【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ K0 I3 ^3 d% }% c# z$ `5 z6 y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, c# R) Z5 w! T, \! j* @& ^- xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# a! A! x5 B9 u: ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) Z' h5 D  k. r- x& f$ Q. g- z2 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# ?( L) y/ V9 I- X: |* C5 x0 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 E# V+ @9 f/ G% ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! \& q: O% ^+ g& xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ]. {2 x' ~8 x+ i! i  kI want so much to see inside your heart
8 ]$ @* q' ~. D- F2 u! G6 Q# \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) N& u+ f1 h9 c4 T% P4 s3 XI regret not dying
  q4 Z- F) m) u% X9 T5 Q1 H! OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- \% N4 d, J7 E; }" H% R. sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' P" `) X4 Z- ~) U8 v8 V7 K0 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. Y* C# t. S' F" W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" Y# w  ~0 m2 V. b# C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 f$ }& I4 F7 e; h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; P8 W0 W0 a# D8 S6 Z, ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ Y! T9 C4 E6 N% v0 E2 T% V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% M6 T; R  D, J( f- v# J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. }8 ?# j3 d+ p# |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 M+ E+ B0 B  @# C) R3 ^3 v  h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ a9 P9 b. H9 D<P>你无需担心</P>
% e7 j' d5 V4 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) V8 U6 A( ?5 ?0 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- X# E! K2 B8 D) G9 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 M# M  q% I) n8 _! C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 q) e% k4 N4 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ]* _# v0 |: H" r6 L; K! Q- U5 t+ Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: c! e  \* R# N/ W* y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 w: v2 \7 H+ @! \4 Z7 E- e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) _/ V6 |" m) i& Q' ^! g" R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! h9 P% }# [7 z' Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! O: k  W; C/ z! w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# z8 ]' M; l. q$ t2 @5 D6 v! y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# M- b) V- F* o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 H; n( u  m7 A8 z5 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  X$ T- f8 ]) j# v2 I6 V" c: b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 r$ F) T% @2 t: _- w8 r4 c5 l* ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 d& L2 ~- Y+ a9 p1 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% B. {8 d. K1 q6 S. |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 |& W5 r. C, O/ [% O# ^# V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 L" Z4 E: |& u$ m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; E& h( r: }" a; H3 e; z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# J1 V* c  V5 b3 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>