【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& d+ M, j" x7 W+ \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" n' B4 ?+ m# M: F% JThe sky is happy down to its soul
  \+ E) m; o; @( {" QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& y* }0 y& `# A0 K: ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, r1 l2 L" t6 v+ K6 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ P. X- q/ r, N, xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ d! N- R) n% V2 ^0 D8 u) Z" Q. i* U' D5 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 J" ]  Q0 v" y( kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; \; a+ M0 P" q) L$ \& Y+ [' R& w8 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 V3 W  @7 X5 Z6 k$ EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 K4 n3 J: h# N% T6 S3 K" `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 i$ Q; n& ?. y. R! BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( p9 d! u# c9 ?$ g* j3 P3 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) j7 \& U* j! L4 {" G% U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 [# S: l; d7 ]8 ]0 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ S' }- z3 T" m2 c) L2 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! J7 U1 D6 S( p' N/ g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 Y  S8 ?+ \( Y  p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, H7 d4 U5 P( C) |8 x- G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 D4 P* E  \/ N5 M5 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. g) J* U; a2 k, n0 S4 n: a# c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' A- h. ^2 Q6 N$ _6 m<P>你无需担心</P>
- X6 s; A. ?/ [; k; w: q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- P' e- H$ X. q2 i6 d5 J* d/ G* i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 ~) ~, [& B6 M# r& R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: {1 W: I8 a3 c- ?# N2 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 }& f; O( Z9 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 K/ G6 T7 G9 Y* E7 a+ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 D' N3 d: Q  F5 S  v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 B; O/ {- m; R- d8 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 }1 H2 N7 z9 b: z$ D4 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; S. M3 H& T' }  m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; V* V( W% n: F  o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 b! Z  a( a9 I! n/ I& \% ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, I8 S+ U  p5 u( J: u5 E- h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' K5 l; e# B& ?1 {5 A% k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 O6 _8 p8 l- J8 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 o: {; {1 T6 W6 p3 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ h; z) {( @! f' S8 X$ a% u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" k9 z& {. o* B! M* S6 O  q* W" Q. A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& w4 S2 U( j# S1 M) E$ D# J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ R) k  J! Y/ @0 D& @2 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) `8 U" X- x& {0 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>