【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! l# O( j9 o+ |& L. _. a  i1 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 j+ Y8 w1 G2 J4 f$ R! k3 K: kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 K9 Y' m; D  O) `" W+ p, sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 u- w* N, `: ~/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 z7 `- f+ d9 f* H( C9 h9 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 N5 V+ Z1 j: ^- S5 c* L8 a6 `. o; SYou needn’t fear anything
+ Y; l2 Q! x) m8 o% P: CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" B) J$ `/ u3 G: Z6 |$ QI love you I love you with all my heart
) A+ U" m4 H! q$ d! CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 ~( o" C, T( EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 x2 a3 g/ k: N9 L* R) h0 r8 o5 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 o$ I; f7 @$ C6 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) N7 p/ |7 U# i8 v8 O" u, qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 g$ O1 g- `7 y0 F0 _6 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 }: B7 b+ Y; A" K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 B5 V: o) l0 `0 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- B1 G4 G! |% p) ]& F" e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 b8 q4 t0 h4 y. M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 u" s1 |! I6 u- K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( P8 n( _) n9 C+ w% [0 o9 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% z0 i/ C+ [, Z- i& K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  z: Z1 d5 N7 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 t. H" s7 y) X5 K0 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& m( g( g0 H+ n5 n0 ]( ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& f, c" _3 Q! \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 P& ^4 y/ A* ]/ J( ^+ [# Y) a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. M) r# w( O. d/ F( T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  r. l  U7 j; I: I  I# a+ M8 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ]7 P% S2 D3 Y+ [  J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ D+ l! p* h& M: I4 }# }4 C9 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# P% ~3 f* C! V  T( v" t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- ^! o3 n+ k; x* a, b6 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# b8 y0 u6 ~- F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% U8 ]& k' q; @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' B% p/ U$ ?/ l9 Z3 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 {4 t# x, Q# g+ N6 v* [% x& g. f& M/ t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  m9 R; l& ]" F3 G- Q( E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ i7 |0 S2 r: |2 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  l! M) u" Z9 ~! k, w" l$ ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: j! s5 q2 f6 F; Q+ l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>