【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 Y6 \0 v- K7 v8 I7 s( B) i1 b歌词我附在后面。
( W$ x. W: M- v5 T( n5 L- w# kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# l9 L, K' D) l& SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 \" t0 M0 O1 `+ v% X5 T; {5 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 i, Z, \/ M0 V" T8 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
! P2 B, f8 B8 \With the moon kissing it every night
+ }. M( ]  k( a2 I! G; g4 M. oSeeing the sky content with its love
* N( z) P: y+ cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 r# U# |+ M) ^7 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 G/ a- s* {! [# J0 Z9 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' _2 @% O2 [  l/ U+ p2 `3 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* t- _, W! F. @# Z0 e9 NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ \2 i1 }: P" O6 U, RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- {! S3 B& F$ x4 ~I regret not dying
4 H, K/ K. |8 e' u, w; T8 b6 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" Y  P, ?2 m3 c2 b0 x$ aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" j5 J  ]. ~/ A$ W6 n+ d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# n* _5 n! U0 }+ c# @8 j) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' `6 h5 B6 w3 C; h5 W8 \- @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ?5 @, }( H' h- a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  w, P4 o" j+ W+ K- S4 ]3 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 P2 q; w/ Z5 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 ~* V  C- q7 D+ {, X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 }' U4 c" J3 g) {( B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- E; Q0 L  E- C0 }5 L& e) h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ^1 A5 z7 r# A5 k; D. F% H3 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) }' h( Q. T# G; L. f1 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ^' ~6 ~1 |! L+ d/ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ?! O5 |) r+ O: E2 [& c! U2 b9 H- O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: H: U7 g# d: B9 t! ~3 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, P8 C& K- d8 E: Z# ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- y% U  m; Q2 t. _- L9 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 j; C+ f  K) R% a! s0 T- W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 f2 N7 b* G8 t2 n, M# p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! S' n+ v, V: }9 f% _+ j% ~# t! t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ W! U. E" w" i/ O; Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" {5 K3 P' l# |2 T  T/ H5 K! I8 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" }1 V& j% u6 u& J8 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( W  R9 a+ ~& c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, X8 P5 k. X  r, W2 f$ m. V% Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 e# f8 i, \9 a# _  l% S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; k$ g# s2 A$ D. q( \0 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- a: \5 D6 |" P& V9 I3 ^; L$ t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ Z- g2 p; O" l# i- Z* x& h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: c. _6 n; H5 [2 X* x& X7 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) z3 P8 k& H! j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& B0 s4 h7 V! n6 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* p4 l: z) v+ C0 v% W& G3 P" w. E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 n; Q/ x2 l+ f1 z! S3 c* s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 S5 @! _- a# J7 V8 U+ g6 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>