【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# m8 O1 p9 c5 y, B6 ?0 B歌词我附在后面。
8 \" `4 `  e& L% [" i: x4 E. Y- [2 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ T  d" L, ]$ Y* r% L3 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Q- C5 @! z/ \# r' M, j  Q! DThe sky is happy down to its soul
% c$ M& \" H, R6 G& y; P0 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 N( ~1 |# q" K5 X9 f9 \1 AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- _6 Q2 u) E' S6 h2 N, F; sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* g& k. I8 f' _1 CNothing can compare to my love
. I& f' ~+ M, }0 j7 L7 Y: c1 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 p0 c! W; x, T3 N3 V% AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, `" C: o1 f/ S4 d- N# W! E$ yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  C6 }- A6 I# Q6 u, E; zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 }- X9 `$ H/ V$ s" I" c: r' GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ m! J6 E$ \0 b% Z5 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; R8 k4 ^+ ~$ FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! p: z. {! Q# D* g1 k: C! C. O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: |; j! ^( A; ]6 R" u$ o* e$ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 F0 D" ~4 J* Z; b( q( G+ b0 w$ W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 _- }7 J! I; A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ U0 r( U" z; x; ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 j  e0 q+ ?, U- u2 o$ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" N. S" b: m! p  U% \1 v  m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( J" q' @( O! Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 \2 P; J5 F5 G* _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, `7 v, a+ L. ]" \6 m3 v4 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% m& G& }2 K0 x$ a0 @8 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 e, _$ U3 I9 Y9 {, s: B0 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! Y  |3 I& O* R. `0 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  \7 M( }4 \9 Q! Y0 e& a7 B7 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. r$ m1 D9 W4 i: C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 p) f8 i( S: D1 q4 \5 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 z4 k7 W' ^  P% F! R# G: `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ w5 Y3 Q% P5 f8 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ~) g0 Q4 p7 w, {/ X/ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ F( F& R9 T+ e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& ?: x8 z" e2 y. X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) q# n# a7 p( z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ ^3 T( C9 M  }  z2 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 f7 f5 e" R! E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>