【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' u  G  U/ g+ l& G3 P  N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; F. e  a* N) r5 N! hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! c1 H$ B+ S( F& X( wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- i/ V5 R3 e9 E( V( J  X# ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( I% Y- X# P0 d- k/ sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 k6 V. p3 E5 @$ w: N& ^' mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 q2 Z0 D- {$ k+ l4 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" K& ?  s' `0 P# Z: q* NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( q' R- y( r- c: D/ W3 `& [" zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% b" c" q. P, [: m1 _& F/ g4 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 w% m0 }1 `7 u2 a5 ]% n. E0 @8 k. @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 T. A' A' [, P3 v  e- c6 c2 l3 H& @, ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 w0 T  k# P2 E$ l8 r7 ~7 n+ w- q3 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ^. Z* H1 j, {; }) b( p+ v- p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: Y: \0 r! ^* f6 ?  b+ ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' w# r& b8 S0 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) X3 \- s# E1 Q3 {: D0 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" c, Z2 f' I+ a4 z7 p2 X& f; g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ R% @9 V0 |/ S1 S) ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 ~9 W2 y: M) T% G: i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- I4 f8 A7 l5 Z( k0 s& ]$ v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Y- `) j& [4 ]: q  V1 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( l5 N# v) L0 k4 p* N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 Z6 N5 J# I4 }5 e' J. Q5 p9 M( Z6 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 S% a7 M! Z5 Z* v! Z- O8 x( H( r7 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }/ h: M" s, E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& r, G3 V3 c* X; U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( l/ U  J6 l2 G) D& B5 M$ J4 [3 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 r' w% [9 i# g# U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" J, {7 Q" l8 l' W. M* d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& x6 I7 F! Y% m% U2 [* p5 x2 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 n! E5 K: t7 W& w7 x# A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* L' H! H# G# T) N8 k. `" i- w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) S" R$ Q$ V* p) X# r& I5 l3 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% N: }0 ~% }+ D* L( X0 h  o# P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 |: f5 w/ u! e; z! c% a1 ]. S6 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# |' ]- W  w6 q1 L9 x* |( S! R( R3 m5 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& E4 `6 G& Y3 }: d& I! |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 F8 O9 Z: p2 O) J" d3 O1 N: { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" P6 F8 x; e$ r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>