【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ X+ ]- v* E/ b: ]. `! i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 X; i# ~  }. x  Y  tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 `0 Y& _: n. n4 T/ wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 @/ V9 ?' H) [! L& |& _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ d9 n- g2 n" \I love you I love you with all my heart
) E- l1 G0 c& y6 r: p* u2 ZNothing can compare to my love
0 M- Y, Y; M+ Y9 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# T8 ]% Z) I4 w+ V( y; t! ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. z# E7 V% c$ T3 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( s' t% F3 B# MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! e3 [0 A3 f% U2 L4 k* e3 ^: WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% j5 {* T0 Q. c- O2 Q# DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& l- t& `7 U8 c3 y' Q3 W+ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ ^, c+ P0 H% s  z  E- i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 [5 w# @5 S# [$ ]/ ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 g0 G* U  [; R3 Y  a1 c- A* M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 S. V' a; e: n0 Z- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: D0 J1 T! n; I' t" U# c9 Y: [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& K- S$ Q0 J* j' E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ]: P4 u! c8 v! K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 t# y, n6 X0 C* H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 E# \- [2 E0 ?' J4 g( r+ g- y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ m$ ~' S; ~  q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" S5 Q9 d( [9 E% ~. Y5 Q7 |/ G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 W+ A+ R0 ]" f+ I& M$ H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 ^0 ^, v2 g- W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ m/ `2 T7 _/ r5 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, {* c- K* g9 B; J  i8 ]+ V. k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 |' M: V9 V2 g' Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: r3 S( x' l" q* F% I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* z: ?# ]1 C8 ~7 Q3 l+ P5 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 l/ j/ _9 P+ w* Y. L3 M4 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- q3 L8 B" b; u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; K" f! L6 l5 o8 e. C: D  z% B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, k6 D+ l. @8 r+ E! B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ q- }! ^5 g, N. u) H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" V' Z$ ?& ~8 z  {& O2 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 K* S; _5 x" M6 z4 U" x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ m2 D# x; e: c5 H6 w$ X( i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 H: L' X: S7 p3 b+ ~, e# q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 r& h: q  e# R# u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 Y( {" R7 J8 `3 e5 U我请你剖开它

4 X; u# I3 J. B0 e% j( v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ o# F' d7 T% i2 q- z! z0 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>