【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ l/ u1 P2 s' o) G8 l1 k  D6 H歌词我附在后面。
8 S8 \, c5 c; {/ B. i  M8 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 B9 m* t( F2 ]/ M8 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" O9 w, ]( g: E$ _8 c% bSeeing the sky content with its love
2 ~) c+ _) W! ?: ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 R* p7 }' x1 O3 E# S" EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; u+ p! p. f. zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& g/ B6 G! B: n( ]7 g- l- HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ ?; a: j2 V. ~/ iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ?3 ~3 h! w! r- J# ~I want so much to see inside your heart
% P1 u% c4 y, ?% w/ R+ c  SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 ~& G% x" K  e) cI’m still filled with fear
' C1 ^$ B  _4 @$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; f9 i  g; z/ g8 [; S6 I  ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ f4 T/ M/ R( R: x2 b* PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: ~4 C0 Y+ y9 a# n/ L; S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& D% L$ R' J5 {5 l; K4 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 x( I1 g2 i1 x2 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ ]; H5 e2 r. Q6 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ b7 t2 K  h& r$ U+ [1 k( h0 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# ~0 q. l) {5 }$ \0 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 A' b' ^1 E8 g+ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& g5 Q$ A) Q3 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 ^' G' l+ Q0 s( ]- y8 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ y- o7 v) e  ]" K5 U! A+ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 {+ D. F/ `; N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 N1 c* I2 L0 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" Q- b# l2 b0 V  G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 H6 }5 ]7 \% ]0 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 |$ Y/ T) f& n' b, O0 \+ v4 `# [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 K) m7 h: i. B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 c1 {! ?1 \; ?: t" O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 T; Z( l6 q/ e/ u<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ F6 O. Q/ s' T4 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- G1 g2 k8 Q4 L4 s. i9 N" w8 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% T  X/ p' I; X* B" t; ]3 n: ?2 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' o+ x& ?+ q; F' p: b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; N1 |) R& O7 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) K, i0 }; D6 e& ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 r! [! ]  z; y我请你剖开它
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4 e" H! J) l, | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 z3 m/ Z7 z" ]. x# t9 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>