【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
8 i/ D* J: g$ v& H$ W/ ?
, {2 G. Q8 l8 o  A1 R+ K8 ^
. N( I! x4 q# a. ^- x3 b% P( d歌词我附在后面。
' G/ T7 r4 K" @) O2 ?6 n: y' X- }The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 x' L! ]2 J, W( n3 E  S( N6 L; TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 B0 f# T2 c4 B+ k$ `  R  dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( u/ a" {$ R1 }. `The sky is happy down to its soul
3 D/ V/ t# z4 J# C- LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ L/ a. E- f( g# E( `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 r) l* Z6 K5 }4 a6 C% k, d# zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ L$ q6 q6 t3 [. h5 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' T7 b- k+ b7 {; T6 X9 L* {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- T9 i+ A/ t; eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 `3 c- a$ I* W9 ?1 |2 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( _; Z0 ~9 @0 f: \7 `$ iI regret not dying
9 f' N/ o+ Y* N3 |8 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 k: |& d! F4 s9 J
" B: E& n7 M6 D7 i7 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 }7 R4 [2 z" b) v( v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; {+ s) m5 c  \. w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, d* i" o+ _) G: o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" |! H$ G+ u3 I' C$ J! @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ]( @( y, w& u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" I) r. c+ j. X) k2 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ @! S8 E, ?6 D/ ]+ A$ g* v/ l0 n& o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 q5 D; |2 K- S+ L5 s, ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" K& X+ U& b3 R) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 E+ D9 \% z8 q+ b2 E  H+ a9 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* s5 w9 S' x# k- Y- q+ R$ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ]- E' Q- \% F! }- N: x; B% |! R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: V* B8 s- s& i! b. P& Q0 s- A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; f% F1 N+ }3 H$ w' B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 h4 ]# V/ G* F" k5 f6 j. i( w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ L8 ?% V& Z. z3 ~/ B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 a/ W! b- p; y) i  _( R<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ |" z* V* W% t2 ~" a2 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ }7 C9 o% A# }/ z7 Q. Q; Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! H- ]) g! p- @; h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ U+ j1 F/ `* e6 |: D$ e$ P9 i# [8 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B4 P  S  `! v0 @8 }) J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* I0 m( K% y! @( I, G# P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 M9 n+ T9 o& m. K2 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 f7 b/ n' s1 Z0 m我请你剖开它

  D" Q- E" u0 }$ F4 F8 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
6 _+ b9 x) n( _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>