【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ]$ F' C5 u  T, e7 {+ _9 f  RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) p/ S5 P# k- }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, @! d7 L2 G0 |* a+ G$ {5 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ I3 \& Z6 @2 o/ K  _' mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; k# g% g6 Z; B; ]/ TYou needn’t fear anything
6 ?, S! }. Q9 w0 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 e5 H$ D- U$ @7 K6 }- _, |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& L" `+ i, L# k4 q. B; B9 n8 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' u( I$ q/ s! c# ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 B4 p0 B/ h; l0 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ h/ m4 g; K! rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- ^- g& t# s9 r' }3 d& V4 C& a" RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ f5 N( }+ v" a& r6 }! ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 y* v2 k& j2 e% N0 ?+ E; `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 E% ]9 E! S$ W0 r8 k# a; ~$ x  a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  I% [0 F6 U% V* [; V0 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' h* z4 n7 x6 S. s  W# p: C! r8 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 p- W" k) @. H2 [* a# n7 o- U8 z5 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& k4 X4 O4 n7 o4 J* \9 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- K: F/ f9 q3 `) L; F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  u- W. `% M4 D- l4 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" S2 s, |' l3 P+ V<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Q  `6 d4 ?  x" w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! J$ w; I# ]) k$ X% y. y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 U, g; }) i0 G8 m" [3 C7 g4 k3 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: u- u; U" {/ j3 m* \+ N. q5 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 p% ]) W/ C0 F. u: X1 A  v- N' V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, s' H! m7 b! _' {1 J* O. g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- T+ R$ u4 ]3 T/ E2 C, Q& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 S, J2 e6 A- C- S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# B( }$ j& I) p: O, w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! b+ h8 X+ Z1 p$ B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' E  G! w/ }# }5 ]4 B; N& ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( k6 m' ?/ A! V' I5 N6 u* i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 }: V- H+ `& a9 |. ~" f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! V4 l8 {# i2 F, P( i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 A0 h) D% e4 O+ f# j9 j6 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: E8 {) N0 m5 O, V& T0 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 N) [7 n5 Z/ S; v' B( X<P>I regret not dying</P>
- X. s3 X% x  g* F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 E. ]( M( ]8 |( q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ N6 U4 q1 \3 Y3 M' v( k, |+ `6 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 r0 `2 E* m- t我请你剖开它
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% y2 T! [( G( \  a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  c6 V- [) R' E5 ?# m9 c) g4 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>