【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 q* ?, o) I) K3 g$ |$ t& Z歌词我附在后面。
4 ~) {6 e5 b; ^, M3 W" sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 w% ~6 H6 p) {: }$ o$ Y7 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 k' ^% }" S  a3 [- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% m# T) E0 p7 b( g* H. Y( t2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* r% |, V" ~9 [8 }; EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 a6 J/ s3 Q0 H, A- G1 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- Y- [2 q- r) I7 a, G  x( j% XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% v: T$ J% i/ N4 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' I5 V; ?6 r0 n# @8 o5 x* yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- S# q; A) ]: [+ J1 B  b) pI regret not dying
& q/ y+ s6 w" sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 W0 j) U) e! v% @; qWith such a tongue as yours,
8 t) _! T3 C$ s) D/ `* T, _, PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- {3 u0 q. S4 x: CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ |7 Y) c, U. R/ |/ p3 O$ z3 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ B# Q3 T- ~  Y- B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 D+ l; R: t/ U% G3 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) ~$ ^0 L- S. ], N8 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' v4 e" h9 O) O+ n8 L( \! l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ E6 @" A/ W3 h0 O1 Z( M# H  s, r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 G2 d% x1 f  n( A/ a& }- @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- r1 R  f0 A! m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% |& i- d5 \" A" ?! z- v9 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" o  Y, j% E' @3 ]# i7 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, d, q& d& @1 y' K, {9 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 l+ v: E& t% Z' |+ N) b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% w* A0 e) f! C$ D7 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 i% d0 T& S8 C; F  }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. E" F8 G* L. j2 B3 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( ?3 A* f# S# m& m- x3 q: k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( i3 `  \6 h* }( k! t/ ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 i! a3 i  F3 @: y, O$ e& s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 M% }5 Q% w8 v2 \* E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 x. a+ U  O/ f6 }3 _$ t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: H4 W8 G- k/ `% x; w3 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 Q# \4 v* ^# ?2 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 x( A( B- G2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 v- Q0 q6 B$ Q5 r" L4 b我请你剖开它

, h; e" i  N- W, n3 l& R5 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: F' w9 w& q. U/ A7 C. X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>