express?
* w" C) s3 o* GI want to confess that I love you,
) Z4 `! H" W) j# g% _4 L# eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 C" R0 W. C4 m# R5 b3 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# m3 p3 H0 s  |( p7 |* |% CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, X2 x8 {  j+ z5 \7 ?2 MLove… just the word love
( _, z1 G; L4 U) l' jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& ^5 G( f4 b+ r9 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 ]( X! r' F  MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% `6 l( n& t. h4 Z- u0 EEntrust my love within your heart
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; I: T  G, r( y: e6 |0 E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- [0 F1 w. l  s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ v$ R3 u9 ]- }3 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; H# n: ]4 K8 X% v  A% \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 G( T2 {( c: P0 A" C  G) c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& z  w# P7 ]- r& P& W$ |) o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% A+ t; `" b# l0 F! B, I+ C6 `" d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 C2 n/ ?! q" w5 r' q9 s1 ~9 d8 R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- |- m8 c# W6 G: T! Y. Y' C+ R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ x5 g( r9 i  ^) b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) J" H( {+ U3 F% m" a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 `$ L! ~1 h2 G+ |9 I3 F& s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# A( ^; T6 I  A( X* b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. L; y) b( j2 h5 ]8 S# U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 M) d9 m) S: K6 e  i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- o! Z0 b3 k5 `7 h* [1 E- W9 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; R/ K) i+ [' m  ?6 B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ l3 s0 ~9 F6 O4 P6 C3 x# P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' w+ j5 n1 i# u9 _& A- {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ?& N3 ^  n$ x: A; y. ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) C/ B7 s2 c1 ]4 F' P1 H# C# ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 @. A9 [/ d6 b( e! d5 w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 N3 s: h% J6 `) E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, \" w( T" K9 ^9 I( i<P>But I never did </P>
! W- f" d7 a! y4 n- _3 q1 k$ r! m* `! Z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  ~8 P& s8 e0 s( b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& Q" T+ I0 }1 a/ T: B5 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& u* L8 h! G2 j, e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: V: o4 n& z1 L& E: _# k8 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ `8 v+ g) \9 {6 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ }- i1 M  w! a+ E7 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& D4 E& f; W: d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) t5 V# V& N7 K2 w( T7 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 a; q9 ]9 P4 L# o+ b- t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! \. X) C; j1 j6 P& y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>