【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 N  W/ Y  l- h% J( o9 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* Q! B: X! v# JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& G$ ?& C+ k6 C3 ]( J3 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; |  D$ Y' x. }- v( z7 gSeeing the sky content with its love
. a9 R9 z& p: q5 }' t- h. \; OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 U1 _1 O4 L8 e/ b& X$ r, XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ Q( |0 Q+ g6 LI really want to know just how much you love me
1 n  b5 K, z/ W2 _8 @6 ?- lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) [% v; e0 z! ^9 c: I3 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! O0 F! M: i  R. m. Z) _& jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 k9 E+ Y( I: H" [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( s1 h- G( E8 L# `) r4 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 l5 m1 D1 ]  J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 l: R% \2 ^/ h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 [9 h% @2 B3 m, j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ J( R) M: T% g3 W4 f; D" P5 P  q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ]6 Y- Z7 H% s( L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: j$ f- r, O) |4 s6 Q1 ]% \3 ]1 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* H" Y; ]/ J5 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Z$ i0 |; a2 `  X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- [4 s; ~  ?* o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! S' z* S- K2 F# J6 i, u1 F& e# {+ q3 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: v$ a$ z4 ?' c9 S6 W) {2 H2 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* A' B5 P1 h, {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) C  G+ r7 t2 V" n" j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 D2 _$ m, A) T% `: m5 K- h/ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ X9 x+ [1 [' Y! G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) K3 r( Q/ i2 W( [" {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 P- Y* `7 f# P& e+ ~9 R" W* a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 ^) K& T" g6 w  |0 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" }! A- Y, W9 o, E: L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 z, I  U7 z3 a' w  T* C- d, `( d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  @' K* [& B0 _- \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) h9 v9 V' ~% S) Z' j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; s, q5 t* X9 M. [, ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ~; B# W+ q0 h/ P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ p& D- E" M5 J# w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& t/ d8 K% K4 I* z/ S# W- w0 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 Q# n, C6 \% r+ @+ j: I  s+ k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 r; Q$ k/ v2 [: E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 x4 |8 U, H1 d$ d* V0 ~% Y- X7 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* D8 E, \2 I$ x' M/ B5 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% h; z; t* A* q. v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 ~, C: I4 F! O+ ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 R: g1 N3 y, [" f. i7 R+ x3 E; j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>