【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  u6 Q9 a2 E2 `" D1 G歌词我附在后面。
4 v& P/ R: W$ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: e% e4 c$ d- u* y6 H# LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# O6 i. q9 f+ ?8 M: z% lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% C7 T- T# R+ g  dSeeing the sky content with its love
8 t" F7 ], @5 Q1 n, V; \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 `& I9 L: B4 kYou needn’t fear anything
% G5 r6 S* [. M" ]* j& l2 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: u: {: I8 _. D$ S; Q9 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- W. L; q; k( e# N( p; A7 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- Y, |* M' I8 H7 d4 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& b: }9 F0 i* v. B; d0 f; `% MI want so much to see inside your heart
1 B- z1 F5 ?# i" BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ B: |+ ^# R. \+ F* RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 D$ c3 K! H& P# c0 U6 t; JI regret not dying
. j+ @& C, F9 V3 S; q+ \3 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' E! `6 C6 A9 {" M4 A- I, N! jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. e7 b$ `: u% I5 x2 S$ p' u% qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 F6 b' S3 R3 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 e6 B  j, I$ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* t0 E' N0 [. Y# f2 H; ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 y: K/ K. i( c: t" t$ j5 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  I' Q2 a  }2 I4 o! M( Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 Q7 E, `4 s- D+ }7 v( s  @# d4 O( o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 ?2 g% ?% A% L& L4 n+ y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) _+ G/ x$ P; G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* v5 K  d. R3 g$ L- Z, k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! M9 h; M; f4 o* R; G" E& ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 P+ `* ~7 T6 y) C) i7 W! ?! H" W<P>你无需担心</P>
" i6 H% f) p4 l; B* X" q+ k( j- i* F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" [# t$ @9 @: p+ M/ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% j4 A4 K5 k' [% _! Y3 O/ Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# a, V8 l0 G& G8 ?. t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* v8 M0 S" d. J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Y& K* k( o) G4 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 ~' |; T/ N. k5 B' }/ d+ ~* K: A1 P- d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# P( f1 B/ G7 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ f& ~% g5 k6 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( v6 m: {) z, q' d4 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, i$ E- v% T5 G5 G7 @# p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 q4 f! D; I/ j! g, z<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 X8 ?) @! }2 x: A. z' Y  i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 J$ t( D+ f% y# B  i8 }8 E( K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) h9 a& M5 I( P. H1 R2 \- `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 B8 i3 A( R# c( o3 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. o. n5 c/ ~1 ]* m& L  g  ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 w" ]) P; Z5 ^9 p( {% Z. j, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 M. }  x8 b1 L) }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: b% `" @" Y4 h1 l( G) j: [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 d1 m! X* v0 o" e$ t我请你剖开它
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* C. H- b! o( k6 J4 y, R1 ^! c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* k' A1 r8 w/ T2 k. W" ]# M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>