【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& M+ M. L5 `& V" F歌词我附在后面。
5 O" O. d0 l* yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 R. T& ]! L) C5 T6 f% WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- }) X+ {3 n2 c$ l+ g& s% E6 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- n- D4 t7 Y! OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ^* K: G2 g7 d, j9 b: SEvery other word you utter is love
7 x" v9 X1 v' k, R( @2 U+ ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% j* B" {, a3 @9 a8 OI want so much to see inside your heart
% L% k1 r$ b. u5 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& _; O- o8 G: j$ X  cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, [( W" t5 D/ E7 S7 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" o) w0 {' m6 N/ ^! A! }4 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 S3 x2 D6 y- _: M) j. E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' F9 `/ ^$ g+ F, b! D0 B  e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ^! u* m2 Q& i4 L1 U3 @6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) Z9 `. X" A( R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; A5 \; Y# Z6 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ~+ }! S2 s( i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" [) L0 x( Y( y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  M+ j& ]9 G& h& F/ x! ~  J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 S" K5 ^7 B- Z# i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* H6 e! v$ Q* s6 r3 U" W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- T) K  Q6 O2 r  q5 O) C2 k2 w- k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ t2 f6 \5 [+ P! `4 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. h: ]( e9 [$ [  H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& {$ |4 C7 c# Q( c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: K6 [. `0 F. q' D1 E; L# N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 E" b+ L6 f5 _) G" L: g0 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 N7 F% j0 O: e9 h+ ?, B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 R) @- V" s- F$ M% T) k$ U<P>I regret not dying</P>
) H1 R) l' v- `9 f+ ~0 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 k$ U( `( `% G& N+ }; m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 A# |- n5 l; s0 a5 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 d/ J5 Y# f& r5 l# x& z9 p' s% w; L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 t2 l; M+ U- E- L! T  O% ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& z& V& v; b4 O) I0 E. ^& N1 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>