【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% H: y5 y1 Q, U% S' {! {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* K8 ?3 C' P* H; r% JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 x, {9 {% K* oWith the moon kissing it every night
& w. X  I) v8 G7 J! S# sSeeing the sky content with its love
' o, {, X4 F+ s. h& WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ Y  h( D2 V( a# b" v  ]& mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" X0 U, z/ P5 d* ~I really want to know just how much you love me
# h: s8 }- n5 V& U- pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 K% i0 h: O9 ?' Z# H2 Q3 J4 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 R/ z0 v) Y" F3 ~: B) \% T; GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 D+ J( \  A, Z3 y/ X+ e; A7 WI regret not dying
, d6 I9 R5 x5 g- BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ D: j8 ?  S5 ~; v/ G: KWith such a tongue as yours,
2 K7 w9 C* C( k; j" r" QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 P; @0 C' E$ S: d2 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 y4 ~. {, e' Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; t! }0 `( l0 @) p) ]; N: }7 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% z0 L9 [' j* F) U3 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ y: \4 {% u( I) V$ F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 G" |8 r8 @) G7 l" o( X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  ?3 l8 o- K) ?7 A; ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 N3 D/ {. ?; a; \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 K- d0 v6 O6 T9 Z9 i" o8 ]6 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 B/ B$ N/ n( p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; B  s5 w6 N) s2 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, w0 {& g# y2 ?* s& i/ L) b( s  Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  M2 U0 ~/ m- g* ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# W6 [7 |  [2 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 _, D7 j2 ]+ W$ T* F$ e3 O1 L+ [0 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! r, p- ?5 V# f) H7 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 I0 T  m& k3 ^% M' r- L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 n$ M1 n/ M$ E  F0 U4 g# N/ f; h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: i& J5 e6 [" d/ d( h, b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 i6 E% |7 c+ C# {% I) D5 ^2 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, v, F8 W) l& Z4 E# h0 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& o% X' _$ i( G* C& i# `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ S: C9 b, R' C2 ~" c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. g6 Q6 t6 s+ X$ X+ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& v1 g9 G  q- _% N7 g$ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 I/ u* ?$ U, g+ l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% ^9 P8 O1 z+ u( q4 P, }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ]6 K/ Q# F- x# ~/ i/ O4 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% r% }: U# m4 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ R% y* H( ]) [8 Y/ _7 h% }/ f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>