【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( V! V  N* {( f: I3 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 p. l" [) E. L/ D% w) V/ T# |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ y) d1 b9 s& s) rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- p4 w2 C: H5 Z2 f0 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  H/ t2 K7 s! A' `9 t' GI love you I love you with all my heart
2 V# e% ^3 R+ HNothing can compare to my love
& `- |$ M7 U! ^, R) l. W1 ~' h$ x6 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" Y0 N& x5 N. R6 L; @9 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( |% g! W( L  }: _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( V9 h! {9 O( R0 n( HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 h# g3 u3 w4 o" E* ]" f9 tI regret not dying
& f0 Z, @' G0 T: ?  z, T4 z2 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 u( w# u5 O1 M' O% G" X3 x5 pWith such a tongue as yours,
+ X- D; t; K3 e! p- F, XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# R; {( ~/ V! M# J! [4 q* BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O5 x# o- v  C& l/ lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* J7 f/ e* R$ s& B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 M% }5 e# v4 B. N  b# G$ O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# J6 Y/ T' n4 F  F5 H; S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) x/ z8 |- w; N1 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ]# v* m1 [4 B7 p' U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 M8 V% r' B7 ~4 @1 }: l  {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, f" _8 x0 [! |<P>你无需担心</P>
; V8 s, ^! Z' M, E* s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) s. E" B" `3 t  ~/ H' I$ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! @0 M; ~6 ~- c7 X0 J- |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ {# o0 C. n2 E* \# `9 Z8 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ?) O1 a2 |$ b9 g; W7 U9 Z3 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; v$ ]. {* K  n* T# B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* m2 G8 x" w, J$ d) |: v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 V; A3 X5 g$ m" Q1 o6 S' Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* W1 }5 F& J/ S1 s! ?+ g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 w$ ~) N6 S' ~' `* K& I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! L1 X. v8 I6 O! V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" S: Q! M4 {  ~# y; F1 l2 U! R! {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* `4 V# S; h- {; q2 Y5 b8 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ ]5 j+ R% U' \+ o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 @+ r: W& a/ z) O) {8 I5 `" C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, _* s+ Z! f5 Q  A' [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* }. r9 w+ `, X) h8 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Y8 E  [6 E" z  q8 e' v+ A0 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 z8 [3 X1 n. Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 U! l4 r0 w/ l, x4 j  m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, p  j6 U2 e6 G) g/ S: W4 @$ q4 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# @- u8 X) c9 v  p$ O4 N, H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: J" z- K, h+ T* F; s. r' J" R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>