【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% q5 L7 g5 U6 t3 V* k2 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
: E: x* H5 ~: S* x% n1 J- kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 T2 Z/ X7 M+ Y' }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( S& J4 C3 s7 G4 ?9 mSeeing the sky content with its love
7 X; ]( J( d( W& g$ j6 S3 x+ GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 `$ ~6 }3 G( J. M/ E( v0 N0 J  fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 @6 ^# N+ w& l; I  EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% X! L% X# C. J/ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; x, L' [4 U% E5 `4 J: L; o) FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- _- K8 P5 _0 X) hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. N6 G3 R. h9 N: l, R* o4 Z; m* UI’m still filled with fear
6 j. b" F, l& b5 O5 m8 ?# e# `/ H9 ?) dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( c- l4 D, y/ N  r0 @: Z4 j* PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* p4 b) u4 x9 a* F+ j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: p( e+ I  `2 T2 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' r0 X0 N, A+ {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* Y+ ~+ E$ [8 e  e# E0 t5 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- |: h: @; }; Y% ]" K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. @( i$ G  w" U0 X* N0 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 N0 a5 x* g) b- v" _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" U( q8 R) E# m1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# a, `% M+ d+ r, C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" V3 S+ y0 j# u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 j, @$ h5 [8 N% k( L4 u: N; R3 y! y<P>你无需担心</P>
) I$ G' n+ L% n  ?3 P& B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* B# o# l5 Z% z+ c& H' |, m, n4 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ?4 c! N3 u' i; _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 M4 r# N1 O! Q. M6 {' G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 B8 K* k( R, ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# B# E/ ~2 G9 j. A( E8 \) n7 O: G% M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& u; G3 I' @" P0 o* ~7 M' N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  w; d6 g6 d; @& ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ X# t/ |* {6 ?0 d6 f% I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; Y. Q0 S  z' y9 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 N5 H2 _" c8 d; e- V: \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& A5 o  W4 z; P/ {% ^$ y' l# i; f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& P" y& p  M) @; m4 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; V9 t" F+ Z- T- |. @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, I( S' A: V, n0 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  ]0 G. f; q# Z0 \2 `3 _9 m) C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) {( j2 U$ E4 A, c2 y/ {9 o1 \* N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" ]* v4 o. P' E( {8 o3 h2 D$ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 P* U* u6 k0 f8 W$ n6 S8 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 W( i) a* H  L1 Q/ J/ t$ i- ~7 J' C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 q, @0 m* c! P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& I! {& n9 g2 U; L# t( z1 S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>