【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 q2 n! T8 l% o) k9 H5 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% o1 [; B3 r. W% p9 [2 S9 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, x1 P7 D/ S# v2 m* |Seeing the sky content with its love
& ]  x1 C% s0 V7 C7 N% xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ ~1 J0 Y( J2 r! U/ B5 U/ t% cI really want to know just how much you love me
. o# T: S: Z' F8 M1 gI love you I love you with all my heart
# e; a* V1 ~  ]3 n" }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 L, F% z  e* q2 w8 `2 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ l7 b! h/ L- L* f/ _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 W. s' U4 o  p$ E2 EWith such a tongue as yours,
' `4 ]6 l) g* [8 w. e' D6 Q) bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 M7 q" r) m7 p9 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& o3 o, J/ x4 o' u, _/ `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: M" Y2 }. E/ {* ~: H+ a2 P5 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ K7 X/ v* k8 M( X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 D% `! W. o& j4 t; p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 h% ]% {( D, Z0 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 I0 ?! x2 ]8 o" ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  B/ J7 b$ ?( d2 ?, j8 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 F* N2 N+ @7 H5 [, V7 V: H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! k  Q) f, z" j6 k0 C0 b% x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 x0 G( C8 C6 }: H& d+ e8 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' r4 n+ j, b: x) G7 _, j7 O* F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( a% q; y3 ]8 n3 _8 s" e# O+ A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! @2 W$ j2 F1 T0 J# h& j4 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! _* z: h  }" G' o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% t) B% b2 e0 `3 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& t  s: D# Q- S0 c; `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ^  y$ k) P- ^# L# Y/ i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* q, Z4 S; H* B  m' D; ~) D0 L3 o: }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Z+ C2 T- L- L& t/ o" e+ r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 m- i( A) C3 ~/ n% p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, C( V. T+ n" \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ B: F% _- x! D! T! n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ w1 Q( D7 H7 ?! N+ `% c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ Y, ?* n: B9 a- Z2 u; q' C" m% O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, w0 _  f6 S8 v: }. q6 c' T$ s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- F8 |1 y. |' c! m8 A9 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& D% X& R/ P5 b/ t" o. V6 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Z! r9 l6 x5 c  [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>