【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- s% ~0 o* H. k% h: f( j5 U7 z' EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) _" x* c' W2 Y4 ?& _% `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 n; O% }1 x2 @# BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 G# j8 F# r% N1 V2 ^; y' ~5 x7 }( h: kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) m3 G* X9 u2 |/ z# nNothing can compare to my love
6 O; _3 _' _7 e9 D+ iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 A* \9 C6 W6 m# [9 I. F% H# Y& PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ A. e0 R7 h' M. a, }# m) R" {$ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: u7 K# k& j4 e9 C9 hI’m still filled with fear
; p5 E# S8 K8 z1 V3 S* \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# n, ?: I5 R( A- _1 R  g1 K7 zI regret not dying
8 k$ v5 r7 o- j4 L+ y$ h9 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# k8 A$ k" t; z* e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ o. E% Y& W4 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. ?4 g5 f1 a$ v" R$ _. k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 T6 A7 E' s" e+ s- @4 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: K2 _: s$ a4 E' N: X8 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ B% P5 ]/ J1 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 L' w, R: |2 c: L9 Y( \<P>你无需担心</P>
1 j( P+ S9 c; v4 c: k5 v$ F+ e& E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" t) i; n+ s) Y9 i: g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! }' v) z/ E, V# t9 t; L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; J) V0 h8 L5 _3 ]  t$ W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ Y* [, A2 R7 J) f9 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; m; x8 d2 N8 \3 P. I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; K5 \3 s. z5 P5 q0 a! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% x4 r; u  @- a; X* G6 w& j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ p: a9 C7 n7 N% k! x+ G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 w7 f, K3 h# B/ y, \# o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# f6 m- s/ V* p$ l% Y0 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 \2 z  f. R3 q! W, [' u/ C4 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: Q' K( y$ _5 X, D/ A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 z$ D0 o7 P) L! Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- @+ O' x6 g& c3 n8 I1 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
* \1 }1 l* j9 h- k/ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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( @$ M& S/ t% J2 j8 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) C4 {: |; z; L  C/ x6 S/ v) E- E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! y+ d: b* r" U8 R0 g, `: x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ~9 I2 o6 j; j. N; L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 n/ [& y) {7 G7 S) B: x) R1 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( r: l7 I7 g$ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>