【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) y: Z! a, I7 \* \  [  rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- W& F( s' p  Y; R6 v, _4 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 d4 k& V+ k- \0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
% j- ~" S2 e0 l! M9 FSeeing the sky content with its love
* j3 c! T- j  ^9 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- @( A* h% W% ]5 }: p$ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 E* Y) H, o8 K; l( [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& G- _4 v7 w, y" N! V% o# l* xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# `% y9 K8 Y( y; P& g# e! r) pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 e0 P. l0 H8 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, c' U, w. S0 [. D4 b7 \% WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, m" b$ l, t$ L3 r# p# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( w5 s) |/ M# o- `8 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ i0 \% a" K: q/ u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- g! }3 B! g8 D4 ^% j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; z3 ]  @, {( d# o+ M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Y' v4 q# ?7 Z+ K2 d. p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; Y6 C) k+ u, R8 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 \% s4 A1 Y4 g! u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# e* J( r- Z/ m! q/ I1 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% F. ^: T  u1 ^+ |3 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ?3 l+ o* T" W& k) ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* h+ u; \2 g- a! }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 y9 q) _9 l9 R/ m/ Y' J$ ]' G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- |- _  F7 ~8 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ N2 D' A: S* y2 }. W: M0 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! G# q) U, w8 H. |" l* j# o7 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ o; @/ g/ }0 y% q9 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& x0 m& |5 z0 F3 [0 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; h, K5 B/ i/ w. q0 Z0 M$ L8 c9 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; a- g5 K& S! Q: N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ {, B& p, _' x# |% f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 W3 o  F  F$ V/ W/ s: i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) i2 |  M/ i+ H; _* U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 ^, O8 J4 h6 C# z0 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" p+ X$ }" ]6 B# ?' g: e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  }/ x  Z- P" Q9 J2 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>