【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. _4 ~: ]* B  {0 `- U$ p4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 T% _5 D+ E% H& IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 i5 @: j& u& _, F; Y1 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; a- u3 @  Y/ P9 o$ Z9 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 P, r- z4 G, I! yWith the moon kissing it every night
, K' j; b2 V; w! Z( vSeeing the sky content with its love
2 y1 u( G  L# O9 R/ ^" l% VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" ?- N; `4 J* S  N" {" Z( V; k. yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- O9 m: T1 [0 d! ^( x) |3 \/ IEvery other word you utter is love
. T8 a% x2 g* G, ]* v" gI really want to know just how much you love me
7 ^1 h0 b6 ?! [0 i! ^2 V$ C) @! eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 I' a8 B: l. h6 @) f) DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! U: F& l/ g) J6 g0 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 L4 W3 z% D7 {3 Q! a7 x, ]* WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" @6 f9 K  m3 x8 r0 m( aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( n7 }% S, ]3 E6 r. k, e5 k, S# JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& |0 |3 k4 Y* _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& _- Z& ]* B) `2 F5 Y, D& r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* N- t" }0 i( w' y( z1 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& r$ `, q. H+ M8 q6 X; ^: S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ A( L, d! R# m  Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# |7 i. R  V/ k: g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) {, l9 Q! u8 [+ E7 v  S2 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 I. b8 E! P/ Q, L0 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ s! Q# ?# v8 `/ p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 |: N+ o" V/ G' J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ Z, u- m" l+ r0 R9 e/ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ }' p' b/ S5 ~2 Y* I9 g0 M; f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 D- q) a' i1 I' [$ W4 `2 g6 r' }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; w( t0 [0 P; ?0 A: d  M- u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& h1 g3 I# b$ A8 Q, }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ?9 g0 q& K2 m& Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ H  }" {* }5 ^; G; e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; s. u0 G/ d* Q4 j  f: M$ `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# M( N. m( C# S+ c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 M- e+ z$ }* Z' x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 A* t: F- m, D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  u! j9 q0 K  P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( x1 ^* F$ t) u7 G' M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( t5 }' ?; q, `7 Y& ]" p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) v* b' _# T  ?0 f7 v: I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 m% g* P1 f6 z$ i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 B% q: }6 G5 R$ v/ R' U" u/ `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) T9 E, J9 D# j7 C3 o: ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, o2 C3 G' ?# h, {/ e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 A9 b5 c4 E( p9 @' q我请你剖开它

' M- @7 N- u- @" O* R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Y# g: E# i, G4 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>