【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 q1 B* |; g% `/ q7 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Y3 r+ q( {' {% t! h5 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ?8 K6 [/ M) |. |) b% ]' q' }7 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 g/ C0 [0 v9 }9 j. R% VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* F- r. {1 I; FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 ~( Z9 L- I. |# B3 uNothing can compare to my love
, j" x7 u4 F! T0 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. N2 H! M$ O1 D9 G  cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) Z6 V* T) y: L3 J# oI want so much to see inside your heart
4 V+ }* s( }$ }  _, w' h( b- u; MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 Z; u7 t7 C& s8 Y$ }2 ~) L" O7 |! oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 x" @7 O" Z2 P5 N* RWith such a tongue as yours,
0 M1 G& n2 N+ g) O7 }) {( v3 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" s( [4 a& x+ ~3 l4 F1 z/ z8 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" }6 K$ r4 t0 G4 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; }4 A) m* M6 V- v$ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 y' E3 O! _, R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 L* Y1 O% r2 \8 X# N: X' W1 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ?$ _( s% }2 B" E* W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% p1 m6 A; z8 t+ y9 n% g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Z/ E* {, s1 E3 U; S, `# R<P>你无需担心</P>
8 N  h' z$ d$ B( K4 z* V4 a, p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; r& s9 w  g; p  ?) r5 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 E7 e3 |9 o8 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 y3 e0 P' n* Y2 [9 X; V) R  N/ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" F0 t% ^5 @5 h) p7 |0 @% ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' W9 \7 t% [7 v: P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N. J6 ~* a! r( s1 s  C( |2 e$ d# [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 J" W5 F9 B/ a7 R3 r, I  L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 x3 f# c& u& U( T: K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; K9 K. ~7 l3 g& H<P>I regret not dying</P>
! f3 \6 J; [# C& j, t7 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- D* s7 X9 M6 L+ |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ?' Z2 ~, l/ M$ H0 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* U8 B2 W7 `$ v3 A- Z1 {5 T5 o! b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ \! S) n% L' T& Z/ [) T) }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>