【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; |  C5 Q9 |, e+ qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 I8 k; d2 v/ D) C4 q" j! mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 E" [$ P( X3 X1 B' K) W  LThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ ]7 r' O7 s( N" n) q/ H4 L4 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 C- x! D7 ]& v7 r: d# |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ S4 ?0 n$ g$ v8 G: b' KEvery other word you utter is love
3 m& s% p6 ~) Z. [I really want to know just how much you love me
1 a& `3 T+ C" E% w  a7 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* ?9 ]6 z: Q# O- P+ h, Z" ^4 n* C  ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 Z8 m, \0 F7 e) L$ d, UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% [3 p! t$ Z" a2 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 s/ i& d/ T4 m; N, wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; X1 i- v( o/ k( k4 P" i9 w8 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) A' r9 |7 r, z9 E) S% X$ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% ?0 @9 d1 H0 I$ b6 [8 H1 H2 b# `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ E$ y: y6 _2 X6 @3 P8 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 S: S0 \( P; p: o$ [; X/ [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ a2 n7 x0 o9 o4 q! {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% S9 i% O* {7 f2 D8 w7 C7 q$ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! G* `& e7 k' i. U" q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& o3 @( U0 d! ~0 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 N( H4 y, U8 g% t( A( c! @/ E; O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 U9 ]4 a8 x, d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 x: I6 k' V" A& A, @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ]; U  x) }" e3 R+ T% h- K. y4 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* N- F9 l& g3 B* s9 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% t' J5 f) [# \! D# G0 C( b* `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
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& O8 g5 L! ^& J: E* f* `2 \8 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' r0 Z# ^8 c* q+ Q2 v  t" G4 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  O; Y2 F% g+ H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 p/ p/ V: B" C' C! T, ^  Y% G3 V8 q9 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. f1 o  R: S; G/ s8 w! c; S3 v. c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 e, j4 l* D. I( v! H0 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ~% N9 g- f2 o9 D8 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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. K/ Y' X' R: D+ b9 L) |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! |/ b9 g8 ^; N% E+ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 t7 L% g# p0 c- W4 S0 L; ~! ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* x. ~4 g! K3 x  O) Q3 K3 u2 w8 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>