【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 h# ~3 D* Y+ o: \- I8 u  Z- U4 k/ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" k7 m1 M/ I4 M  X4 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
: k: Q* k- G3 J/ c, u( ?With the moon kissing it every night
  J& n. }8 V3 U( [+ mSeeing the sky content with its love
  A  B' d' ?" ?, o* a: {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 C7 }! Y/ n0 H, |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- \  |, ]0 A; ]- d2 H: F/ }2 M2 {! E5 K8 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 v) \" r3 X1 I2 N9 @3 C; _4 Z  ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ v- ]! `4 [1 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 h+ B- [5 I* G0 [( j- N0 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 `$ H0 p/ R  b7 FI’m still filled with fear
. A$ V4 ?) @' a" [" n- B) ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ]' W, L8 N  p. n+ _" [+ HWith such a tongue as yours,
  w# X- }( |6 v! n+ uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# s5 W5 J: I4 l+ IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' d; S0 r4 W2 U$ }6 K* p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 b  j0 M* m1 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 N) V: g; A( z/ A, i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- q# L1 `' O  P2 \/ T' Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ y2 s2 X% O% |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ?5 d, ~6 [- @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' p/ l2 ?5 n- o4 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; u, Z$ a, Q+ A/ H* G  R+ @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 f. D2 B- t9 `  V* r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. `  a6 c' c' u. E0 c+ p9 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  w$ w' K- `0 p, R5 t- ?2 T0 F" A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 `0 c, b  X' M3 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( w4 U1 M& N6 {+ P2 ]+ I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& N* K' g* Y: Q: n2 l- ?! x* m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ y% Y" G$ o( d5 o- j0 R. U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 s/ q. \: J+ d# ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 e1 O* A( ~  v0 a, M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( m, R# J5 x) B1 V5 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ D: x  D) h  |+ t8 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 ?* M8 J( v3 D* y! ?4 ~; ?) X- g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 L- \# O4 A. c% g. t8 S" D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>