【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 W2 L4 U- s- W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- m: u- w2 |0 PWith the moon kissing it every night
7 x# k0 W  g# b# oSeeing the sky content with its love
5 L/ D7 t: w1 `5 y1 z7 d0 V0 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, I+ ]. s( Y* b* u! N! ?8 z) Q, zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 {! E  {3 x; c  i, p& |+ x9 ^3 PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. i3 c0 B( v5 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& z  K6 s% `5 |6 Z7 S4 w9 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 `# h, K# a! {: j5 K) iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# s* y$ P! V. D) v0 KI’m still filled with fear
  ]$ L' i/ b2 D  M* OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! M" a9 {0 _2 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; A  N6 G  y1 N8 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* O- a$ M9 y  d2 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( s' d: m7 n( @4 j7 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) f6 o; V3 v! L  F# O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, v- S4 X' i: Z: W! k( L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 f7 I- h; R* H# Z/ M5 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  t5 q3 s& E+ z4 ^- p6 K2 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ~; t  B- P. ^* T, k5 G0 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( `2 J* I" ?0 F4 W/ J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 m6 i. {2 t! S( ]& K6 A) B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" w% r3 d  }& x8 C' t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( d- h( N' L# ~, x3 P! b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 j" H4 }' @* s' S( M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* C; r' g# U9 V6 D1 X0 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, o) U& N. _  `) q0 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( v( m; L1 J6 V* W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 J) K1 L3 z6 r  u+ ]+ @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G' [+ r: Z: B4 l, K' Y: y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ C$ R: D; p+ [) k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! A$ I( C  g; \% c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' T. v, k9 N! H3 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. n+ t) g* V( k6 d" j/ T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 |. o9 K& ?6 M/ F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 u2 q7 }' w' W$ Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' m2 G$ S, B" `2 n& b$ M: Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) J& \# \) a( t# d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* d3 g5 N% V( e- S6 S# E1 e8 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& e+ R6 k2 L& w. s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) m' C; G! ?- g/ h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( d! z5 L% |7 O  n" j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ Y! N$ j3 F  z2 H2 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 u0 J8 {. y8 e1 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 R  u  r/ b& n% ~# {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>