【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  b: O) R5 u$ M( R0 ^歌词我附在后面。
4 |! s! R  K3 I  \The moonlight is shining brightly,
& ?2 w. {5 r* d: m( H. {2 R3 G0 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) Q+ E; H+ d) t$ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" g; q  c5 M, W! |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 z1 e( y( ]' R1 J9 {3 T% O+ VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: \/ O9 ]& e* XYou needn’t fear anything
$ ]6 I  Q3 [8 [9 X$ iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  v; M3 @5 ]/ M* m) OI really want to know just how much you love me
8 {5 M7 [, m) zI love you I love you with all my heart
' K" n8 A* V" ^Nothing can compare to my love
/ P+ x% ?& p' Q  l  l  gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, q6 D9 P# }. d( i. Y, RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 s+ }' {' w- ~: q% ?+ A. t2 y9 NI’m still filled with fear
5 R0 H9 u( d  \& t3 h8 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 q' F1 O5 b7 U8 ^7 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 |6 x$ g; v6 n) d4 n. a! l, U( EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- }3 Q0 A% s4 K3 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 ?$ q) c. L! ~2 O) l  p% u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 Z8 s# n! y7 t. G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 {4 [# N# m3 k0 A2 t) l' u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. _/ F0 ?' l( L* v: P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. L3 ~: J' [1 {. ^" E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Z$ l. I  X) e+ j- l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 ]* M& M! ]" T; ~! ?6 L8 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 p" [! W$ y. K; V+ ~1 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( ?4 d* p  H6 J; V2 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 m" g/ x/ K$ }9 w5 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% i& E& Q& |$ A' K/ v' ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: k+ e8 [8 V+ v) o( c: v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; F4 U3 N" y( K' O( ~4 B- D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ k$ p3 z. T+ e, y  u) ]3 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 E; z, I1 m3 _7 g( U0 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 B# o, h' z) T6 |# F& F5 `6 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' c- s7 b# u0 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* W" T1 R: {3 Y+ k' ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 q% [8 d* ]8 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. ^8 C. E& ~( X+ \' Q6 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; z. X+ T4 a; i6 N, W+ T/ r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, C5 `8 \3 i& f! H3 W% _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( g0 L" k$ c. Z6 |+ M/ z3 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 V$ w- y+ @" M# v0 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 i: J1 S( h0 C7 Y3 ~6 H7 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  }$ q" S) D4 _4 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 i  Y& G1 |1 G8 e( y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& x/ r* L3 L! G9 p5 q7 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ^5 k# ~0 v; l6 O: d( M! |/ N& q% C5 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ o6 k& B- R/ g. G7 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ k. ^$ g9 y. k2 J# C  b, r我请你剖开它
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/ U& {) q( @& N9 m$ m& L" l" i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ^, r7 N( M! }% c' Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>