【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! x0 H% h  j8 ^: H- f- u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 A/ p4 v: \" d" t8 @$ S6 [From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. I5 c+ T4 |4 }, E2 X4 v" iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ I1 q, G* n) p/ Z) ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; Q* W/ f7 o2 W  |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 V9 j7 ^( j4 l& Z4 ?* F) q% \If today isn’t too late,
$ w+ D% R" s' \0 K* S; ?' L4 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( Q, z2 }' x9 O' f8 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ S; W7 ~% ^. |3 o. i) ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* @- k" r$ I4 c6 V& z5 v2 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
' f$ g6 Q9 Y, G( N* w4 X* y2 qI want to confess that I love you,
7 i. u' u5 ~- }( h" {! y+ d, IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 i/ P1 \9 K2 l$ x( I/ q' lIf today isn’t too late,
  i" @' g: Z- i- VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ s- ^+ _8 z  o5 E) k8 @; \) KCan I entrust it to you?
/ M; P( ]5 _, Z- A7 ~% t/ C1 zEntrust my love within your heart

* d2 k$ c9 n6 {5 m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* ], ^7 E1 X3 }/ D/ _' z& S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% H( n6 L, b' G6 o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# `0 C6 q1 z# A* b: S% I8 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, e" h8 |. G% h2 W: O( K% G. d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( k5 y, L$ @+ b, A. ?0 ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 S0 z. S% I5 ^5 |4 B" |% x0 ]/ ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- ]7 R' ^: e  |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 `6 J! ?" X( i: H  k/ \( K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, F5 @! e$ Y! T- K  t$ K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 Y9 ?0 `  u# d" U- T<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 q" c9 W7 V- D+ d$ b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: }0 Z1 V$ `4 c& j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 O" C( ^! @0 G, T+ p* \# n' I/ T- v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 }) t3 d, x: Z) S/ Y: n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ E6 v* I6 n4 Q. X. H0 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 m# M4 i' j8 T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 D. g, {3 @' T6 b& T2 s9 g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! _6 p. F6 _' U6 z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 b! O9 H" u! m* @2 A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 q8 |/ t$ K3 \: |5 h! \) L0 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: a% a- C. v5 Y( U4 c# J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ k3 N' I- q* B5 R3 w9 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  h, v! s8 T3 g! K" F+ A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  i) J" y) ?. ^; ~' e4 K* k1 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 F' L# e. R2 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ E/ O. y0 k9 K( L' Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# t9 K) D4 Z9 @! T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 v( i0 y8 K' k7 S3 v" c4 s( f 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 l1 y* Z+ O2 Q0 _( t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& J4 a9 r7 p" `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>