【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) Z: G% u4 {: U' y歌词我附在后面。
1 ~3 B3 Q5 [$ bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^1 M; G- ^1 e# z0 u; I  EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ |( C7 V) e6 n; U8 o- uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 S) Y$ z4 }4 U) B: i% FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# _) V- H$ }$ Y6 B# a5 I$ P7 _; i& C. |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& ~+ {7 ^+ r' @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ p# O5 I# {# h0 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 a7 E2 D9 i$ x1 u1 I5 \7 \1 a( {* y0 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 `4 s0 F! N9 {2 U2 u8 l" o  n/ uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 K' Q$ h; E' ?1 [8 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& e; |, N8 \7 j) u8 g. A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! W& O0 Y" e3 o: M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ]2 K$ Y% K4 q  P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, D# A8 y. t( X+ l, U$ C* R2 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 E0 F7 H. U) P$ }8 h" ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 F: t2 {6 L5 q0 |- G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 c2 J% O6 l  y3 {2 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% J1 f9 w7 |, B8 m: p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 W2 K- [7 N! i2 K<P>你无需担心</P>
7 R9 X7 u/ N0 s( z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! A# G& M. U: d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 V5 g8 ]0 ?% ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! t4 P- n4 d* i% \; ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! ^1 O) [2 A) h$ z; d2 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* {2 ~( v- x% [. H7 }: [  d4 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 I& G9 o. I  [9 G! r. q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 p1 l3 G4 Y# X, c+ b4 ~) t1 H( Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* L% s0 J  z. G$ f$ k2 s. ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% |7 [5 K, ]$ [0 {6 H" N- @& P  W0 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! x" Q- X% K! n* r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Z3 V* o9 n; N4 P& R9 b' C2 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ S4 ^; g: b* x  U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' H' F) ^  R2 }$ F! c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) e7 M8 U! k1 v/ I3 |1 h: r# Z& M* Y# T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% n+ M- V7 ^8 z1 x/ `/ ^# d# e  @9 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, r: h0 R& w# z' u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( |0 E2 s/ G8 b4 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( p" p+ m* x' H, z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 O4 o0 m' P/ o! I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>