【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) l0 [# }! {! C! bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# p2 U- m, H( f/ N; h' L) V$ rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 q! ~; |+ L" ]+ TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! d: j4 q, ~: C/ hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: t0 \, x% Z) c& @+ j1 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 F6 r3 ^, P0 Z' _2 R8 kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! x3 g. C; I" ?8 X4 E+ h/ O' z$ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- k9 F1 T- F- L) a, r" W: f2 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 B- ^5 I. t- Z# m. f  {" w& [( fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! W7 n, [5 Y4 r) ]3 X: g2 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- w5 n2 I3 R( A# X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ m6 R, V# V3 B9 _. [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& H  e! d& b2 \  ]# N. V3 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 K; o: s. G9 S9 C3 O5 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) b( d* O& J6 |  a# o! Z$ T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 F( Z$ m9 U2 K: @8 J, b. A7 }8 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ]6 u3 U- N- Y! C. T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ m, j. |; m  |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 V6 G- Z) k' o, M- S- j<P>你无需担心</P>
0 N; Z  e. @, F( Q# B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 S0 P1 g/ V1 a( O) s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( R) |: g+ Y6 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ X$ _; M! M( q& f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ v8 Q9 t* |1 r: R' X* s8 b' D5 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ n" D/ T' \2 s2 e0 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ B; T' z( Z0 b. n4 E- X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 j" s, I# p2 @( Y* w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) g' V* Q4 Z" B+ K  ~; e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ]# k- R. w& S6 I$ M6 j2 h; K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ S" W) g% g) h$ q3 Z6 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 \1 s; p8 Z5 P2 O# ]8 Q) [# S; [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& u& @2 E# V; G+ `) C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* e: T& S- ?" P# m0 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- M; {5 f6 Q1 g6 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; |5 F) K% ~. P" x: r+ A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& U" g* [7 F# d) {% e+ f& ]* F% l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. \3 m7 F, \: \) C5 e& q: [5 r0 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( g: |* o1 g2 g+ }5 Y& ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 T3 b# r$ y8 P/ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 {2 j/ ?9 q' D6 w+ A. W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 a$ L$ H8 P8 ^0 ^1 B( V* \: J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! z- F& I) g+ g6 k% q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>