【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. z7 X' W' |6 o# O- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# U. H# L6 r7 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& H" y2 @/ n) u3 ^4 z2 }The sky is happy down to its soul
  C& I% ^$ {  q) BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 G% B/ @  m9 D# g1 \2 ~. |. uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. K$ t! @7 O& iEvery other word you utter is love
) h8 w  Q: j# b1 w; `! ]- KI really want to know just how much you love me
+ }6 P6 d4 N6 p5 N: F) tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 J/ u# U* ~* f( nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 F0 E5 g$ ~" f  c" b# NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 w; Z  ]3 X' CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ R& Z$ h3 `& m; q+ B9 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' u( A3 a' Y: `0 c5 J9 r. Q( ?: NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 A+ B( _$ D' r6 a0 j) ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# }4 \0 a* U  e6 h' QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  L4 [9 G9 L7 d1 e! g* j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% g. A" t# t8 [# h& B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ {% c* D9 O8 m$ p- D( p1 \# y3 H3 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 J- N; q* A2 y! `5 o! ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! j% t% V3 Q; L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, T8 \4 `" E0 W! V& [+ F( K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) c( ?0 k4 X" t& T$ V! E' Y7 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. R$ @3 K' _5 M4 i; u" N" Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ N! j& t8 k  x( m! n1 s0 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 W6 i( ?! m4 H3 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& g$ G, o- M' P" ]6 t+ k4 ^, p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ~' p& L* i" p! V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 ^: L. e- c# j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 ~2 L1 X1 Y4 j% t8 y5 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. R1 V* ?: K& _+ ~' z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 y* z# U/ {% M9 P9 R. \% @+ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 \- j! f( N7 x, Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  n( i  v. t/ H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" \1 M& F- R- A7 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" _" \1 ]! |1 n  p' a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ^$ b, M& _/ u6 d( {# O9 D5 H: h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ |3 x# N' _5 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 T$ b. o& L( p. a7 m# f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% L) x& {6 c7 x3 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 m3 C: k0 r4 P8 s" L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ Q9 ]( u, E9 P! _( s0 U) U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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