【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ F  I2 M0 Y) ?( qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 f- d) o9 y" `$ }2 ~+ w) uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' y# u6 g- T- J# L  A* q/ \/ \4 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* W; l) c) z0 e% hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, m6 i7 P& b( OYou needn’t fear anything
  ]. X) G% m! ?. x# o  m& kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% H# I5 H2 D9 O) l! e" UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 t  l1 o; z, f: ONothing can compare to my love
. j# P, v0 ]6 l) j% P4 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 p* _) l& S( R; P6 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 U6 N& W0 [/ _' HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ _+ H8 M' P+ }5 o9 b- M& c! hI’m still filled with fear
2 k1 {" S( L  K9 C; Z" QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 x* ]' E2 r) zWith such a tongue as yours,
' p! y5 w# H0 |: J1 a: Y3 L% cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# Y3 x3 ]* H$ e8 _* u7 K8 \6 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- a7 t( T, k0 {3 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! h; u; h, c( W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 ~9 n; n- ]+ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& S2 g( n3 x6 d2 c: ]0 X. \4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 i2 R/ E* {& y! a3 J4 |+ A9 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& N/ S* u8 @1 M: }) X* o% q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# L. }+ m. e. q# c5 W' E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 x+ U  Z8 W+ t9 `: y% g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ~# W' l) _  R7 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 `2 q8 Z, l! W4 D6 Z" Z4 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 |" ^# R$ r6 Q9 Z3 h+ c: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, E1 R% w" q5 \: v3 k9 [& K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ e& [3 l- p  U* ~5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 b7 ?4 u0 B$ U8 P9 s% Q- G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 f' ^6 D9 z6 B; [" x4 a- J/ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! m) H3 M3 W9 Q0 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& {" u0 d: u8 J5 c2 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- @" d. q( H# l" t, n/ M, J3 N% }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) C; u/ w! E: Z) [# T9 ?4 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% |; T; G' r0 ~4 w& o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, W3 {% L) ~! a5 }7 P2 P  Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! d6 J* U  H+ D% }: W; i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- [/ U4 e: n8 c0 o: L4 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( q  N" J' c5 t8 A& `. t6 o' C% j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. n8 H9 s& b3 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Q6 i  g" W. k* S& [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: q8 j" O9 [! X2 }7 n7 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 P1 y- _% N3 \2 s* b; L5 f7 B: V/ G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Q( `  h  d' X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 s- O- I$ r+ w, q% H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 r8 s  D6 K+ k2 B9 f! G, Z. S6 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" y. G$ h" T8 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' n& X" o0 e. _& A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c( e7 n0 `4 P$ L2 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>