【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 C. ~9 f3 x5 u6 y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 k" V! m/ w3 _% p: z  xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, S, [& u. f' l" b. IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ]: ~4 W( R; eThe sky is happy down to its soul
  C) c5 P9 B+ x7 {2 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. c* D: |( t+ {5 L: k6 TYou needn’t fear anything
/ q. c9 T, D4 a/ S7 C& r  fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# h# V( S! G) ]I love you I love you with all my heart
# W2 G# j! \- s+ VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ E; ~$ O# v9 i9 _0 a  pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 r4 G2 {- p; p" k* ^( GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 R4 s$ ~( Z: e% |3 t( KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( [0 r) w! {, JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, R. t/ P- M$ n$ f9 U3 k7 g0 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: w0 L% N7 I2 q5 D# ~8 c6 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 R- @- n) W( r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! `: V; w5 C% c/ M1 ?/ j( i# o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  b, F+ Z9 I9 ]% L! E9 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ~" w/ Z0 P# ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' s' ]" R1 g9 ?8 \: s8 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) I" K& x5 N4 j5 B8 Q. G: z; a/ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" `, O* ~( i% q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( m4 V0 T1 m( a0 ?- @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* x( m* w2 \# P' X! P, m  b: S5 e( f, w+ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) B7 |4 f5 f! x, P/ V& g# s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 E& t4 }! }+ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ J) p  T/ f- l0 E5 e: i" X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 e1 ^& S' F( }$ D2 m( t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% ?3 {6 ~& d5 A; s4 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 P- L1 x& L! n7 F+ U& [6 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ l8 ^9 n% a& D: g9 D7 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! C/ [4 s2 f" B$ x! W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 M; @5 _4 M: x" ]3 |$ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& B8 o6 C4 x& {# G( |8 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 _, d* R& l0 @! }' c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 K6 G; M" y* \9 P3 ^6 X$ g2 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& {$ V  G' o" A7 q* g+ j1 t+ O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! }2 q4 P1 m9 O2 n# C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ F$ [- X, j- @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( l4 P- ^5 @$ q- w& X) \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) B2 y2 Z  ?: Y* Q# {6 Q9 ?' R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ I5 E; Q. b" G& I* P+ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ S6 r0 l: S/ J/ L! T5 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>