【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" v5 R( x2 u8 V5 ~6 _8 \; Y歌词我附在后面。
8 l9 U% ]; I  x! A0 Y& `1 @: C1 |, |The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 P. I! z7 `  a! T- m8 r: P5 n$ @Making the sky glitter like gold,
' f; A7 d  j/ i- UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 C+ H3 o2 G4 C% I/ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( t4 M& c/ v8 j# Z4 IWith the moon kissing it every night
* M1 r' Q( ]( ~4 {Seeing the sky content with its love
6 B, u( g! @8 x" @; L* _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( v0 B4 O6 u$ R; S5 Y& e% y7 BEvery other word you utter is love
: z% r* W/ }) W# yI really want to know just how much you love me
4 c7 s. h# v; [; I; M# ^I love you I love you with all my heart
) t5 E* v6 w9 H! bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 {  c0 w8 A" ]  \- N5 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ G% X; N8 M! z6 BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. R8 z' o5 a& r) b+ @6 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ d) r7 L) U5 f0 w/ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# y3 V" J) p2 J5 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ ]) k6 K3 R/ g7 \" a; D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. T- U! o7 n! S$ Z2 Y: S; i! k6 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: V7 @' [2 b4 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- E* L2 }4 ]5 q0 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  T6 |/ ~# X4 L* T4 p2 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# P& t. m# K( d: Q$ G: T9 p3 m% X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! ^; @& P4 G9 a" T% p5 b3 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ]# X- e2 g2 Z( L. {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! F  m4 p& R# L( a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 G4 q& a- q$ ~/ g; o9 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 C0 v& {  B3 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' J+ y; h) b7 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( s+ |  P! M! B1 g) |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ B0 t# q9 ]$ f0 l0 L: d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. A% V' |& k! x: s, ^/ R' {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: c9 F/ Y9 t, L3 |" G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! x: {* t2 @# l% b8 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# Q) l3 S# \0 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 H# h' z$ ^& N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' i! N+ D' M/ \: e' {8 C# k0 T  m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 b! c9 e; o, p. _. ?; G8 W/ E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% y3 t( f# D5 `) F5 ]7 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! o/ w/ b7 W! R9 D3 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 Q0 R! S) \; F" |+ K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) b  S& ]$ l3 l2 W- M+ G, ]( u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 [* I2 ?1 e' A( {7 R- V1 _# T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 x% v* r0 M2 V( J$ _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ @( t1 o1 \  c7 W4 C; C我请你剖开它

# {' Z- i( }' t8 q# m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>