【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 |$ y% D8 U- M& k7 l8 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& b" ^5 b: J1 \* ^8 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 X$ N3 E$ w- s+ L7 g8 k  iWith the moon kissing it every night
5 @8 m' w2 o- n( [Seeing the sky content with its love
4 f: u% x" r! S0 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, |+ b8 ~* u" f: V) \, bYou needn’t fear anything
9 }/ i3 X/ z% |8 j5 _( pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Y+ q: A7 W) A" A& E# S& _4 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) t8 t/ j3 j( a& F% kI love you I love you with all my heart
2 @& u" k9 G6 c3 Q% q# n: Y0 mNothing can compare to my love
* r! Y! {# H: r9 A; ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' X4 ]9 T/ D+ U% J! A* nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: A4 A* a! ~5 m0 Q) I7 }- J% CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 U# x: y: \0 p2 i( BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ u* \( |) K' h- ?8 x* \2 oWith such a tongue as yours,
( i4 j3 @' |- @8 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  S1 J$ C4 W* U6 ^9 i# r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ d& E4 U9 E* K- _( n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( a( n5 X0 ]5 c7 T& @% q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( {& L1 p9 Z6 c& y( _" R) R) I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; S* r. p% m  `& C3 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 b3 `( ^" X8 ]& v& w( Y4 L& ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. t& }/ z* [5 |$ N$ u5 |+ C. Y* \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- P6 M* h" U( L& S1 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 d( }2 H5 {% v1 g* U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ^) _' Q/ V$ s8 Y, T, Z0 Y& Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ [) P! j6 ^6 ?& I. @% N) p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, w! f) a! P6 N, P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: G$ n3 d* @# `2 T" {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ m% s2 ?4 W# B' R( A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 }" Q0 W: g  D9 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% u) h0 U# R7 t7 X' K3 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
! i  y" g5 [& G8 u" }. W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. K- ]8 G3 D3 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Z* D( a: r7 W' K$ i  M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; `1 J6 @  A! J1 V% u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 y/ q5 \/ V; C) n. I, z" Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# [# d" V8 q% Z' O! F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>