【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; d& d  v6 `- Q歌词我附在后面。
) Z* B# j6 ^) B- b' `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* H4 u; J; G, i! ?5 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T( N' e* W* U3 p9 {9 S& IThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ q/ Q/ W* o$ e1 ~8 l" ?5 I6 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 U4 W! i0 U. w( cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- l- i: \$ l4 X; O" [' QYou needn’t fear anything
3 g3 w% j) k6 g* H, T$ @1 i9 y' aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 C1 _9 G2 e9 U0 S/ T- FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, h- P3 U8 ~  s4 n. p1 P) _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ K0 f% q0 k! f2 M6 C" {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 ^6 v7 A9 X( H+ H* x$ DI want so much to see inside your heart
7 C- d+ Q1 J6 A, m! h" J: wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 r8 X; [  M( |" S: [/ k8 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ^( y4 J9 P4 q8 T  @With such a tongue as yours,
2 y! _" ]2 E6 ^; @7 z: r: dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ X2 c# X' n8 u# N* ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; y+ O5 ~2 ]9 Z9 d2 o' O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 t; P, T: F2 n2 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& K0 @6 x% ]% l! B3 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* _) d! c$ M% T3 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 R- t) x! b& e& N8 J! k1 D8 H5 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ E3 e! f5 H0 N) z  \3 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' [. B1 D) x! w, q5 e5 l0 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# A, ]0 ^$ B& z- Z' u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 _0 `' u: b2 _- e( ~<P>你无需担心</P>
# T5 b8 ]9 B' ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; N- q+ V( z4 K" s/ \7 {8 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' b  Y3 J2 O" {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ L4 E4 Q1 _6 q2 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: `  t3 `! M. H- S: G: h7 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  J8 e/ F6 c5 _/ g* r2 X0 l+ E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" p) H, s/ Y* y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 r3 x, Z# @$ w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 ^0 b, G7 j$ H: D. \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' ~1 L* Q, w+ c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) d' ^) B6 L0 E$ o, G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: Z1 y$ E) o7 T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 f1 B& A8 B( j: s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ E* \9 s' {+ a$ a, m, `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- G" P! G7 G9 z* {8 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 V7 x/ @0 C/ }  |* \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 u% [2 T8 I' I$ M4 T, a我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' X: _; t* _6 {- N" I3 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>