【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 J0 V+ w4 ^) d6 M7 c) PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 ]1 g, q( L9 D" AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 f3 ~  E( `4 G8 j; TThe sky is happy down to its soul
: O- j9 b. C$ N; o& o; bWith the moon kissing it every night
- o* Z1 S, D8 `7 {( HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ?. h$ q6 a: v* N, ?& ]You needn’t fear anything
, c: I  }) ~2 P, z* I: i/ t7 U  CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 _4 ]! i0 ^; ^9 y" _. zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* I9 P. H3 `% V3 m! Y0 x& U0 Y. GNothing can compare to my love
* L" N& A8 l7 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- e+ H( ^7 |, G8 U, K* rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  Q0 V# D- {, B* r% m8 W  S. d( \I’m still filled with fear
; R! Z7 x! P$ ?2 J& C7 ~2 p9 i: PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ?% u6 Y' v+ G2 ?0 l3 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. ~, U, ^7 B6 t4 X* xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# }: C3 B' e& X3 K1 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ d3 n" O$ n1 [2 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ O+ q) {- v0 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 K% f4 b' a9 K+ w" O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 R( r/ E% q% Q9 }8 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 z. h6 V8 ]- D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ^4 g! ]/ B  I$ g$ Z* C6 G0 g( w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- e/ I4 J5 o9 `! ?( Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) T5 q3 ]* R5 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% \5 @& g. e* j, f0 ?# W8 x+ b* a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  n! I. i) j  ^- h. _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# v9 s: ~% B. k6 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: \! |- p* F' F8 l$ ^9 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& y7 n& A) l3 {( v0 a8 `( \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, x* m+ }7 _' T9 h2 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 H. P9 Z* ~6 K4 N" N5 H5 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& ~& G! D# v+ s2 t2 u% G3 u4 H' p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; @6 ?, c( [" |% G% Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 o/ U8 M$ r; _; E7 R. B+ O' c. Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ h$ L1 U  B$ U- `) R8 l  W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% p9 ^- \$ _6 X) k% U( S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 g2 w' q: ]+ I" o" M* X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  Y' F/ l% }0 W2 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" R) D  m$ Z6 _* M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( m! x+ e+ W& X4 V9 `* \% t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. J: V! x8 a( d4 l$ T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 z. x) m. }) i' N0 s: F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>