【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 F$ b/ f: [/ z. P- C" e7 V0 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ B- u6 z9 K- f& e) D3 _2 w* [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( y6 r: t- D/ v4 }! dSeeing the sky content with its love
2 p# x; g, F: p% d7 Z! d& V9 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 f/ R1 L/ `; H) ]& }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 Y; S6 u" N* H) ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. t9 g) }7 {1 Z4 x/ s- D" B4 c$ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- R- \* z! p" L3 D) oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 A% o/ j) N. z. v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! E1 I6 ^- `! L( V8 w5 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ }: ~! Y* r/ C, B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 G4 g4 T6 R2 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* z- V; P7 K% u- D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 s- p, g) U" L" L# j: I/ l3 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, b$ ^! I. Y3 ]' W1 C: q  M& [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 b, U( i9 w0 c9 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' a9 z; T0 G. z- c& j% C8 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. e7 x* F2 ~0 f! i! b! T/ o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 M8 x$ ]0 W* b9 w7 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 v$ ?, i5 b; `+ E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 d% d* C- K5 c3 |* w4 x# ]<P>你无需担心</P>
1 y* T4 M. i; z" M8 o8 G9 Q& q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 o3 G7 B6 G; R" C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# |5 B3 y2 h6 v1 E; k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  [9 D& W/ S  W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: I* {8 \$ _' K& ]3 Z% q% L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 `/ x2 l) X  R* v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ L) n' \! X% L% L1 ^2 Y+ H5 v* V0 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ T: h+ P+ x  ~* k; r6 G( t( V2 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 r) S9 T+ x$ p" s0 f& ^9 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' N  c: D$ `8 ]" B, J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ O6 c- Z& v; z- [6 F  y/ `8 U6 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 }) w# I3 c& N0 Q+ m( Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) t# N& h+ w5 {! V: T& n! u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" u  ^( o4 T3 M" U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 c5 X: B" ]7 {% t! s4 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 t4 y+ d0 x2 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" Y5 ~3 h4 X& N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- m0 f3 p) L+ z; U9 S/ o+ J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- a( \8 H) R5 D) W2 E- o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. t, @. U  X9 m6 \/ v+ f<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 l+ Y1 E, ~, u4 r+ Y% ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: l3 b! M: y, X# c. \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ U+ a! i7 j9 `6 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' ^# n+ A+ d! p/ F* F' x7 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 x1 d4 b$ F: g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Y! x  L8 ^3 |2 C0 X2 r, A% c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 J) z% ~- |: B! i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 R% M: q3 H9 c, G1 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 m$ o0 v. y' [, W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 N8 w" S9 |" `. z' y. V我请你剖开它

: q/ M9 W5 A9 Q$ @/ G7 P4 M! b+ { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>