【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 t; ]. s8 d! ^( I! @歌词我附在后面。
2 n: C$ ]( V+ S6 R5 }) HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  E" b! ~9 X' [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ^) I+ C" }9 K' }. uThe sky is happy down to its soul
% b. ^! n4 P$ k6 aWith the moon kissing it every night
/ [. x  h" b: a! H8 c$ h! lSeeing the sky content with its love
1 b5 w% O! D$ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 |! Y& a  O& S: N& F2 w9 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Y. E. G" V- |! U0 N; c8 r/ W* @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, Q9 o% i+ }8 u1 U8 m) ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 i: A: C8 y+ Z1 n% P# aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ t/ s: F+ ]% ^# ~( p4 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 @/ J/ w2 q* x9 S0 U" J& N- PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ |  w, \* t' c( o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 x) W* u3 u5 h! J0 Z. C- P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; k. y8 X  O" I1 ^- n) O1 y, e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! b' L+ {2 h3 ]* b8 O3 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ^% z; l! N6 S& c/ s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 i6 e/ Z7 s! x- y0 c. H# i9 J, b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; H- Y4 @2 p6 o. W0 f, e, E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 d: ~9 J" J' J+ J! Y% ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# m$ W  G& j6 K5 q6 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* y6 J4 u' L1 a! i) V4 k+ I5 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 I( ^) @7 ^% U" u1 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; c2 {9 [6 V8 z' _/ z' ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' w/ x, {$ u5 H4 ~0 b5 ~' G8 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( d5 x+ y4 b& ^5 {5 O8 `2 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; Z2 d" ~/ `1 P% D* p, ?6 {& i" n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 n& a4 w, E3 f+ m/ W% t0 s, S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, D  i" D; N/ U# B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 X( u- ^% o7 F, p4 I& Q, M: s# _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# V- c" J/ L/ a0 o* p+ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 X/ Y; j% P0 e: D% v+ `3 C) q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ `7 a7 @- M! i, h( _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 B, k- e2 y( m6 v0 W- m  o0 f' D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! n' t. R& X5 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 m* N7 K: s. |4 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 d/ }3 _1 R/ E% j$ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* L. t/ p- P; m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* B: _* x, X3 w& \! r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 f- ~8 }9 W6 U7 Y) q- O( K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' V) q8 r  O$ G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>