【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' L2 k% B6 J* g$ yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 r/ w7 e' y5 w+ P3 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
' M8 Q% |3 B! N3 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, Y* s5 A  }7 v, i# ?% UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" `* \( |, Q; A" [( A8 O, hEvery other word you utter is love
, K& {; u% X2 B  _7 iI really want to know just how much you love me
# j2 V9 C6 d5 T( Y" hI love you I love you with all my heart
; H1 W! G: s3 ~0 ^: |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) r+ n. ^5 g+ ^: L! |1 ]( o8 g+ ]1 lI want so much to see inside your heart
: v+ ^; U8 @! |  cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- V9 o# ?5 F. Q. iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 V0 Q0 s- X6 c& T5 Z! l& NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* x: Q( r- D: U! }- }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" ]1 V+ c. v! ]8 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ ^' D, f9 p: H# o$ q) l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 D2 ?7 L& x. P  v6 Y# O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 n! l" X9 r# \: j/ j' y2 z! ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 z* i3 ?' F+ R# l. ~& r/ n' ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 p  w" \1 k7 I, p' e3 ?2 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; B3 H) p) Y( x) G2 N+ h: U8 i( H3 B% w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 C7 R( o1 k; T6 z& {8 b+ A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  j! P# Y" ?& G, f$ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, N/ y8 }# K. v2 s, l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ K$ P& F: P, k. A" e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 S# J; t$ s& ]+ v+ B( ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! q4 e0 ?" f" @  F7 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 [1 X! R6 `4 v$ ^" p3 @* ^; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" @8 e/ P  l9 h  P- g: h* a- M) V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, }/ L* u! k0 v- Y- w+ F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& @1 a+ X* s: C* k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# p% A' e9 x; h; b% d# S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. J1 A5 ~/ ]& F& ]! ?3 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 \2 L( p) i; V7 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, [0 i' P/ _; ~# z% ]* f- R4 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 T6 [/ I8 P# ]3 X2 Z2 l: R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 C, a, G( B  U1 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! e. r7 \( i' i" K0 \1 n8 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- D! g) d2 e8 y! b) j$ _0 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. r) W8 P1 r4 M0 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f+ E9 Q3 Z) h$ ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- l* M6 b9 i/ L4 y: C4 {& K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, e; U5 J) ]9 Y: W0 C- W% J. R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' v4 E2 y! m7 v6 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Y! K) f$ A& f; d) f& \9 y; y% L) d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ m. G3 L: q$ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" F  d" i8 M9 y# C  e& b' \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>