【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& X/ W( Z, M5 ]/ q" DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* M: q- F0 t) r' M" kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ V7 l( `) ?0 ]  P' `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. I' F# f4 ~4 sEvery other word you utter is love
/ E0 V; U% C3 e8 j! cI really want to know just how much you love me
+ Y& B7 x" O% e& S, N8 S6 aI love you I love you with all my heart
+ O% _) E! a6 N* `( V2 zNothing can compare to my love
1 {4 [- D1 g3 q# T' x" VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ g9 u/ x/ H! fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. C5 C. Y5 _% k( b( |' j/ N9 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% W# W1 V2 N3 |& NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: y: k- K7 @: S0 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. w3 r+ y$ l3 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" `/ c) C+ g" jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( J0 m$ i9 [7 c* |/ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 q. Q3 x: @1 f; g) o, a; B( J" g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 F  E6 I+ G4 J- n* M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ G; {) q/ q$ m0 h. i5 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 N8 l5 }- r+ ^& d# S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 g$ g% v1 c% s/ @, Z# e0 `/ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& O& E1 y( i8 u9 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% e  t% X- r; h( d; c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 m4 L# d% C  @7 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, _) X& y0 g. I( F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 d/ a  }- r+ m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! d& X$ M# ]6 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 z7 u1 q" n$ Y5 [5 H* w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% ?1 A: E- |; t) t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! t4 g- K& U6 P: x, F7 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. K) K: i. M4 ?9 t+ o! Z; |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ^) x; H, ]! N( U0 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Y9 v+ Z: m+ [7 b* r3 O0 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 H/ E6 q  P) h6 m( b# G1 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* [7 `; S# Q" z" a6 C& D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) W1 x% J: L6 ?3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  J. E& P8 o$ R+ f" `8 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* S  q: C5 X* G! H: r2 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 m5 _. e; ^& @) K6 n8 }0 q5 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q7 j: y1 o" |  C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ x: Y5 R" c" a! G3 Q/ S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" {7 O1 R2 e$ z0 f7 }7 e" A7 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>