【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 l" G$ _- J( Z  N! E" v9 g. K6 |7 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 m6 y2 i" Z; Y' \" EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 k* |/ l5 Q5 d+ U5 O4 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( D! q/ K- R' Z0 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ L3 E: O! M: a* A# u( vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ d. M2 j) O# f5 i3 J, ^4 G# DYou needn’t fear anything
0 f% Z8 i7 k9 X0 I5 P/ N3 ?% pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; @: W5 a6 [1 n. ~I really want to know just how much you love me
! |# T2 Z' I7 e% N" u" ~( v* LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( Y2 i" z+ E! h4 d4 E2 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ M' E0 O  A. n* a* BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& F6 E$ l8 A/ j/ a. Y& @+ T9 yI want so much to see inside your heart
! Y1 o+ c6 o6 h; G! n% kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) P4 |( {1 {6 n+ [  S9 T! eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- Y# i6 n$ H7 v: J9 z( H* @I regret not dying
% ^; e' u1 c- ?( j- J: M3 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: P/ V/ _& w; ~: L' J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. p! `0 r3 W) l% z$ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ R2 X9 z) N. @- [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! F3 D2 I3 J. |2 ~4 `, f6 Q& \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" m$ h5 R3 ^9 p. C) i; B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ?- D: U7 s/ P" I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ f' B2 X& U" z1 s, C; x* v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' F/ S) j, n8 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. q9 t% k5 ~) |) A/ d! _) \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  g5 G$ C8 m( b' \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  a& R% ^& w9 ]6 ^  S; X# ^<P>你无需担心</P>
4 J) ]- y) P9 j% `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 T8 l# d! o8 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 t) j# l7 ~, @  J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 w/ k6 E( R1 m' D3 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 \4 G5 @6 T1 X) M' W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ G  O: g& z) b' w& x& \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 e, m! F9 ^+ O8 q% t8 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! a6 n/ _' d& ?: L. S+ G; i0 r* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& N) S8 b  F. B3 c9 z: V' v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& T1 j; D! x: a* g) ^0 W7 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 A/ \$ }; s0 l6 }$ f4 G0 h* D( b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! h( k. @0 l/ l! T; l, T9 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 E  {/ i) Y* y; h/ z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 j/ d# c0 g6 P3 T* v" K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( J6 Z1 N, D1 ]) a: ^) [3 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 e; g6 P* }, P& m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 Y8 Y  l9 u4 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) J7 g. u7 B1 `  i9 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ~; E" t+ J' d6 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 g5 e" e; P3 f; t7 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>