【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ G- I1 p' {3 }" G1 I! R' J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" ~8 L5 V9 O1 O$ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ?" ?* O! F' t( @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; _) j1 w0 B: |, ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' R* F2 D& e. g" V1 `8 lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 F1 b' i  n7 N4 N) K8 dI really want to know just how much you love me
) D' w! @2 r' \* u: }9 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 P# T2 W) P! @. t* UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 c0 M  a* U- i; T6 ^) OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ P$ w; g# V& UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' C( t/ u* O# P2 ~9 t3 |8 v3 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ h* N  m5 h% j  F7 ~5 k  ~" VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' i3 Z& d. R! X5 g& U. S7 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 u3 i  m( ~1 {/ S  d( E5 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' D+ F! v0 p* W$ R/ g! r; L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ]6 m6 g0 k. ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 j' R; ?, r; ^0 r/ P3 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. P' h; G$ H7 m" U7 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) o' B% p5 g) K$ q4 a/ S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: O8 P$ o. m: c0 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 l+ f& K2 S% `+ h! O* N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ]& D& n0 V- S; P. Q6 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) }& t: d. R4 |! S3 T2 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, i2 A7 C" [( [: u! W* ]4 S* c$ x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ~  G+ f3 s. P0 t! `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 ?6 I: f+ B8 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ |" Q' m& p7 V4 }6 [1 I1 Y2 `9 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 a$ E9 s0 Y! i9 f6 q( _- F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Q7 m+ c" B- b2 ?. R6 U( `* ]# e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' m. r+ }7 H. L* N4 ^4 z9 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ]3 [6 d" F5 c7 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 M( |; D. k& r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, p8 X/ }3 j5 k1 O) v0 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" E5 A, k. g* \5 J8 X; w' n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 W) Q3 Y( S9 \& z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ N, U- W7 {' |5 p9 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 _% n5 E7 a% H* c  Q* p0 w+ H/ E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 U2 r, [" G6 j* y( P& c* e/ Q  O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>