【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 a, |) ~, `% J3 Q, j3 j7 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
# o. H9 j5 \8 E$ A$ k! T+ sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' V! }$ m3 ~( J* h# X# AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 r6 P& C' i3 \, hSeeing the sky content with its love
: l2 n- E  V# Y; I1 m' R# bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* o- Q5 B! [; @( z% UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. z* v# A) M! F) O; v/ MEvery other word you utter is love
2 ]. i5 ?, u' {- X; w7 @7 kI really want to know just how much you love me
4 z3 m' s' V. O( x) D3 Q# jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( t. V- i( B$ i2 P( ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- ]1 b% E. C, u7 ^- y: GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 }& q; ?0 ^* n. UI’m still filled with fear
0 f% k9 W6 ~  c. h  ~! P! q) @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ @* {1 H5 G7 z' p$ Q- A( l- lI regret not dying
- N) x' G  U3 G$ P' S* UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# o5 k/ a& M3 [0 [3 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ d1 M7 C' G  Q; _* a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! u5 b( J+ h3 s. e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  i5 e  W$ G& N" d/ i7 f( i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Q& `% m) {9 @: S) S2 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' N7 w- {; W2 B3 x$ R' n  n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  _4 o2 X. I' M) U$ x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: L5 J2 X! N; \- w8 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- D3 m6 U; w. H" F) G8 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. z2 H( O+ @# j1 s' V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 i+ D4 A, [  s+ ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 u9 X6 u# \# @: [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 S2 W. ?2 B, H# ]! o9 }" k; V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 r# u+ T+ Q: [7 g" ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# s3 Q& B* D' h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* |3 i0 ?! G' v- D7 C/ k2 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 f) W7 R7 x" i* Z  x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, h' K- e: |/ K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, X( i, j# z. s* d! t/ `- y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 K3 P7 ]- C1 H/ U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. X0 E' U; H& t2 Z. w$ N9 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! I2 e$ D: `" _3 @6 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 }1 v2 M7 [- ~- C6 n! I6 [0 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ a' Z' x3 f7 l) ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% C) z0 C3 f# l/ ?6 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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