【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( Q! F, V+ S  Z) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- i, y5 d2 p) t: r/ g' gWith the moon kissing it every night
2 L7 {$ e% Z: N% Q# K( P% JSeeing the sky content with its love
3 D7 J# G9 W" A: a1 r! m7 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: \1 Z0 @2 o. m* hEvery other word you utter is love
0 B0 s& d) d5 y! C4 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 E# F% t9 \5 Z2 `2 b( \3 [  L& VNothing can compare to my love
8 a0 s$ r6 M* YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) }$ D9 [" T7 N7 I8 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' S1 A, I0 k0 K+ ~& ^( ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' g$ ]' n" h: f2 K* z( [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: M& {0 y" {( fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ @9 w* \3 L, u: e" w9 v4 i  gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) B3 W9 u; t6 p$ ~. B% j  e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* e( p* v' p3 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 w. n' |: \- E! K: z8 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Q/ G; q$ }, g, U9 R! S5 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' b, p" b) |$ j0 V- f4 W, p+ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 z" E8 i2 G6 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; s$ ^8 Y* Q1 @0 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% R. ~. R  ]9 Y. H, T# ^) C' V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: \% ^; B9 v0 k% [# M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  o5 H& p: z. k( u/ X5 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& G! j) o0 U" m4 d7 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ l2 @$ H/ D, A; b1 q  \% H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& I3 t2 Z* i- S7 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 E4 S, d  z  N9 y" C0 G2 O( T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" F5 @5 r2 _( s) R* K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" `9 r. y  S4 v% H% F) `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 X4 f/ A' T: l/ ~+ e- v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 Z, @8 P4 m% `' Y7 X, w) w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 y( e- l4 Y3 R1 C3 s/ s6 i' \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 R8 l/ ], e1 n1 U$ a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  n- Z0 G7 t6 a9 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' |% o$ k7 s. G' a5 y& C8 z& T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* E& g# G+ V! r1 d, T. u* Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( U3 x6 r) J8 Y3 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>