【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( z& {# F3 L: J" K* J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Y9 h4 V8 P- J) QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' p, q0 L9 I+ n0 x2 J0 k, z. O+ DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 Z. p- B& l4 i# H) E) cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" n( i0 ]1 e0 F0 n9 G* f( OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ G: O$ F3 h# w; E2 O+ ], aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ ^2 |( V% w$ P7 uI love you I love you with all my heart
( O+ Z- X' Y- B! X4 w$ C% ]Nothing can compare to my love
, \# u6 G+ h$ g9 K! o7 M1 E: ]4 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 P6 M* f# \: w, xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ H& ]6 u& e6 v  B; r$ I4 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' Z- o; c/ K+ s; J& R9 B6 h! p  [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) x6 W! y3 M# a% X* w' s4 ]5 lWith such a tongue as yours,
# N# [, `! t( {" DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& j& y2 T2 j, Y0 c  r' OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) _' V; Q/ i8 a, q& L0 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 t% X2 P  [8 u' z/ R% o! a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# }. V4 F3 u+ G0 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 {) V% x( K% t& u- J, p- y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 E6 @3 W; ^4 j. x5 @) l$ O+ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 j1 R: S/ ?' t: y6 a! V2 ~# l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  q; _- N) Z" {0 U5 n2 j3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 C/ V7 B( m4 P& p8 g: ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 X+ t& [3 V9 [2 h/ w. C+ R( I/ I; a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& I# {. b1 P5 i; h! W, P' \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! x1 v4 A: V' `( s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- ^. C4 h6 d) K: t& B6 m7 m  D" Y" h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 H: J$ Y- p% l6 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: n' v5 Y0 @  @& [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* I# K- {4 a& N$ Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 w% l$ p1 o) _& F7 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ z5 [0 P; [2 a: [. c* z# K6 K9 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" V9 j5 y! F; Y! r. S6 R% j1 u1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; r" `6 L) v4 q" \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% W7 ~$ U0 C5 [( U  K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% Q  o. i4 f" ^6 ^( z( F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 ^2 Q5 u. c- `3 m2 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& h7 q( j# n6 |+ n- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 i& i' O: }% A) s. A) q  I, u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& x+ t" o- l; W& L. C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% B1 W/ N' ?: F+ ~" o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ Q* \! v  J/ n2 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! L  I- P  p2 S# v' \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ I6 }! Z4 z/ F; M3 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 l0 e, s8 z+ |+ |+ s. R; Z: u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, g8 t. ~4 G' U' C8 X. v! ]+ R9 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 i' P. u8 ^: H# ~0 j# e  V) Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( ?( R" }1 F- ^& Z! G* }7 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>