【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 @  k: Y  i: R# U+ n) V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 S, n4 \; L) y2 k' \Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 P2 k9 Q3 A, Q. O- l5 Q) JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 k- x& [/ S$ e6 t! e) oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ~2 a7 ~, ?& {, B$ }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* p' y2 M5 d. r8 D) }I love you I love you with all my heart
7 |1 p3 m. X0 A1 wNothing can compare to my love
) k* O5 j$ X- r: MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  `8 ]7 Q! D2 b" s4 D5 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 K3 m2 Z1 s, \9 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' G1 U# Z5 ]; i: ]- U# n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 U' l) M: k8 W% F7 t, P8 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 i( }) S1 K5 s0 I% M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) {( k# W8 ]4 m% d2 D9 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ x% K" \% s: \: u% {  _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 B( |- ^2 g4 `, r/ [) `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 L8 O& ~, G9 f# l5 G9 `6 b+ w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 h+ G/ U- \2 r4 g( Z6 S9 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' T, K! K( j+ q8 V% `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 U; `2 x' F. J9 O  f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: O4 Q8 M6 ]2 T( P' g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, {2 j7 c: I7 X5 S! B; f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! I, y+ h6 `2 C# T9 N7 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ z3 z2 x0 {2 |/ }# K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ^8 b9 W  Z+ P6 b: W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 W! v! B& E6 ~+ n$ B2 s- B5 n- s" i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( u/ q6 R. r4 Z) E$ R% O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 c8 _, i0 T2 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: P+ @! R& Y- ^6 ~" P0 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 `3 ?, d9 k0 [! e# f1 r8 B5 p$ b% a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 w# ~- n9 E5 o6 H+ o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 \+ N5 ^+ b1 x% B' C<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 S6 C, t  k; V, A( y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ {2 e2 q* ]5 g! v$ M" S! e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 v- Y' a2 A$ u1 q7 c. n) @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ?* i% {. V* z7 \9 j7 j1 K# t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 q. k' K3 @4 a# w7 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ^/ B0 u) a4 ^4 E; x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 c! Y& B' ~' I( T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 S7 e4 y: t" ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [. \7 H. c4 w5 \: V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>