【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, b: W. c) U2 t8 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) r: F8 L* Q0 E6 JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# a; O  C, ~, M; X; L1 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# Y1 F. t7 R, j- ?! fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. h2 G& U1 t" oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 H4 I2 K# y& s( A, D$ m' s0 `$ bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ^' T( m- G+ x# WI want so much to see inside your heart
% c+ S' e' j1 A( A! _3 w; p# h! PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ]9 |. O! @  q0 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" p( t$ O( G# `9 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' H5 s- O9 h2 C7 Y0 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" T& ~( x* r9 L1 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" a2 P9 B/ h! v* {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; f6 `/ S# Y& R5 V8 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ~9 f- I) V$ q& C: w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ Q* ?# N5 V. Z! u. w; k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- m0 N: z  o3 o& j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( A2 q/ x% `* [4 Q( {, o1 h* x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% u6 I0 W; e! o- j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# I. X# N) c2 x<P>你无需担心</P>
9 o$ W) Z* h2 V5 @* I3 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* l/ s& |. _2 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ]' Q1 h) n! N4 V; ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; H7 g  H1 M6 f, j3 }, y: u8 H2 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 U5 G, z/ h* [5 R9 M; U4 e, V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# v* n! G+ a& Q7 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ X& L+ b" ?& z4 F4 v+ t9 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* [0 c# ~) G% j0 ]; j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 C; {" X, v& Y8 X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ t. M& W( H: c4 g0 o" K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% d! a3 u$ P% W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 Y& D5 f3 W; Q. C# M+ [( @  T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 k7 ?* z+ H+ J9 V+ q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" k! A5 V8 S, V5 O$ ?3 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" k; [' C$ F; [6 q# x* @7 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, n- }+ F( N; V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( X" K; L0 j6 V# i2 @: h  V6 G我请你剖开它

3 s9 N6 Q3 X$ @1 O' J+ B# } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 z1 l0 e) @1 e, A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>