【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 T* |, E' w! b, g7 I# |Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ f6 x' E1 \( w7 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; |  c* k& \: p" ^6 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
) X0 e7 P; I1 Y4 C% O- h) OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ X0 d, ]3 Q: W8 c. ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 H) w4 S% M" O" g+ ^You needn’t fear anything
: @7 d* Q. R4 s" }3 }9 `. s  pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 R* D# h! N- I/ wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& L! R" u/ n* t( Z, e: F& wI want so much to see inside your heart
4 b8 X. y2 x) [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  A+ M  M1 S, r* j7 H$ `7 e/ NI’m still filled with fear
/ P) W; O7 P" a: XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) w7 A" T0 C2 U+ X1 v) V* ^7 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( T7 K" X9 ]$ \9 P- t- t0 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 y0 Y2 K- N( }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 r7 @8 R% E7 ?8 G' x; Q; U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 A+ Z  ^- T& C# I4 V& [8 m" W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, J' r  v. j* J: V- g9 p  c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  N7 b% i6 _2 N- q2 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) Y2 a: F5 X3 h- E3 P6 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; p* H* }+ k3 z3 ~* T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) G- `' s! c; ?) @; M" P- P$ }# \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, b( o7 w8 b) j, ?$ m% i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 t+ V- T& u6 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 N7 C2 X  h1 n, u. t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 X& l; R3 @4 E) o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 o! |* ~) @' e0 ^5 \  |9 M% E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- @& e. ^6 y& i; o6 z0 c# R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% x6 I" O7 w7 w' t& Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 I/ u* _( U! O* ~% Q6 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) T. p! B4 n+ u' }# @% s5 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! p3 N8 _1 X" P  h4 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" B6 O' P1 S4 B4 h: _% ~* J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 M0 Q/ @  B$ d( K& i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- x3 @( [+ ~; e' [) V2 `( z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) j1 b+ R1 H, g% M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: j0 r- _! H/ \- a& l  `( I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 i- {8 M! p+ w- l( A" W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ c! E7 ~2 p4 `# @- H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 I# r3 S1 F7 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: N! M/ d$ s; C' Q$ I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 J3 F+ Y* z! E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>