【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 e; O* x/ p7 i# D* v. y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 m( H4 a& A. a$ }( ]- cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: y5 H2 I  h, S9 O  g( hWith the moon kissing it every night
' s; _$ e* g% [Seeing the sky content with its love
# ^& g# w2 [% i9 B* mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* A6 Z& G1 j# KYou needn’t fear anything
! k' n; T! P) ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; j! w( z6 D# s  Z" YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ o9 E! g5 I; ^0 M2 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 R) I6 W# Y% q% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 }+ f9 r' f$ B# s/ MI want so much to see inside your heart
* F' `$ Y4 i# c  J/ NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, ]1 N4 J/ O7 w; {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: |  \5 t& T0 \! {9 m2 EI regret not dying
1 u7 n0 \7 @& m$ kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& a( j8 N* z' G* ^; S1 x" k, YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 S% l, o* _5 n$ `+ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% E3 L1 x: |* t; O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* v, b4 t# c5 I6 Z+ f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 y* B; e- a6 Z* U% E& `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 c5 u6 p& o* w9 g  u$ Z' }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# Z/ Z, I1 @& a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# H  e- y( H0 A" q" n8 j- O$ D7 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- _" G9 m7 c4 u5 T, {0 o: P2 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, n3 v) x7 _. F5 i) m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' v1 \6 B! s! b- {/ ~5 e1 [7 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 E; Y8 @. C' K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ q2 r0 c! w% {& @8 X4 [: y6 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 y$ v3 Y  E% @: {8 d/ p  P2 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ k$ p7 E' d9 q) T9 [/ O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 }/ h* ^2 l9 ?4 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, G' j- `7 o& U1 T/ i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ t6 m2 l& D6 z+ i+ f+ W  o/ v( `, D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 b; Y: E# ^3 g7 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 k8 t3 x& i- T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 C1 r, u) a3 I6 F& R' a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- `2 g& e$ G, G( h; S" w% f% M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( L* a# U6 \2 g  V4 u: z- E7 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 }: x0 ]- I* n7 |" X, M* d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 R( v0 U* B  z6 D6 D' m3 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" f$ s" E$ m7 j( q, Z- A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ D# m5 A  R$ w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>