【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 T* F0 R5 p, `3 c; H+ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, I2 Z6 P9 G, C3 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 P5 }5 A, ~# S* C0 k% }+ m4 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 @0 q" Q- U) u2 H; _; P. sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ u( u; b* l' I  z8 R) jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 ?: l$ [. z+ O3 w5 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& W6 E7 Q% @" i% ~, L, s* dWith such a tongue as yours,
/ ?! h7 h* `) q* _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 y) ?3 @, b9 b( D' ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% J$ C4 t6 a4 E0 S3 t5 ]& [- VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 b- Y. G) a5 g$ h# k9 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, }/ x1 Q  _( p: `( e, G3 K) x) ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( l# K' `. r: U3 K+ a- s" ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 Q4 B/ o% [; N: E$ a' _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& y6 a$ G( `7 C" F9 H, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  u# q/ g4 x9 v8 n" }; I6 f! `3 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 S( K1 m1 b2 g6 a8 r4 A" O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 O/ y7 M, g, `5 z" W$ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; x6 D# V# J1 d* P1 X9 M8 [* G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# P0 i$ n3 G1 ]2 }, m3 J$ K/ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ A, B) P9 c4 M4 m; Y  ?: g5 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 s0 k& T9 Y) z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. p$ B) ~& A% W  L1 m& W+ _  Q$ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ ]. p8 }1 C- y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% r  K9 N- k8 y' j7 ?% G% G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, [; N( Q" {6 j2 k$ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# _+ [3 {& L% C) ?8 w: ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ s% y; e+ N5 g: i7 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, N- L& o, u5 P( A$ o, W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ^6 E: v6 T4 f. A# N<P>I regret not dying</P>
( s7 @# Y' @6 h6 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# u6 R2 s/ c8 @! t$ T8 N( M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% p( `4 O2 L. Y2 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 ?) K8 P! U0 _4 O# u, {4 \& x; n& n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 H% s! N! K1 {/ C- H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& m0 s' }% T1 ^  T9 g* C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" C! a7 o1 {4 O; n  ~/ K- J8 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* b' C3 L# v- z- j$ D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ O6 `% t3 I& N5 @* l0 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ D& K7 N* t2 |! O! ]. U$ N$ ?0 v我请你剖开它

/ a! ^2 O0 c+ X% g8 K2 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>