【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 _5 N- v; V( A8 M; P. Q3 q  SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ n2 c$ \. _) E- U$ v+ w+ d3 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, W, @( X1 |. X: b) V/ B7 q3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ C; t" Y# I& b, {9 q/ f. Q, jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 @2 i5 p1 U% K9 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 D4 E% {- k* Q/ w2 jEvery other word you utter is love
! F! Q  f( L) r/ X4 k  eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 M9 Z0 j# T5 k1 ], NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  J" \  O/ k" t" iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 h* {' Q2 c' S* h" [( nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 A2 D+ X1 J5 q: ]7 K( v8 t7 v+ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" I8 f( s- h( s7 I/ C8 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ Z: h* _5 }$ \% z7 ~2 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% \% s5 P( ?9 G0 _) B7 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" h- y0 P. u6 C% _. w. R9 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  o8 C9 Z$ y# x5 j6 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ?  x4 Z8 C' H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( a: |: ?# I! H. r3 r  W0 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ?' O9 |. |( A! r" A6 M2 y$ ~2 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ [% p0 {4 H; u$ C; p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Q0 z! L" t. v* z. ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# O% N9 d; b% Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ u# X$ f2 H: W3 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% W- g! W1 b% L) v% e4 R/ K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' G- y  c  Z$ S  W2 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) r, S/ n: a7 u/ ?( @$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! G. Y, O, a3 p/ P$ w# N2 U, A' `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 [9 W' M" T0 ~1 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ g' p8 n2 i, t* l0 Z- R% f<P>I regret not dying</P>
' m% @; j( _# y4 [# m& I1 d" _3 r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. x3 ?% E5 b2 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. S  y  J: N* i3 J/ g) T- |, S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ~; g( s  c" i' D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, @! c) M# V; A" B! {. c+ u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 \. U7 ~- V7 X0 _* N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) w! m7 W  D' k0 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ ]; e" j) V3 _& p4 G1 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ~' d+ t* r2 i' K& `2 g( d1 P2 O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. c1 j) _$ H7 f5 a* e; k" K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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