【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 @  {/ ~3 U3 A8 r! Y' q5 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 C+ S9 }; s& ~2 m$ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; W4 P3 H& B# K8 [" Z6 @4 Z9 oSeeing the sky content with its love
" {1 N- d# M/ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: Y+ G! D* q" ]% C* G9 c: NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, z- w4 ~1 h% M* W# C% _1 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( I& x  ~* g1 b8 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! @% {; q" k! T* }- H/ _I want so much to see inside your heart
  g1 \. D  C# L: q$ L% SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ A% D0 O) F6 h& m! o, TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% c+ e  \9 o/ QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; e! O& m& q' F1 C3 e7 B) U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  D4 k5 A: E6 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( |8 `! ^0 }/ K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 T: q% j" k3 x0 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ r/ N" ~; P: {! a, s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 N5 T4 U9 [  _: C( y# T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 T# a0 G4 B5 k) H$ y2 q. p6 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 }$ c% f0 D( l2 R# W! }# m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* I. ~9 u2 |7 v7 p2 S5 p) `* M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: h+ d  d: r- v' i$ q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* K- p4 S9 k: ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. E- m/ ~9 F( u! E9 c' K+ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# R3 f' f* |5 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" M+ D" R3 X1 V) `, u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* y' N; |+ v2 z2 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* K/ c& x- Q9 }0 N" w2 T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- R5 K: I4 S# C0 Z) B# \2 a- _9 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ i0 Q3 n  a+ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) A8 C9 A" |* k0 r6 F# j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( z  o+ }# Q; S+ H) `6 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: F! d2 n- Q, I+ p9 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ Z8 G% |) c( G& L' N% d# d( g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( e4 {  i; r4 n) y9 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 t6 w6 k- I' N- [$ W* g3 v: }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ w9 @8 ?/ E: r4 R# g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 k  ]$ t# z1 H/ F  Z3 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) n; `0 x, S( g9 f- `, N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
! ]+ T7 q' X4 h
2 d0 ?1 I/ e% @% T. p- X! q我请你剖开它
# ]; B4 y( y' ^) U  ]
/ I, m# l" _4 M* }1 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 x! W6 ]7 _% C2 v4 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>