【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ d+ w, g% s5 F% _0 u6 D$ V* ]; ]9 T+ |歌词我附在后面。
* c" S9 d2 i* g: EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 z! Q9 W: ~4 H* p+ w6 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% E5 H# s2 K/ {0 ]0 m1 S7 ~3 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  j( H9 ]1 p, E$ |7 BWith the moon kissing it every night
1 Z& b3 U2 c) NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, d9 `2 O) E" `7 p  `) SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( M4 N5 e. u' x9 E4 w* PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% }" b0 g# s) w. B" UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( v; x3 O  n& l: j  s9 A2 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- M& A( A& P+ [- V% gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, j: E3 q$ r3 X' p& G6 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 v  L% P* B; d4 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 P: C9 k4 b! e3 I$ j8 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- b1 y; `% X# Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; g+ ?( m  j* F& [6 a$ j5 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) v6 J/ ?# v5 B, f  s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' p! v2 D& ^# b% a7 l& q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ~- k9 U9 Y6 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: x. l$ j4 {5 V  I2 T: `* x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 [8 E3 t2 z9 m% h$ C9 C% I8 O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 r( v: }( t8 n) L7 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! R3 i$ ^( n$ l7 m, d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 G* l8 d# u/ b8 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 S8 K* _% u$ A0 }6 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* D3 q5 s" Q( n  N, \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  g# k- Z& `+ l( n- T2 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 f: n" a0 W% Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  H' ?/ C/ I8 ?# [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 m- p/ J9 B& Q2 C' [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; X+ ]# g* F% A/ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 s" g  p, a% S3 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& q4 Y7 w) Q& B7 G2 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' _9 T* @. |% x$ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: I. D$ i4 ?1 R0 [) R* s! G8 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( a  O5 j- H3 g/ S" X# q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ]: }) P5 O# F! ?3 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; I0 N: x9 O& j7 }7 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 R6 X; d, j7 m! a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 A* M3 d: r; [" c% I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>