【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 x* n6 F# S" ]7 x8 H歌词我附在后面。
4 [- v" ]) m* J" \The moonlight is shining brightly,
' J) l/ I4 p2 @$ f# @) @3 }" o/ |Making the sky glitter like gold,
- V; W$ E5 G9 e$ WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* w  X- H4 ^! a! l# F( hThe sky is happy down to its soul
' |2 g' {. T# S2 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ e9 v$ ~: c' N& [# rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% d0 h9 R, [$ @0 y; [) zYou needn’t fear anything
9 b+ n3 C! A3 K3 r9 [' b/ ?$ WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; R7 m  E9 `" s. }! m0 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# H! P9 {3 U9 z4 }5 iI love you I love you with all my heart
- Z1 n" j  [9 Z$ \4 J# uNothing can compare to my love
7 |0 @0 y. j. W! ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 V7 N5 j. y; N* ]2 U* d; ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# Z8 }/ I* `& q0 L0 ?0 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: F4 C+ q! _  zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% R" I- _6 p1 c5 f  Z+ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 o* t0 S7 R1 F0 y3 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ @( A* e) d5 T6 x  T: j2 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: Y6 \; U8 l; z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ t! E! ^/ ?5 C3 ~2 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- f, ^- y5 S( w- {2 B3 ^3 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 n6 T0 f; \5 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. y, I* X' E0 u/ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 \& D: `8 _2 J- J5 g0 p/ ^7 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Y$ Y' b1 z9 H: G5 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, |$ z8 w5 R( M2 ^* ^# L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: k  B7 R  p$ M3 j! `# ]/ j6 y3 x; q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 K' Y* e; f/ x8 Z; X( ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( D0 y  p, p  j  T! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ^* P4 ?. q. Y$ w5 N- J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 L# M$ \- U. }3 W( i. F. _2 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ ]0 u; q/ b' r+ `1 Q. q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 R9 U3 }; J4 O/ j) b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. ?. }; r/ v% c. |- P7 i8 Y/ C+ C5 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ c! V+ }+ h. Q- H5 l( I2 ^: q/ ]5 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 k3 F' Q9 V% D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 J4 Z7 y- I$ m  z1 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 Z7 _$ H+ L0 f0 L. F+ i5 ]  Z: G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  X# H7 d1 e/ J! ~( Z% D* \& w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" b2 L) [$ C' f  k2 F, I' `% C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 y, |) b7 K: f1 R* r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# ]& u. q% \1 q9 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! |+ ~+ B( e9 h) \" V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; }* w" |% a% o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>