【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 ~) i5 d5 q% {! EThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 z# F; i) c2 @& f. B! j1 b/ C5 k8 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 o5 c* `! v" k: Q* F1 q8 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  Y4 w3 S7 H6 ?2 N: p7 d3 |1 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! H0 S' G8 W% f% _; `6 h( yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 \& u; ?& T# f) r- E" bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- E* d! e. o6 o' dI want so much to see inside your heart
, L5 Q0 N# l! Z* m1 M* s* NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. I: B; m" v9 W1 Z* _1 AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: b' P; A* B+ J$ T* QI regret not dying
+ N- W( W, ]+ f0 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, \0 z5 u- X6 O6 F) LWith such a tongue as yours,
$ q1 H2 n7 G/ K- IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 t* }$ H- Y7 u$ S( ^" W% ^8 U+ YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 p/ Z$ G$ v' H/ f; `1 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ W8 o1 S- v# j6 g4 c& L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: e* m; d4 |: z1 ]  [) Q7 P. p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# W" E2 F7 t( L' Q; T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Z% I2 }' E! U, l1 U2 U! E5 j9 M* C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) c9 p% ?$ Q. n% w# p0 W: q. t+ A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ f  \' P: S: Q& r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% [. M5 r& T" @7 W# ?) s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ i  b. ?  f$ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% d9 `9 U: f0 H5 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# X8 K) C- {% P. ?( B4 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ T, ?: Z% r6 X% S9 e: P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" S5 E2 I: A' m" d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( v1 q( g7 I# h# K7 A- p# O, s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 k) N2 G8 \4 e* K7 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 x* D: q2 a6 ]' q1 z2 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# B$ K! q$ R* n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 `5 D- v+ m; u' ^* m1 ^5 j1 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 c5 f6 [( p4 s$ E" S7 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" j1 |4 v8 e3 h( @1 x6 L' b" r& D& P5 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 z8 V' x2 b. v$ o% H2 [6 v, _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 o9 f3 x( y7 c; x+ R, z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* w: o$ c# R/ Z2 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 O+ C* W( T; D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 E1 E& m; H8 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- u( F4 c2 Q7 S& R5 f4 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# _2 J( D" E. E- k# H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) h0 j7 O1 a, M/ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ K( @* I( B! F, A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>