【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( D& J' G- k/ _+ A3 F) D; }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, r# w: i/ \; DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 Q- Q+ X9 B7 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 b2 ~0 ^8 D  B( kWith the moon kissing it every night
$ q# K: v$ U* Q0 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ A' F/ F! `5 u, ^' w4 cYou needn’t fear anything
4 o+ K3 [  D* c, m/ IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, u8 J  e9 w2 [* b  g7 r- g6 b/ sEvery other word you utter is love
: z& j7 \; n2 l- @I really want to know just how much you love me
  g: a! t  u. d/ y$ OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ u0 Z/ s9 X  u6 J* W/ L, qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 v4 f* O, m" N; V  XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 u& z* R; A( y$ d  ~/ W2 k- EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  K' u& F2 Y, c! I0 d  |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# u5 D" x. C0 ?; H* VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ }! g" n$ l/ }# g& S5 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  R4 f9 U1 a7 c/ g2 H+ l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; h0 ^7 p, I  X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* X$ A; r6 Z- t* ]0 H" b* Z, k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ {- i% p$ r! F4 e, C0 V$ s& ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 v5 W3 C  W# J$ ?3 _/ f* {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Q) y% ~7 u  ]; ]7 B& q9 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 j8 |- C2 Q" h+ m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. e3 @/ I0 T1 H& s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ]6 B- j" n) E+ H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 m/ W/ Y+ c! |6 {) v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 S/ ?* Q" `7 ~/ c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Y9 y5 ?# n4 c/ x" g' C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% L- B, |8 b3 O! P8 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 N/ s9 |4 k0 {8 w# {* J/ W- Y) T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) W" K, J6 a, ^5 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# N" |' T( D$ w0 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ @/ R4 ~. \, F) E. u& |7 w1 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( `/ d5 q9 i) a$ k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# n, }! Z% e; H; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( \% x* }8 n6 y. ~0 @8 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) q7 p* @, o6 C. H$ Y' n<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 x3 u4 w0 x  R% s. [9 [0 v+ |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& T: F0 d) a6 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' e( U/ F5 @# a! r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 o8 r0 J  ^* |7 ^' g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ A! c( F4 |' H$ r! ?) B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ V; r1 ~$ F$ X5 A+ D$ G) v' b5 m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>