【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 x- B" W/ X( j$ Y4 n$ m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 b! ]5 I' Z2 X" t& mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 h& _, z& P2 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' ]7 ^# ^! S0 H+ C  |) gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' W) `* K; i9 t1 y0 e; R& uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! Z; z! _+ H0 R# M8 @% [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# s( q) j$ e" d& I0 [; cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  b3 x$ x6 C# n! dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 L7 M0 W3 r/ \( TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 \: a7 a0 a. h: ^% d* l' L3 LI’m still filled with fear
) @/ A. k* K" y3 G: S" b, VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ t1 C/ D0 s1 k' y6 t$ C1 I# iI regret not dying
3 R/ x* X: _  U4 Z' F& i( sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% G9 u1 c- o5 K2 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 x) y' c5 o& P  Z, RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 L" @0 u7 y& M* z. e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% s, z8 T" j, i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 d) w* _2 v2 X- H- x* X6 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 o7 l. o5 b/ a8 v7 b8 h4 K' R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 ]/ e2 d" {4 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# h0 _2 |  }" S3 _' q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. n) `" |5 e# y1 J" s" U8 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ N& w% u3 |1 ]( K* t2 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 M; u; ]! x7 E% P3 O: F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 W1 s/ V! s) [5 }( g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 R- Y7 _; E& V+ y$ m8 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ i3 f/ ?: i& n8 v* s$ V1 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 E3 N2 f, A6 P. y, m7 z3 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 {! i( I1 j9 Y; P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; e9 v' N% }4 f, b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# W% T$ p1 }6 W# L7 q% Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# ^. ]2 q+ @0 P, v, H9 C" j" Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 B4 w( E- _, k; d6 G8 q# ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* n0 B  x7 K: ^1 \2 z5 I8 u4 C- t; J% v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 z  U+ A( c2 g* Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 n, I8 I$ h6 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ B+ ~' m# ]& U. t% B0 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Y' P8 ^. n8 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  z1 j+ C0 ~/ @5 r/ D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 f8 o7 c/ H7 Z' K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* @6 H$ ?9 e/ @! q. B1 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>