【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( W2 D2 i: E4 @) p6 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 D2 g9 `, W1 u- OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 J! b$ u) D5 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 M- _/ E& U  ~% ~7 Y) pWith the moon kissing it every night
" O6 e/ O% F/ U! MSeeing the sky content with its love
5 h. \* V  f* g) d, S; N; w( q/ L$ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* h0 J! c3 z7 J# _4 o- ~, MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ]  y6 Z" Q) Q2 Y% I( w( qEvery other word you utter is love
) Q$ j/ Z2 g  X3 C( q) l+ L+ WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' }3 K$ {+ C( `# BNothing can compare to my love
& H1 P& }( y/ L# `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ R  k/ V( o6 z& w9 W% F% w  ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! \& v: M# d% N3 x! Y* iI’m still filled with fear
, }7 x; a; W: vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* `, f% }/ F+ p3 FI regret not dying
% a% I" O; q7 `( h3 O+ NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( @& L+ j) ^4 ~1 B! ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* d/ w7 m0 M$ g% e+ b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. r3 ~! C7 I+ b6 d, D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 {0 X! ?3 a! g( k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: Y7 n1 S* O, l0 y4 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- [6 q# ]# Y; M5 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 ~  Q/ K' p5 Q' N& d. j- m<P>你无需担心</P>
- Y: m% I# k$ b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( o8 i' \& U2 b+ q/ w: W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ o% x5 G3 R7 y& N  X, |! w& O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ {* U( S8 y/ E, N4 d# Q4 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% d9 y' H. Q( \6 W* c7 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: J& c) `/ }/ C2 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; c" @) Y  S" H6 D6 X  u" X7 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 M7 O) e" U. z; H3 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 X; \; `9 y5 r$ V* x  u6 q  w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 x' Y! k! b/ y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. B: Y8 h- G5 P( G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( c) i' C5 ^4 S- W7 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l) E$ N9 h* a6 B3 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ _* t+ g* Y3 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ^( h- A8 A$ |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 y2 \9 r2 I2 V9 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% N+ D3 H1 Y0 B, ^6 m) N8 t! F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& E; j' @; D/ E; S; j/ x8 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Q% y7 _5 N+ M# z) F* i) d' H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& H! W1 |0 ~1 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>