【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ `, @% W1 u3 u' Q9 `' ^4 F0 d5 F* rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' V9 D2 G  X; `% o1 VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& m* g  r, v& PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 d( J' J& ^# c- V, u% IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# X, \- d" q) b; P6 H' c1 }. ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- R8 x0 P: i9 D2 [+ ~1 H( O. j, fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% \7 i. ]; C$ @6 q( eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' W: g9 [  s+ y. c& y$ |I’m still filled with fear
: d' k3 ~4 n6 E6 G0 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' M0 P5 T& R- W( f1 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 O5 e( Q3 }" `8 x# aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ^6 q6 F' W1 r$ z% ~8 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ~+ g7 R4 S2 y; }, t. i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  w0 L& }+ P% E2 }7 v2 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* T. Q- Y! \; e9 }* Q& ?0 j8 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ S3 j7 H4 ~/ X  M4 i; A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- t# C: D. C: Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) D; i2 u3 g' a- T! b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! [; \' A6 r$ O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 U5 W& S4 x8 E  v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ v, F  e+ ^$ M; T8 W1 o; f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 C8 ~$ b- i6 E- o! @<P>你无需担心</P>
& ^5 J5 l8 i' U+ Y* [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 z" L* Z% i, |. l9 R3 m  o% u4 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ^6 ^9 I# Y" f8 G; ?8 n8 L7 t2 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 \2 Z3 B( j/ J$ y, @. s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 }5 f" k# O/ n" r8 \7 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 B8 I/ t8 w- m: ~  H2 T( Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) A9 V) k9 v( T4 R0 R0 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) C9 n& F, ^# n" v& U: m; J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j. T$ O, Z' a- `- P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( m4 \9 K5 h5 ~: N1 V5 m& _# Y- _9 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ C' b# X- h$ ]  e) G9 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ o% O7 C# @8 W' j! ?+ [& Q( e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) V* c0 ~! {6 B! o$ J" C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* y. r! S0 e- t# r5 ?7 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; H- r9 N' n7 g/ |% W8 T; K8 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" n# o) @: p0 K' b+ b& W2 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 k7 `* y( Z" P- w9 ]3 O' @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 J' B; Z* V3 |! Q% |, ]3 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>