【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 c" d3 t& \; K: t% |The moonlight is shining brightly,
) e- T/ P/ o3 u; g4 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' f# r6 ~3 N5 C+ C8 M1 Z& NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  @- l& s/ I: h+ QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 U5 Z. Z9 J" K3 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ Y2 N* G; {% e- ]Every other word you utter is love
3 Q3 q: o1 i' o* ~5 t( Q7 a, o1 VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" _  }: _1 @% SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ T9 a1 b. B+ U( h6 @) ~+ ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# K$ z0 m* ?. \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  O& o: L+ w* r3 n! WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ]' H& |3 r, x7 ]/ D, h. DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* S/ f. V8 M8 p+ C1 u; y2 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 E! |8 T" S9 F# H& o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ T  h0 r" z7 j& z0 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ~7 U7 X6 Y& O* s5 I8 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- e& Y% t* f$ X, H) P1 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) G( d$ h6 R. N( t/ |3 y6 f6 @( t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% \# x( _0 _# ^, x- l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 g: Y' E& c/ \2 ]' B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ^. C. H% S1 _# ]% h6 |( [6 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ ?% y% @7 D9 y& U2 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ O' ^0 J/ o* s- |: f$ g3 K3 d1 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 `6 {: f" ]% K/ |! y7 @0 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* G9 I2 y& @  B0 _: w! [# {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 z: p5 j+ s" D; |* G3 z' j# p# W0 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 K; o0 q8 |# u) q" i2 B6 m+ i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 W, ?# p2 h( q$ ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; g' P/ L3 }2 u, Z! l* S+ J$ [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# r8 y" R) T$ y+ i, f: g% U$ y: c% z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ y7 y# D! q3 r6 W- k8 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. |* p8 S8 {% C9 y3 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ H- p8 t" S, p, G- B' |- j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ U* T& e8 Y' g) u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, q3 w" o1 U: F9 e- X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 I- i/ a: l4 y, U7 P  _. G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. R& C, h  K# J4 B% V3 c4 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 j5 N8 i. R" x9 _. _5 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' u3 t* o/ L0 s3 Y. i- F: x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 Y. P# b7 h% i" s$ j( H8 F  Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>