【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 L9 x! T8 ~( n) OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 L5 |# n, k8 o# CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 [9 L9 h3 i( _7 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ O$ [: ~, J/ gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 |/ _7 _3 p# }  x1 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( B% e/ i0 X3 G" ~8 lYou needn’t fear anything
- S6 D- B( P% K9 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 R9 G0 O6 Z3 d% j- ?/ P7 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 Y4 v0 `+ U' a8 w9 H7 z- _% vNothing can compare to my love
/ l& n9 d' w0 C6 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# W) c: x5 ~9 }' t0 BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! I3 N& v/ w7 u8 _3 M: ^9 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' M0 `/ |. @+ ]$ |0 ?- Y# {I regret not dying
+ z# m/ H4 T/ B: PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 X- b2 o+ d# N, C, t6 b1 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- w/ Z$ E2 g! KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 {8 i$ @4 J/ \3 g( ~- \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: C5 K% B* u- ], v6 V/ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 N8 F, ]' [, }9 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  W, }( K0 U. S) Y2 @8 Z6 ^; T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# {+ l$ X0 [5 m7 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 L1 d& g: u$ J& s* k$ u- Z, p6 B' }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ n( G; ?0 b* Q8 q1 ^, e/ p0 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- ^! p  S9 w% H4 C% D9 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Z; h/ x8 y( P, i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ t9 i5 z" \6 t* f* u! H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 l: I# e6 L9 u% z% `9 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ^; _& x9 D* q; |. E1 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( X- \3 ?. p9 a  b9 n9 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ^. o- g0 m4 V$ j5 ?8 S' J1 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 G% o% P. Q% M9 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- `8 n, b2 ~+ z, \9 }$ K/ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 L: V1 c( [8 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ?* V7 B/ Z. u' Q; ]# y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; t8 p4 N% F2 @2 ]+ Y2 R  W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% @1 c/ d( `1 U; u3 w' z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 M1 _9 n/ d$ {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& F* p0 W! I2 M  i- ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 i- e+ U$ J! P! C; d( O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 U$ V! b: a  n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* J8 V6 D3 R  U' n# @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 _2 |. Z) }1 n2 q3 I; i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 M; P  i3 H0 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% E0 f% h; b1 u4 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& H  @9 _( C/ Q: Y4 ~. Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" c& K; ]3 {8 \, D4 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: g6 i3 v! ^! s6 M5 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) v# O7 V# w9 _' c) r0 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: I! P) K& ^( a5 \1 u) O# e: @# a' j' k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 a2 y: G. R( k1 }' n1 f* x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ Q+ ]9 y  t# c: g+ z
我请你剖开它
% e' [/ {& G9 Y9 y+ f
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>