【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 Y6 W6 g) Y& Z% d% K: ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( w0 j- s2 X! o7 J  B1 K1 W( aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; R4 P3 f- v& t3 e2 ~2 l: b* xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ D! z. I) S4 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' h1 {& ]) x! b2 F/ F( GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* T# L4 Q' }/ z( X" F. w, KNothing can compare to my love
0 V* x( U& ^% d) tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( O1 I4 K' a6 V% _/ B3 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 r, [8 C3 Y0 o, I; N  K! f# E: D( EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( ^( r' k1 |- r' e. h  D) II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ x' T% d. ~( @! CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# o6 V2 t: k; B! b2 `: w, jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: t. V" B1 T! }2 v" f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ F# I1 L9 Z( d- M5 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 x) M7 r+ O& o+ U3 h- t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ D* X; ~5 h! S0 C4 _; J2 W1 A$ w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 z& Y6 z. @' T( t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* F* `* @- R5 R  e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& Y/ ^) G) z: \4 k' n4 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ C3 V- E+ ?& P4 L7 L4 w% `8 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 r( G: T. p8 F) q2 s* C! ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ?2 g8 J9 X* P, k' ~4 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 N0 W( [3 }6 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ P$ v% g: z' Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ Z% H( v+ ^# ]7 A! r# r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( M. F, u/ B" M  H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* x3 E& ?) ^, a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' o& \. z4 P( h) Q0 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ J& S( P- X& m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ g' v2 p# x8 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# f7 a3 n0 K6 `% T, p. }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) f1 B7 e9 _7 m: K6 J2 b  e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 R- ~+ E' E  a5 n$ v! |' ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 W$ I* C; T5 {% C/ p" Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& b/ L$ s% Y4 ]  r, T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' d9 o1 _* q9 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Z9 T: o; y' a9 u" l! Q5 v, |! e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ j0 a- C* d: v) _2 U- c$ ?" K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ S9 I7 M/ V9 ]0 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; S( h+ J# W4 ~* C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* p. z* `5 I/ X- A0 r1 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! j% N6 o$ |( g, {2 r( O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 D  V& ~6 i) F9 X  ^: @$ U. a5 J: R0 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 _8 r. ?* y9 i# o3 n; |  X7 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>