【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ `6 L$ C( b5 I- I# nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ \2 C" ~& M+ Q* hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ]5 A1 ~; i4 y5 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 h: N. y4 [( P' W5 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ?% m* q3 S* b2 W  Z% T/ z( s4 ]You needn’t fear anything
6 U0 e* r, I8 u4 C7 U/ ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% ^. J/ e$ I5 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Z& s: T- B; l' WI want so much to see inside your heart
" Y7 z/ Q# V) }7 X5 t( xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( z/ w* Y8 P4 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" S2 Q: o4 h! [. y8 lWith such a tongue as yours,
. B/ V6 ]- |% R  _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ?. E4 o" y; l- T( s) x# [& O( L' ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ^) K$ I  Q! \3 g- j) o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! n. G) B  S/ P# |* e, a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ~7 D8 B" w# h8 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 a7 I. d5 }9 D1 x2 i# m1 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 c" n) i) y, i' E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, O5 n, R# Z( F9 D) P$ p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ J0 |% a! s5 z! m8 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# |) a! g4 T, t. r3 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, ]4 V1 t) e! q! {1 A* ^  C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" N, [: X* R3 N! f( \8 G<P>你无需担心</P>
; ?% i' e) K2 v; a8 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ E5 M  a$ p+ M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- a8 f" i* S6 Z  ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* N- ^0 a& r5 h6 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 `7 k3 `/ e4 `8 w. m+ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 b5 M1 d; c, O' M. a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Z7 ]" b% B$ X( K# c* G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- I3 ~7 N) a: B5 R9 l# L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% }! Y4 D" \) r* v: ~( X* E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 R. t6 n2 M$ c$ E  ~" S. }! K, n5 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ |) J  F3 r% s$ C. p6 b! p/ S6 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 O& I' d, F" l, s* }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  z: H* e8 x' w$ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; O* l2 ?) ?% Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- i6 w1 s* _1 L+ P. P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; `% E( e2 ]5 z2 q9 y, M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 s  S  }( H  [1 N) @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# B  P: N) Z/ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>