【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 H: A9 f% e& i; k0 Y* X( n# V! T) d: o& JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 T' _# s+ _8 J: f" i1 x% yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ]% A0 G+ l( F5 R. j4 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ U1 r2 w9 ^9 D" o# j4 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; l1 n2 `; x# Y+ \* `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 L0 W7 G4 |2 l  o* ^, k, ^0 KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ i2 A; `& q  U0 B. X; q) U9 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ v8 w& G/ |* a1 I/ I6 V8 t1 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 E5 e8 p. ?. U( d% C( U5 ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: ^# c- }. D1 g7 {: V& S) P8 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, @: g& b; B% e8 a& v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  Z) L0 h$ O5 h8 M" Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ~5 {$ Z% K! Y+ w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 Y/ x4 |$ r' O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! w6 b# \' _$ r3 c* `) U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ~# Y$ _8 U0 _, Y# l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 M' I# G! j! C& P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. d6 O# a0 Y) }# _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% q# j5 C4 S! H4 i& W( l( w, `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 a- f2 t9 y5 X4 n- ^$ k3 U; q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 v) s/ z6 s0 M* q$ ~9 z/ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& g3 |4 D: p! J5 t3 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; B6 g  A3 J1 i( I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, J$ _7 e! ?6 W- E. c6 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Y& y( a$ j$ h: S$ O1 L* O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 o6 f& q+ W1 r- r& ~0 a9 {6 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ G. ~: L/ R  t) m* `+ {6 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! t# \, R4 c/ o6 p+ J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* f  E1 o( O4 c) Q  b/ R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Y* b- ?' h* M# \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ Y: T9 M% A6 ?/ }- D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 q4 `/ j- y  }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
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<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( j' W. ?. z$ Q7 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>