【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! f, g. F0 q2 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( E$ Z9 |' r* u) g1 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ @* O+ x/ `/ _4 U: I" B# RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ~/ q) y4 c5 b  RYou needn’t fear anything
) q  o) b/ u0 c0 s8 ]+ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' }8 i1 N1 W5 s* f, n! bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# D* P1 E, l  r! R; oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Z! e1 \2 c; ?# M0 ]& z$ a2 DI want so much to see inside your heart
9 h$ E8 k$ g8 S# O9 l/ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 Q+ c+ d" i$ m+ QI’m still filled with fear
$ `* ?. i# F6 H& ~9 c' \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" h1 ~' y. H& RWith such a tongue as yours,
3 N4 ^  F% t, Q( q- VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- Y$ Z; b! S( l0 t* C( h2 `3 k' qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; w3 S* C2 x) _/ f( S* D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, p$ v* E. b2 \: Z3 S' h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ I1 w/ W" R& q; U/ x$ O- C, u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! X5 s1 P) m. ^& o2 s3 V& d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Q4 v# S6 z- r( v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* n1 ^0 e1 ^6 s  [, d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. k" J/ i9 N  A* g+ v: A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; U% L, E6 [* p! Y- Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: X/ H5 _+ v& N! L* H1 S' U<P>你无需担心</P>
- P3 [7 N* R+ I1 {0 `' l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! f/ ^4 b7 c  {4 C/ N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 M& u5 L. e! j2 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 D! F4 W8 M( H$ ~+ d5 Z( J) W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% j8 n5 b2 \) M! G/ Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: r3 |0 |" E7 \% N) c) D) l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  s$ |) O6 d9 s: p  Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  q5 Q& k$ X9 d3 M2 n/ t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 S& K* b) Y5 ?3 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* t  R/ F" S- E& Y) i% N2 \: ]' ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 {+ x8 K" N$ @- G. |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* `; O9 S8 i/ N% |: \! h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" X/ {( H# O" q3 [; d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 r* `' _; K2 |' O5 j4 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ S. V/ Y' C' f; @1 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S7 y/ d) V- p$ w5 P( N4 u3 i- c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" B& g1 _; n5 k7 j  j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 h2 ~2 f3 N! G# j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ m$ \, }6 ]; X6 u; r, C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. ]8 |3 H( \* n2 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' O* T  K& D' U& f8 N) \# Q! W; M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 ~  j7 Z; x- s- t# d" f/ K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 H$ V, G, Z7 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) v; I5 F% p, W  S, A( Q. B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% x4 {- F6 V7 T) ~: O8 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>