【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 B% P$ f: |8 A1 k9 F& ~歌词我附在后面。
! L5 x4 n* D6 h- H  BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 G& {  Q6 _; X/ D7 {" u: B, jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% t0 y7 W" j3 r& `! E6 `( _9 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 a$ Y* Y* m/ _7 n( ]- yWith the moon kissing it every night
! h% ~2 u# D4 L) A. |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: P$ Z1 P# |1 K, `1 w1 t: uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 e  @" G1 y  LEvery other word you utter is love
! |; B& _( X; v1 [9 ~4 LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ f' s5 ~2 q. L1 rI want so much to see inside your heart
6 o6 H+ n) l. P+ d- YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Q, C( V/ N  E1 Z2 `8 O0 h( UI’m still filled with fear
* ]$ R1 q& W4 m* vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 B/ [" j8 a) a0 W0 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) O( v; X& u! e! `1 R2 J- ~With such a tongue as yours,
/ `; @9 j8 f& ?5 K0 }; rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 E/ R+ `9 }* F- c3 J0 q* _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. }) _  h& q& V( J$ R. d, Q8 \9 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" R* H3 v5 V# w* t( o8 ?, ?. t- m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# L* J- Z+ U. Y) e8 D5 ~* g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; E6 Z4 g' y+ z; Y; N0 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Q; {1 j2 C  |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w3 F- O# u' u" @0 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 l4 j. G3 `2 F. [5 d( b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. g$ P( ~6 T6 W! }$ @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# C  e7 l# o9 i2 I* `+ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& L" a3 o3 G/ P+ S; V) O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' a1 i  i# @, a. ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. x/ y! ?9 U) w/ K: C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" x& l* ^. E. i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 c9 R, Q2 g, ~% s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 a' w; T; p( D/ k# V/ ^1 y3 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ d$ I9 s, E: r: f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ~3 w9 v* R: U* a- X( T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, G5 M& r7 B5 i  Q: [* {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 M/ U0 {; S: g& y9 v3 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 {# Y7 [$ _, K6 z4 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! d' e! D* C  D) A# }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>