【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

  o+ ^5 y2 D" P, S
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( n8 r1 R6 v' C1 b, w9 o% nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: S$ C$ W; Y' z( i9 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Z# ]3 _! v3 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" A) P$ w. T3 k, S  T7 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- i8 X& N5 s, w8 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 V% r: P# x' R. \; o8 T0 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* U7 C6 E7 X! o8 g' `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: h) }: a( I' @1 O# ~0 l9 x- ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- S# Z3 `4 Q+ x6 r; r& [& c) HI want so much to see inside your heart
% }, ^+ J" A0 |7 `$ \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 w7 `0 N7 T, a$ r- sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' p, k8 b; e) u) d% ]! wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! U- b3 [& b* T: `' GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" e3 L# s, E$ r0 j7 X: z+ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. }, D/ L, m. e  _6 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) w0 n+ d4 y9 V+ M+ l6 ~' f; m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 v7 a. u6 `  T- O5 h+ _) m. r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. z+ m# ?& V: z! u: h2 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 j2 }( J; A# t7 ^. w9 Q* n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 L6 o. ~5 N- e1 ]9 g! |  g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, s% z% u) n$ [  q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ~. q* m, h" J) {, F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- O- G4 e! c. M  c7 E9 b5 i& i, K<P>你无需担心</P>
. t: z( n" n8 k0 d9 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* u# r# o' w1 o( o0 L3 l4 s9 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! o4 j: o  ~% v: l( r- Z. F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 z$ `5 G- D5 q/ p" W- {5 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& O, h4 w$ F% q) m, I# i( w* R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; C1 k" |& I+ V# ], ^) V' X7 q5 i) ~) o4 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 c. j( ]( p. A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. [' [- M# j0 F0 }0 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 H1 k% _" Z% i& s; C8 j" i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" d9 c1 x- C! J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 j5 M" b, T8 J4 g; S& D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: D/ Q6 n2 b9 L3 ~* ^. a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 [! a- ?$ C, E  [$ }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ M. B8 f5 T0 @, f0 p0 S+ X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 T( o6 T  t: h3 l9 G3 `2 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) g) r) ^7 K( @, s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
& q# \: w$ y4 B  e# i/ ?6 u3 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>