【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* F3 `. T& d& @. |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 o# |1 K+ e# |* _. Q8 |: B2 d& Q* f+ TThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 A6 b' k% f& g  uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% |% w  F) e& M' a. F2 \+ eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& Q# o5 b- T4 s0 X+ r0 H# h1 nYou needn’t fear anything
& O4 k) @; A" D- ^1 {  S3 Z4 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# }& H4 _+ s$ d7 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 X0 c/ I" M0 K) L1 [3 PI love you I love you with all my heart
& t" U( z0 b7 E6 U' ZNothing can compare to my love
) Q9 `& V- U8 y  O4 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" i2 l& u( F) ~/ v- k: w0 ZI’m still filled with fear
8 L2 T; R  a7 c, e/ A0 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! r+ R7 K( a! Q5 I/ v; Z1 ?1 SWith such a tongue as yours,
' F0 H. R+ y: u  A% @: d1 m2 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& b& C4 x; B# r) v6 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# p. a( N( Q/ e3 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& y% B) N( R' i( T: j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ J2 W9 ?2 O( K7 ?+ S( U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" a- L& y/ [: ?, k; f3 A" K8 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ k+ a+ m. |4 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) i$ [' M- G: M9 A% e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: G" W/ [* Q5 x6 M" l: ~4 E2 x# Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 D, ^7 W+ Q1 {' _6 r7 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 w7 A9 `5 s- i3 L) F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 V' d5 ?6 b: L2 Z" G& U+ U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# u4 Y# ^- z! Y2 z. {) O( i1 Q6 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( ^4 @% p( U- J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% h% A7 }  a' K# U8 X+ A& u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 ?, B: ^' j1 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 j( K# E1 s0 i2 G. ~! N/ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. I& i, Y& V! a! X3 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& L& u9 b3 ~2 [. A$ `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 H$ n. c$ T! b; u0 z& p5 V$ I9 V+ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 h% Z, I, j5 N3 W( b- Z, J; T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 U' A- M: x' T" w9 L$ I( X<P>I regret not dying</P>
* [9 E7 b. b. d/ }/ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  p" r+ T3 C1 t" ?0 F) n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 V- \+ ^' e% s% K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ b7 ]7 T/ S& O! e% ~8 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ V# ]/ W+ E3 y0 S  E! P: Z3 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>