【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, R6 D4 ]2 D% \% N- F* H( \9 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 b- [  g1 _' ]9 Q1 J/ L* L' P4 e+ r+ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) |8 |0 O4 Q7 O# `With the moon kissing it every night
- _3 k& q: b0 c8 {/ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) p1 _* P% V; }5 V( W3 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 z8 u& y5 w" E% _I really want to know just how much you love me
9 N0 p" y1 R3 T, J' A! H; JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& V- a9 q; Y  j5 cI’m still filled with fear
6 b2 u& m1 i* I2 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, d5 A1 @- G3 r: oI regret not dying
; r' w( M) u' e) Y9 {# PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 R+ t2 G( W# s6 u4 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' M% H: d7 c+ z3 V* q) \0 L! h* kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: S. E4 O% A+ n& {/ Q7 q; T9 W- B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 w+ D2 w# e" A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ r3 P  k" o; e% O/ f+ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ D7 R) n3 y* |7 c( Z5 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# b4 F& |8 X; |* W4 f( \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 f. _2 ^2 x) r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* y, U* O0 C; M) O2 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# \6 ?# X1 I1 d: m  L1 \" B( v5 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 [  @& A' u0 S0 E, k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" x' _& k& ^: ~9 F. n7 p: F& z9 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 a8 }5 {8 N" S: k6 F! t" ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ U$ |) c# k  j* Z7 b- O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, n) O7 P. W. G: a3 N/ X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 ?$ f4 j8 o. q5 X  `& P& N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 e) D1 s! @  b3 X) ^* {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 C& P$ Q1 V2 G7 x9 F8 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 N, {7 p1 d8 U: o  ]; e7 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! t! S& h! O, s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, M( w* ]2 a0 k& y# L) b* t# t; ?$ K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 s  s& s& R, e' q9 ]1 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 G! h* I1 j1 l0 l! ^# k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- `. l) j$ ^2 u5 f8 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" M" P4 j* y' b7 n) A; g9 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 d+ \5 J+ l- h! N. J4 S% d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) V& _8 U/ l, ^5 J, \6 r0 V1 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>