【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; o2 g7 C! l. N歌词我附在后面。
9 `( x# ^7 w5 J9 D  S) v) i( B( UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 l0 J5 c8 M' ]: iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ `; q8 {4 F4 k% [5 Y6 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, V' Z% i" R! B2 ^5 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. u# j* ]9 h+ V! k0 b$ E( b2 KSeeing the sky content with its love
( Y& N' @0 @9 l- X0 A9 C+ BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 F2 ^' d" ~8 j7 f* \7 ?: pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 q* U9 |* y) }9 e1 g, pEvery other word you utter is love
2 Y" H; Y) j. x0 u6 }I really want to know just how much you love me
- F! O2 h! G+ x' d6 y! wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ W& e, C2 Y  ~) q4 ~( cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 q* T' ~  O  Z& i$ D  A* `. P8 ?( aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! l  t# c$ z0 I8 d; o9 [0 A" HWith such a tongue as yours,
; e- L6 H0 O! X5 w/ u6 ~7 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! b: V$ {' L0 Y# v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) w0 k! n2 A( D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! L* M' s, j$ y/ J1 w5 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 }$ K4 N/ c/ X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ~; B9 G0 c* r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ d$ g4 Y% ]- b7 O9 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! `9 |& r* B: Z. q9 C6 o3 a1 {4 J8 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) q$ x( ~/ k& b* E% s3 ^4 i+ ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ^/ d6 n+ l; e% _  X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ v# ~  y2 e& e8 G4 Z7 \; |8 t, Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' {) u+ q6 `& F, d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ c! H0 g) G( n- _5 M. x8 q<P>你无需担心</P>
% [) J+ ~2 [) S3 l6 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 a8 k. I5 k/ V# a# i, G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! G7 s, T3 V+ P( o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  T+ s6 P2 u& F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, r8 V; U! U  ?$ x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 a7 i" x0 L% J4 X, _- s; Z' w, T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; P8 A9 B- N/ a& z, Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 v; o# C. b! ]5 ]# ^3 P. x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 I7 m/ z+ ~$ O0 H' |( F' T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 M6 y5 ?9 g4 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- ?& t) x* ~+ q1 ]/ _* y- y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( A9 g4 h: I, t4 n. i, b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 O' t0 p7 p# v. l# q$ V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' |$ j' j* Z2 I$ o" i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 Q+ n6 v$ s4 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ?+ r+ m- A) O5 y( ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  [8 D" ]) d/ @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' e: |! y* Q: ~" [9 B4 m5 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 W/ n4 o( L+ W( O( g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& X9 {/ M! s2 p1 M; V: V1 n4 s8 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>