【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ T' e- W4 @( r9 a( H+ I1 C* U& J' `2 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( G6 M1 r/ Q( O: o/ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 Q2 A9 y& S9 ^- [Seeing the sky content with its love
5 N2 _* ^% N, @; D) G/ H! FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" G0 z& V) f7 b+ yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 a& `9 p5 w$ ?: K( R, `! II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; O* G- A& w+ J3 Z6 G3 BNothing can compare to my love
- i6 O7 Y" B" [/ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 d$ p/ r; ]! I) D6 N( cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ B# l- `8 l: H- [- wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 v# V. e8 \: Q7 L) E/ p5 f3 v0 X# ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 t8 o9 b, {6 `I regret not dying
' ]/ o8 t; J/ l* m9 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 q& M3 N7 k+ W  Z) lWith such a tongue as yours,
$ \  {5 _) ^/ I& u% j7 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  {' k. ]: m/ k9 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 Z: f& c" ]' B$ m" W0 G' A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% {6 P. Q, p" ^4 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ s  H! F9 a5 [/ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 h& s, `" b8 S5 }' K4 M* q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: G2 [, ?' l, t& a' n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 m. K* o/ N+ W  x7 o. ]0 J3 L! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 ]6 w4 z# |$ ]9 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 L1 F$ k9 y% l; P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: q3 T. E1 E$ m' n$ d- A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& _) ?9 f# A2 O5 x! T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) w2 [& f9 m" r" d$ ]: T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 y) `! C6 m  Q9 X' F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ?; V( j/ G# P' c. r  J3 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G$ F$ X% {- `3 j: y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) q8 s9 Y  R% C/ p# d( W) ~# R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' Y5 A2 k- }. b. A  M5 F4 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 k" [1 Q* H% \# e. e8 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! d' _* T* f3 s9 {5 O: o. j' U, K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ g5 l; S8 L9 D  b, b0 q# X* q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 y9 G! a" U- e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ w9 C6 _0 _9 |# A4 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; L, J$ `/ b4 n. `% g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ u% E1 b- g; N8 G; E5 _; _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; t& X! v$ X  [4 p# m( z7 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 z7 o5 m$ y6 K& W. m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% W- h' b4 @8 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: M9 k) u& M1 R0 r! _3 K* p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 y1 a5 n/ B! X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! F' E  B" ?+ X5 {% H' L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. n6 u" i+ |# `, M9 p4 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 k# s  N. v* N5 F* v( n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>