【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  L4 p) H: y. U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 x0 x# @% T- J0 z! c- q% J  w$ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( A! ^- i: e- TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 N: V+ @7 [5 \& m/ z- AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ U- V3 H) E! n, tI really want to know just how much you love me
+ {8 P8 `1 w6 n! h+ n3 A( B8 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, j* J2 @; p% m5 _2 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ [1 R/ b& e0 Y# ]! E7 @9 bI want so much to see inside your heart
7 M& W/ @' Q  ]& EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. \4 B# _; I6 P5 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 p0 Z. B3 e# a" ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 Z* A0 O9 x; \) r+ [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ L/ x2 Y. Q+ M/ ^& o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# G" d& f$ [, _9 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ~# o3 }1 ]% I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' J8 c+ i* j0 Y* B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, }" x" z3 \1 J$ o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# A7 B& g! j% o+ T: Z9 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ c0 N2 t) @& O; O  b' S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# m  Y) Y4 \* t' e6 S; O% O) a! f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 n' A" k2 x# @$ q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, i9 N! G; T3 B0 f% W/ b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: {& d3 C9 ?+ x( t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 R, @. T. c: B( K( ?5 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 A1 I0 n6 t* L1 S( ~  R! U: c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 y( Q8 F' g1 `. y4 V0 J- v$ Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 N+ \& A8 I, E. E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 z5 U1 C: Q9 m/ N" f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 X& R, i4 K: g- n& G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 X9 U( k' I) `+ G, R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) A2 M+ G1 k: Y: l6 x3 X( S1 P( t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' W2 L. j5 g7 P; v; g+ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, {0 @8 w& P* }0 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* f$ A8 h& `- T3 T% g% n* B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! X% f4 H' y; i! p# T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ N4 _' ]1 {" ~我请你剖开它

# ?3 Y+ b* ?4 w  [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 p; \$ U. Z0 k+ W/ n" v! @6 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>