【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 f/ Z5 ?, [9 m* p, o  e歌词我附在后面。
) n& {3 E) X5 k+ r7 y4 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 q2 L( w# E7 c6 B. uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 m0 p% M- E( RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( G; N& h0 r# H* fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 F# H/ P/ M# E+ s+ ]2 PWith the moon kissing it every night
5 ]7 W) A: g. U& ISeeing the sky content with its love
6 x0 L) K, [( c) X$ g6 E5 ~' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- l2 `" T. H' a  U3 s0 C3 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ Z7 W0 \9 H" ]9 p5 Q" sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" i1 \+ ?7 Y! G  k' M' e  z9 W5 ~) wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  s, s2 N4 F! z7 z( ^& g0 F1 D, FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( C: L% t+ Q6 w- DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 A1 K5 d+ ~1 u1 F8 E# bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 J3 `9 [& H2 t$ t8 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# m) g3 I3 l) Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* s1 {" d' k/ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 i9 S- T$ U1 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 H. b3 ]. u7 }$ W: S; o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 z. }) E$ R8 {; Z$ A: }: i6 I7 ~8 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 A. U) O, x- Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- P& }1 D0 ]( G. ~" i8 I: c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 p9 F2 s" k9 a, ^' T, Z/ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: q8 D& X! L! h& o  J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ z& f* x8 q1 ^1 O" ^1 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# I2 K0 W( J  |7 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- V5 i" }; u+ }* v" z$ b! Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 G0 E$ Z4 \3 j+ L% w2 b* J5 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Z8 J: H; {' p) ~+ ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 @) I( [! G/ _! F4 I2 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: s6 T" K- a" P; [6 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! m6 t9 k8 d* a6 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 c# Y! M) \9 h" `$ L* }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: _2 r& U$ j) a9 m) m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 `( `; b  y& m. n4 C6 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 W2 I9 X0 j  h& ~, n, L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 j9 ~+ j" Z4 ^  n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Y  M8 M2 E4 m' M) F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. X) M1 o+ I% I+ x. J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. j0 S; Z( ^. j" a- D* C! U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ P2 `% X9 O2 p7 E2 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% `! @" ?$ A) j8 T# @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>