【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% ?# t5 ~7 j$ A  S7 r+ hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: }, Y' J+ G* H% ~- W8 @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ g! I+ k- D) r- G8 j( N0 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& [3 P7 C, s5 W% O- |& WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 a5 v6 z/ |$ qI would probably know how you feel
) n; X, H. v; Q" I4 @1 t# n: _, dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ S; u6 b" J/ }9 }& \. GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 l, V% c# d# T3 GIf today isn’t too late,
# Z; p6 o9 F; }1 Z2 B  ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  Q+ h" L4 U1 s3 j8 D( SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ o. U3 N. o- n5 W8 j* a# GLove… just the word love
% p% P1 i+ S6 R7 k  M2 B0 X2 b0 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 K0 W; K% U) w7 PBut I never did
3 m0 ]- x' N4 b" EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ e* J& X/ L6 \: A: b5 O& t: ~: wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% |7 J, ?  i9 X! i) qCan I entrust it to you?
/ b; A9 ~# N+ U# T0 _Entrust my love within your heart
, d% a+ ]/ c0 R. ICan I entrust it to you?
9 O) r0 V; g; H( Q2 MEntrust my love within your heart

! E! w8 X7 u* l6 `4 `! V1 C2 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) ]) E, `& h8 A, K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' b* H) R; d; O0 s9 c7 e5 Y% x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 h8 r, ~1 v3 o# y. Y' X, `* W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( n: J2 ~. G, I" M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 d4 C; I, g! G' r  d" e5 v& v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# U+ g% B+ \( N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: q: F! n/ q& j7 L2 h) i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 y* E0 I: K3 J: t) q$ |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# G: B3 K: ?* Q6 }$ Z& `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 E- s& A! Q2 b6 |1 I3 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  W* R) h6 O/ S0 [* O# K4 g2 Y; F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 V8 m  _( Y/ A0 _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% E6 H1 [$ Z$ A7 Y# Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ Z* Z# Z% f5 u. E& d5 N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# i! W' Q4 q$ a% D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ T9 Z' ^7 A+ }0 ]  @& o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% M; J' ~$ \1 ^8 r0 ]& Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 q: M4 `/ p% H( F- r5 X) n: k0 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 K+ e/ e( g8 r  T4 L  z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% k0 C8 a3 w# r  ]: P1 D  r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 P. M, Y8 U( u6 j2 G<P>但我不会 </P>
/ p- h1 a' ?8 F7 e; G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' m7 z7 a  s8 T9 W  {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 E( ]3 t6 W- A( \9 ~) n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 y' A( p+ c: ~# |7 I/ y- q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 O# M! m! ]+ q% x) l# I  L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# Y. n& N% H6 ?( C' ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 {' g- Q1 P; F1 F( v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 l% I  |% w: j! r$ x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ p2 d1 d) j2 O1 p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) q4 {& e0 o! [0 c% c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  T; q' E: e5 j0 Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>