【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. p% K" `7 u7 k: Y. r. Z: a# f1 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! L2 F1 W7 e: H( ^/ s' yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, y, D& M6 Q/ [0 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 \& P; X- Z, e0 T* p" w# @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- L1 ?5 g! y, W; D0 w" nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ u5 z! D( y2 R* k1 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 I6 |2 H7 d7 \* U5 r+ M: H# q7 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) L% W; _- w4 P- pI regret not dying
6 ~: l$ h/ }9 C& K- e3 s8 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- A6 G7 w0 t" G" y  c6 b  `6 D2 UWith such a tongue as yours,
) u) L) ^2 c& {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 h2 K. f( R: u* ^* |* S1 i( }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* h' J7 r3 c* h3 R' H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) H* j0 Y/ G" n/ [! P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 U0 C8 D9 Y+ X$ v. t& K7 Z' `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 D/ [- K& V8 n; e  b5 X+ p3 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 \  H1 y# d% o: O& w- w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 S% n  n$ i, E: L2 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) Q% L/ w! }  {6 I. J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) k  F; ~8 n- Q) ?# j& h( D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 N! W* M. t( Z- `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 u5 a# ]* H5 }5 d( J/ s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' |8 x" L& M6 y" Y- K: E3 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 B* L+ X! q$ j) \( s& F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& `3 Q/ ]/ Q! T6 x0 p7 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) @; z* F# D$ K# B4 G9 U  ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 s# B* D4 G* p& F  x# F  d* P0 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 a) e/ L# T0 h$ w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. a# X7 Y/ K% n+ h2 _" t3 D. S/ H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 j0 Q  e( d  b0 r0 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
- C( x. I. G( ^# W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* c+ [  C% C8 f" t; y; a% Q2 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 s- s" s0 K! @' `8 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# ^; F5 e+ \/ K* |# N- x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- l$ w- q* u: R9 g4 {* O; p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ w& q9 Q0 V4 C. p+ E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( r0 m3 Q/ r8 x  W9 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 W4 Z) E3 z& L, B: @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>