【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 m' r) z# d( _/ M3 t2 ?; b/ PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& v  j* D5 S* f8 m7 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# w6 P3 v8 ^0 N6 n; k; O) I4 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
( h- L; _" v2 k) X$ `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% _" d. I/ O% L0 F/ o+ G  ]9 w" PI really want to know just how much you love me
6 {! d6 }+ V. L. eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% N( Q8 h; k2 Q, L" T% EI want so much to see inside your heart
8 J+ w. M! D* i1 N9 w) XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 U8 q  z5 x& O" `5 fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ _$ v( ]/ {; g# e5 x* D! p$ Q4 {I regret not dying
5 r; X$ F2 Y, m! `* ]# _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 _& h, m: ]9 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ j5 X/ S; x0 ~8 P% t7 h' S/ k" R# SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ z9 j3 [8 w+ U! }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" M! ~5 ?  N# S. o4 e4 _$ R  t6 e# a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' a0 `7 p# y. ?* R7 }" b) w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ V! P. A' x7 ^9 \$ V/ z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. E+ P. h4 P4 H5 S* V) Q$ r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 i/ h5 g/ N4 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* o5 ^/ b% j# C) q1 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
6 ~( A; P) E+ B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: _- `4 M9 `1 E% [: Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ C" D3 E, G/ O( ?8 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 a8 i9 m0 Z$ m, y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 [/ u  t& [9 }, w; F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~8 S' z" Y9 F- T! D! j& g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! s4 c7 Y: z' a: T/ K2 J& n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# B4 O3 d$ `0 _2 {' Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& P+ x) r5 u  r7 F- l<P>I regret not dying</P>
' R" f2 Z2 f' P3 ]4 D' X# I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 q2 [  L" W5 @+ x: k  d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. N  q+ f6 u" v- `/ Z& a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& @: p8 @: h& d2 {# p! L+ q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* X+ S- d- O1 l' F7 E4 }7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ H( b2 |% ]1 o: \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 X& ^) s; s5 ~' S! ]) w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  [, E6 Y9 D& y) {' I% T: E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( J) p# F4 p: Z& W, P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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