【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# t. x7 W+ A5 L7 _! X- {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 T! Q: a9 ?: }3 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
! ?  K# k+ F' A5 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 z, ~9 J8 A9 H# CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# u: N3 K% u# kYou needn’t fear anything
. F" {3 R: ?4 ?( b1 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! I" \9 T" o7 {9 YI really want to know just how much you love me
. E" `& @0 ]6 q+ C: x4 u7 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
- h" D3 |: a& d3 m0 f8 aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 o0 J( E$ D3 H8 a0 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& J6 |  k2 x$ YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; `6 S( m" ~" J3 y+ X+ R  y/ B0 f" yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e/ I( O9 _1 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  v3 [# N7 W1 ~2 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; f" C% G/ v7 x! O+ ^+ B( d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( S* K" o6 ]. z* z1 C) x8 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 \6 }3 b7 f* u( b# w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 R' ~, u9 C' i8 u$ a4 A7 h5 Q2 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! b5 ^, h/ u- {* J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& d2 I7 [8 R: B' K8 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: J# \. ]( q3 l: B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% q! K; l9 w& i# h, m; ?2 M  D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 G; c7 d1 v) Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 W6 J! J, `+ T' C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( Y% L8 W, N9 Q0 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& H1 U4 d* i% m$ S" |, z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' t% Y0 e/ [. L8 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 z  ^- C: B4 D' A) X* S6 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 J6 A, h, j" R! K& \+ E& Y0 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% z2 U6 w: B8 J& l; k8 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- N, N% R% v& J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ }. B2 I* r! u6 s% h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& @. k8 x3 I. F" [# |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# `7 Q3 I5 K2 T$ \5 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 F9 P% \8 t1 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' F  _: O" E9 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 \0 e5 U" T3 T0 Y: E2 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* L" ^: w( W1 r  y. g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( f1 ]8 v. k0 K* N: L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' }! r# b$ c1 ^4 F+ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>