【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 E* r3 \, F6 t1 X& H( eThe sky is happy down to its soul
- F* H1 t; r- QWith the moon kissing it every night
6 }/ g& S& u/ E8 W8 d- S) SSeeing the sky content with its love
  q4 a# S! f, K3 Q9 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 P" h# X+ i9 M3 @* b7 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: Y6 y, o% p  D( s0 vEvery other word you utter is love
1 @) I) F( f' Q% E) rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! \3 ^& k. j5 T% n8 S+ rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  Z; K! e5 F. k0 z  I6 D7 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ l) z1 ~( \$ Z/ ^* cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 m0 T) X2 V5 m; H* q! Y6 F4 v& OI’m still filled with fear
1 X% ?7 c! H3 _5 O: VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 @0 D  w2 V, _' y! cWith such a tongue as yours,
( ^1 M, p8 d8 d3 s( WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* _- t+ n8 W. A: k& R" qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 |) r4 d$ V7 o4 W/ b( ~4 m$ o( [& k3 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; C1 e) U) \' a8 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' e  W" N  o0 F6 F4 |( Z$ s& H+ J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ^+ m; J; [; ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! M& x5 c% i' r+ N) \6 o9 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 v0 V$ ?, i$ t% ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 }: n' G* l* ?& B7 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 `- h$ `! ^; K$ U4 z, g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 q" Z  z9 m2 Q% j8 a5 N6 s7 B4 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% |; d& A- e8 S; L: o: i$ v4 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 l1 r, w6 P5 W6 h/ T8 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' F; G5 l' ]+ [+ a0 R9 z4 f: x$ z2 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 e- e. E& s* S: V- a8 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 {$ _& n, k* n; t+ Q3 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ~# j! f1 p- D$ s# k  s/ Q2 n; c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ \+ S- A( ~2 v& z/ g8 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 o7 R% |% o3 j8 S( n! R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 z& {" F7 U8 v6 `6 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" W) ^- _4 q/ h$ R% n3 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ t9 j5 D& u9 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 P/ Y* |3 O4 {4 [- g2 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ?0 _1 k  c4 s$ x1 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 b% m7 y& a6 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 b  v$ ]+ b' I+ @9 a" B+ R3 M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ Y! e* ?) z9 {% u% r) @0 M! }9 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ f! K/ a. A# f/ X, e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 N% r. o' @: E' w2 e6 D3 H$ F/ c. W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 R3 z& {  ]3 M# p) m' g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% R% E  F, U! Y; A( \+ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: z- [, Q; N* `9 O4 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" v9 a! i" O( r5 y6 ?7 h) }( j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; g' m( \2 l) D: i1 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>