【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: J  t" z2 x1 U& J歌词我附在后面。
& ~% D+ O1 `  V! [' b; ?9 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 T  E% n: q1 n4 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 M' f2 Z- ~4 U/ I& p' c; _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  B- r/ o- w$ g5 \# X* `  dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# ~( X" `8 Z. q/ L; m4 \! K# ~; AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ~6 p. u1 z$ u& ]5 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 o( ^. o" ~, S+ i$ @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  n6 u4 k* P4 {; v- K" h: a: \Nothing can compare to my love
$ P" b8 X) T& t/ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. z9 i) C7 \! @% }! mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% I5 b) r+ D/ _( J( PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. C4 q) K) f7 U1 ]7 N% j, HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) c1 k1 d: v# |* X9 J2 ^I regret not dying
' [8 b7 }& q9 X6 m" p) HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  y) N3 ~5 |( p& eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, e' K2 e& B2 i8 Z( ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 \9 A' S0 ?4 ?9 R. P$ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ P% S1 B3 N$ q) |1 a/ {$ t0 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 w9 w: G% V3 ]: z- N- E# T! S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. S( q$ M" u7 u8 z, _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 E" c* T9 a8 x1 E+ ^3 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; _: l8 h0 }6 V7 i( ]1 y; x2 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  \) W- B  h" J0 C, }+ u1 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" [# i$ ^3 a7 F: `' {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ]9 k4 W/ w/ t4 s  e" k! F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 b- ~; Z, l; V; A$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 p% w& @5 d- D7 Q4 t! l% ^+ f% ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: q% A# J- O5 v6 J. F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; P' ?. w8 Q! L. r3 A4 r  u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; K, f1 U: u$ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 y; K+ E; }# G% K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ?" b7 {, {; h9 z+ x% g4 O* d* y- t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 g7 T, P" G0 {# g9 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  n! T5 z. V1 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# T. v( D; f( W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 A. W- p& @9 N- |/ n3 E) R5 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 F& d+ C. T* j6 |* P  s( M6 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 G2 t3 e- t6 T  Z* L9 E& F1 C, o. T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 X0 b! U" d- u, c% k  y0 \5 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( `9 \7 Q2 @& F1 e* E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ a- _3 x3 `/ ?  e, u' Z# g. ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  }$ r( @8 i) o, M; A4 E" H% x9 i6 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 `5 m) h4 W. C, n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 ]3 [1 J5 ^1 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  }" `! f7 L# u2 m+ J' O7 Q+ |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) d4 x* p: \1 p7 e) o& B3 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  u2 x' m3 v+ o' `# ]: t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- t, }" w7 N1 ~! Z! E& k/ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, e+ b  Y6 v3 i3 u8 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" O+ ]4 B4 j. w1 W2 X) j* `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>