【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* O, ^9 v7 J/ y* x  kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) H( `0 k: L+ X* Q- V+ B- g3 g0 e$ fThe sky is happy down to its soul
' Y/ h1 e4 a: L8 E" eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ S4 e' t5 k: w! B( |- hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 W, }  t# ~" S4 `, [: q5 U8 ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# @1 \: I% L" Z, E" M3 D7 c* }: LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 D& `, S. O) F) r7 t8 A' i& UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 t! r; g4 H( r4 h% m: }; e& QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* m1 |7 b! d: y& j( d/ {# }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ ]3 d' h+ Z5 w5 j' t4 Q; V/ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% @& ~( a! k8 b+ A( K; h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ~" \9 z  o4 w+ T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. U5 Y$ `" i; f& w$ P! C0 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  G8 ~$ c9 G5 E9 W0 f! Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- W% j% c: n* }, h, Z/ |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( h# x( K( F+ X0 U% j0 x, J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" T' i; J' K5 V1 y3 S* E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% j% P+ l' o$ |/ t. `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 Q  ^) _+ W3 r) q: W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 n# v# o+ I( ?5 d- Q1 W# A& V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: S4 x% g. y3 ~% S% k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ ?0 }9 I4 W7 y/ r# N+ U1 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 C- ]- }, |) B1 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- g% T! A% v- c8 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 l) y6 p( M* D/ `, h9 O: z" \5 {, s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ K5 ~' p# }9 X7 g8 J* o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( R" w" {! {8 }1 i/ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ t# N: p: s+ _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 A9 j) P8 M1 j7 x+ e) p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 c; p* F9 `* k. B% ]! v; c/ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
& W6 B; B- ]9 P- i$ K9 e9 d/ i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! V9 U+ _0 F4 Q: n  \& V2 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% N! j* G* J3 g4 x  ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 Z$ i' F/ ~( b# z  ?- r) Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! _3 T7 ?) I8 ]  T$ G' m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>