【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# w' M' L* Q+ r歌词我附在后面。
. y: l4 {: V5 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) r  v& a/ N  ]) e6 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: S" j1 L  l0 J7 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: t! I; E. r8 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 m$ Q! h: P1 YWith the moon kissing it every night
7 v: N. a" X' D6 C9 X& _6 KSeeing the sky content with its love
9 t5 s8 o* R( w" \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 A6 k. Y  Y2 j' L: @" QEvery other word you utter is love
) k- x2 u0 `( Q7 U7 VI really want to know just how much you love me
- C" j8 j( _  O; II love you I love you with all my heart
$ \: l7 D/ U- j1 T3 Z. H; ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% k$ @: p1 }2 d3 U& oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 q. m5 j( B5 FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, e5 O: I& q5 G) CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& w5 W! y# O  ?4 R( _) o0 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 R/ l% r7 E, M9 v  l& I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Y/ S- `8 `+ F: h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 s3 z% S  Q) l5 Q& ]! C1 a5 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) ]! P7 _8 o( l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  }$ o" m% l) k2 y+ ]/ ]8 C: b) M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ?9 Q1 @# Z' Z2 W4 M( y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) P! U$ @$ u7 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: f3 r3 @1 h' U. d; w6 G+ i& m0 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ H) |1 }) w0 n0 U7 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 n6 u, o# F$ p, W( @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! a4 ?0 i1 \3 v4 N) G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 E  q- h- |) d0 H  T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; X# q' f) n/ k( V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 W- ^. R0 Z3 M! l  x& W1 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ c- n4 E+ _3 D; w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ f: y9 \, _4 E! _& L. w4 E2 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- u! J9 ?2 a8 s6 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# W& W* W$ q) R* V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ~* N. k! U0 d; [: \6 e# {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 A: N. K" R; V* G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ]( ~  a6 f* B# i9 q( N5 @/ U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 S+ V8 M+ P" \6 A, v; k. }0 f; z6 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! H8 x1 S4 q) J+ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 y& }+ P# |9 t" ]0 J* e- W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 j% I2 c2 F2 x$ ?  f) s  t  O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: n( m! a; F7 v' z$ V! P# L2 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* J" J: C+ \; v/ |- u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. L) _  A  v- r( H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 r- {4 E4 d7 o! [& _) T, _* g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. i: g' d( B8 q- Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>