【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& ?2 b& f% h) M- R: YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* V8 ]& P" z+ X) t: @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. |! m+ u) o% w2 I) |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: C' X3 j- q4 }# E: M: HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 o, Z: y  w1 p; O& i" \! ]$ v  ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- r, L+ V# G' l) @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) S: _, }, T1 D/ CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 D% Q+ H7 {$ _# n+ O$ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 h" M0 f# J2 x" c& h5 F8 K# |0 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 h9 |, @- T+ ?$ f/ s% ], b3 j! `  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 Q  t, |7 }3 d7 V. U- M, N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: \3 f3 ]' Z8 j2 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( U$ ~4 F, z: B; V6 S2 a- \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 k( W4 @( q! x! Z1 p; O8 ~+ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ ?# ~. O3 B+ T0 `1 l5 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) _# ]2 _1 R+ \& |+ h5 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 b$ B8 b& w4 ~5 I" z# ?  U  n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 v* z  U- E5 b6 l( \  Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ {& e/ u% l& N0 m% z3 F6 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& I1 e9 h5 e0 l& W' T/ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* J4 W/ W' w+ t& {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- U6 q7 S2 }1 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# E1 f2 N* o( V: J7 W3 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 M8 W3 _* s3 S: H" N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: P( z! r5 C' A& o. m4 Q* c% E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 n8 O, R3 Q9 {( X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: w3 b2 R* e) \4 X, r' g) ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 |) d# x; N. j& C! c+ `1 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  g- A& U# H1 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 d3 u; a9 Y" Z  w  s( i/ p9 _3 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 s+ K7 M) Y7 T1 }1 }$ _4 g" m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 f1 V6 L8 S6 g" a; a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ y) n/ [7 @7 m  r, ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( N7 B2 N2 o. i1 B% f. w! ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. u; `: A3 e) K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 y  x5 X) l; j3 z$ P3 F5 }+ t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 P8 Q- t; I) z. T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ]. U5 W, A3 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  }7 Y5 R; H! P2 g8 D3 Z8 `* k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 W4 Q  f; X3 a4 Y) D8 R$ \- @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>