【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 S& ]7 e; ~  x, M歌词我附在后面。
' m( R. @/ r  u9 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. `% y. F& e' X/ q1 F3 D; fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* `+ a2 w- r, z! ?5 M7 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
( V4 W, |+ J" F# g! j  cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 N4 M: J' ]# A9 b! L$ D/ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) D2 b) T/ |  ]2 QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. r$ J% t  k5 y1 n* uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 |- Q; |! y* Y1 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ l1 X# Z, ^8 O. j5 w" U& E9 K8 u; uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& {+ b* V  G1 L' ~2 p. @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 N; k" j* Z" p3 r& m% G) k  JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 a7 n8 Q6 f9 N5 K1 |" I0 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. s/ a, m$ \! n. M: l% P9 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: H) D- A& B# U# N1 h0 D: h6 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 `: U3 S* [3 S5 Z( B& y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( _* y) G  `8 _  f0 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! G2 x8 ~+ T( o# M7 _) b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; ~, y- c, T; S) b1 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; r$ O7 W: u* h7 |0 b<P>你无需担心</P>
) U1 A  b# N/ {/ l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ^- l- Q0 _6 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 a4 _5 i, q, u2 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- W, R) a$ D% i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 T' v0 i1 f4 a+ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: M- ^4 L5 A7 A. t  S  q! r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 E: k# I, U1 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 ^$ G. q$ n+ @1 T9 @; @) w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% T" A6 l; R% Q4 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. B2 _4 K3 ]- s$ g6 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& H+ h  f" e( [, }4 g6 }& j1 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( z! a& y/ \% ?( x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 Y" ^, V6 @0 {2 C% K2 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 j; X/ U5 u1 p3 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- I+ o! m  h4 t5 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 `& Q; O7 t4 S我请你剖开它
1 \9 a) [" b" m1 ]6 Q
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>