【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 o; M9 F' \+ M# X! Q2 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 \& H7 g5 j2 A& L! V, w4 Q! k% QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& b' t+ |/ W, `2 o- l, D3 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ?- Z, T/ H" @: Z+ M1 N3 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 O0 |7 P6 h4 QWith the moon kissing it every night
+ r( k! {; u8 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ ]% X, U3 b. V, Z4 A6 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" U4 \% W* l  r# W. m$ e" {5 FEvery other word you utter is love
! M4 S$ B' p6 H1 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. x6 ?3 h/ r! f4 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: s. B/ r" |9 p  V2 ~& `* c; ~  g! {I want so much to see inside your heart
  t) j" O2 @" K4 |' LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 F6 B3 E. ]/ ^$ R  ~: a' d* d( MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" {6 H3 D6 H7 r" D) E+ zI regret not dying
# f# i" ~% o9 ?* jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; A  k8 N9 B9 ?With such a tongue as yours,
* g: r  w3 B9 {+ r; p- J; b( DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 I; q( H- ]( ^' f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Y5 v4 _+ }5 Q6 m' Y2 }) {9 J1 A8 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 U  r1 _/ w: R/ S3 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* b2 K9 a) L, A. b  d; m% `/ [! Q8 h9 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 \4 W% T8 H5 t: X( Z  N- S* `% R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 f6 O6 Y5 K* f, I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 y, b- q/ U. T4 I7 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, L$ _2 o2 n4 x6 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  g' g% a4 ?. T1 f1 S% q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 [' J+ b7 t4 u! Q  @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& D5 c. O& ?2 E9 m8 ]8 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' A- [# i- X2 C' F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; U% M9 P  [( v: h: l  \# ?+ _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ R( @8 o& }) [8 I7 z  b+ m1 e( a# D& [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, h$ ]2 j- E2 b) j0 {5 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 |; Q1 p( V# M* P2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; G, p0 N2 a0 O, ^7 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 V$ M+ I7 ^* l: t4 K! {4 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: B0 N! ~# u  G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) m( ~( m" @0 z+ N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 a$ T  m4 W: q! X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 _5 v% r. {+ U. h8 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* E" K6 V5 o- e* _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ K* `7 W, k2 v3 W' }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 J1 }: C& T7 i. [5 w8 U  f) ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 w4 D; E; I2 _' r0 u8 Y: o! Y! [2 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: e: `% _/ B( d! d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  B* f; n( _1 x$ u' L! s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) i* c0 o( l8 m6 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
& K. R" V( e+ t! v6 U6 Y3 e' ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 T+ i9 j# u3 E# o$ v1 U$ {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 i$ U; k( G* F1 M4 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 p9 \" g: I& J$ j& ?2 `3 l- V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 `6 F  I6 ^3 V- c8 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' t6 L2 ^6 J* d+ m; M- J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" E- i, V2 t# `  j( H% L  w! q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>