【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 n) }. J/ @8 c6 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
. I4 Y# d) j7 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ K3 l  ?# B, v1 O: pThe sky is happy down to its soul
! W% ~& m) w) H$ L9 C8 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 I% k7 p" P# S- r& y9 G1 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; K) G; @2 ~4 w; S7 x- \  yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' o0 x; R2 K% l  Y' hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ w* Z5 Y; F( C8 A8 X* TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( i% H0 ?5 v9 L5 t% ~I’m still filled with fear
  a% b( U0 t  P' w  XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 W( ]' L) v( X4 S! y4 G% g6 B+ LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 R/ d& H& z; E% [/ j  K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; g. f( w9 n! `8 K1 U! y: E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ z( L3 x' r, a) U9 l$ \' A, V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 e: }# o5 Z6 Z# R& r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! K6 l. [  w9 Y! X1 n* `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ `) ?( r* g6 @. w* x# t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; k. x/ l1 n" E' ~9 W0 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 T" e7 {) D& m1 B2 W<P>你无需担心</P>
. i+ N: M) f; x$ a, K8 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 P' U% s* P) B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 E3 k  t9 u4 O1 ?0 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ {2 _8 c  |' a0 X% \# w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 z3 A0 g5 t2 V6 N* B+ D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ^& i) f/ [7 Y+ `( `+ A( l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 `; |9 U5 n8 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 \$ P" Z9 ]3 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# n: ]& j" [/ E) g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" H3 }) A, e/ `9 |- Z2 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ]/ F8 w, L1 `# x/ C6 n5 F; F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ V' C: P! a6 @' K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ P7 c9 d, u& N4 P. l* u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 }$ N) g7 B: g* E' O5 M6 x# Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 t3 R  ^2 p2 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* f: ^6 l& S( i5 B7 a) z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; y8 O5 _% J4 l% z. e; ^. E3 R' P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. l+ w+ }+ T$ e, B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. \0 |6 {- Z0 o2 G2 Z' W( i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ i2 ~( H8 }' o! c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 D: ^7 D$ i( z/ w& _  M& {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 e& L0 T7 e! l$ t! S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* X4 s, u/ {+ E5 {9 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>