【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 H7 U5 _) U1 @1 _* p) O% w+ {6 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) L- I% P( ?: H" R% aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Z- f- ~) ?: \" Y5 I% OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ y6 b& Z0 j( m/ T8 N/ X+ m6 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" l/ n5 @7 V8 ~( ?# a4 V* ]6 yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# C+ z) x+ i" V, [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) D4 c1 E7 J5 I. F/ sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ G" s1 a# |* ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* g) \# v. O4 P8 R$ B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& Z! u: Y, g  B: \, T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( `3 q0 ]6 C; T9 g/ n( u9 u- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! f% \, s/ k, ~% Y! S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* G2 |( N3 A. U2 i5 G3 o. y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 [5 r1 G- h8 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 E. |& c3 @! U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: m; d+ e. r9 {2 }, ~- B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* @! L% E& Z- K% Q( t0 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 O' \& o' K% w/ H! ~0 s' R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Q) G" ]8 M" g* P% \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 `* d& s( _4 W( c" l& `8 j: P7 z8 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, F( g1 F/ k, A6 D: Z5 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- F% n+ ~3 m" x% J5 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 T4 \' a( D2 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 p4 z' e1 C5 Y( z0 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; t) n3 o6 k- Z1 j' b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 f1 V) J4 p+ x4 q$ [7 i8 F7 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 F/ b5 y. e& y- Y1 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& N6 I; p2 [. g* t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% t) }  e# f7 m8 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j2 c4 b, ?% a( T# V, F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ j! {8 v/ v5 R; Y% I' X; M& X; v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  g0 Z" K5 g; N. @2 w0 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 m$ Y- o& J! [: B% \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ {6 B2 N4 z. y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  r+ X5 d% C+ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m! _1 O7 z: N5 }& Q, D0 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ?) Y( X7 f7 W  R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" O4 N) w0 B2 m$ j; v% l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& l: y! n3 E4 x7 m3 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

: \% @: f. }2 E9 X8 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>