【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, O! B$ R" E' h0 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 C3 U* I% A; C7 B, x% X) r3 C$ @8 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 b6 a- z! X8 `, j' A8 b$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
6 Q- v) B: h0 C* KSeeing the sky content with its love
& [1 l* l9 [/ U% ]9 U  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& I" c5 g9 I5 ^. L8 sI really want to know just how much you love me
5 x/ r, D, h9 b( Q. ^$ f* fI love you I love you with all my heart
: ^' E/ ^3 a; M9 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- N% n" ]* e: t: B+ m: k4 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ B) [1 g2 J6 ~# s+ d7 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! d0 j' T$ ]( w8 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ I# x- e" V' z. [/ p. n( Z& QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ P& d# q9 _4 m* @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) k3 `) t  O( h  v7 h0 x- a+ T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. R" P5 d6 ~- o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, A* H- _" z7 T# ^( j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; f, V+ V1 H) [1 [2 Q& }: `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( l2 }' W" `! I. }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( T; b- D7 q. y2 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ G6 Z% w9 Y# V' G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: y+ G- I& I4 Y& O( R! z2 |# P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ \6 Q, z# Y9 c+ b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 `5 g# c( n! {4 D/ R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Z! ]% W  n) C" S6 P$ z0 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- V$ B" [5 w/ K' i5 q9 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  W9 `" i) b- O2 s4 w7 w) m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 M8 j% {& w; @( X3 o4 T9 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 v/ u! x8 B9 q0 S1 [$ G1 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 B6 k1 r3 N, V7 o% _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) G( r% b" Y1 Z4 _- B! Y6 D) u6 b" J- U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# T& x9 r% ~8 `9 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ T0 M8 ^* Q6 K  i% P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% P, j  k1 ]' [9 H4 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Z% n9 a# _: C- d$ Y# h: e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 S- a& Q+ |. W0 u0 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 u( U  t4 B- w8 K, c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Q/ _' |  l  g9 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 Q, o( L1 ^  M; p9 `% y9 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 B: ]% N2 G7 T; Y' w, V我请你剖开它
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, f. B7 |7 i2 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>