【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. q/ j: a2 {, B, _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! @8 W% J. @9 Q0 e. K0 W  g' SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 s) |$ ~6 d5 p/ WThe sky is happy down to its soul
- ]; K* t% @* o* {9 Q( O4 nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 {% H% E' O8 R! n, ]; F: K! TYou needn’t fear anything
7 u  \' e% b+ O4 q( q& V, _% S  DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- y( s' U1 D6 H! H. S$ R( ~Nothing can compare to my love
3 F0 I$ p1 E! z2 o( H$ r: ?3 ?3 R7 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  d9 V& x8 n6 U2 V4 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 S' d7 z: [8 ^/ }" s0 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ S4 r0 P8 q" HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ |/ @' @- U8 iI regret not dying
5 I/ ^+ }" t- [0 B- tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' c7 c; N+ Z  @+ j* QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 n7 r( ?9 W* q' z1 m: k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 w, D7 b& x: W+ I& x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: L6 F+ j/ M- z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& H8 s. d. P$ z% p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Z& Y6 D5 T9 T# u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Q& d- y4 o* O; X* ^3 m1 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- H" Y" B, C9 ]( _' p* F0 ^2 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 i8 j) ^  Z/ U+ t: q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 n2 _: A$ v& q( b, J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 `3 S9 u( C6 I+ {, ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( [" v$ T5 k( s" C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ U8 ~/ f5 s( |5 o2 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 c) o- }6 \2 Y7 a" ]# ]: ]! U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" @# e$ A) e1 q) d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ `3 ?) r* @8 W5 z; B( |* j" j& c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ?" ^# Q  b/ n# i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! q$ {% U7 E7 R# S, G2 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ]+ z  k- U' X  R: b' \$ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 g8 C$ G( S% r1 I9 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, U2 I0 B$ T% }( M2 H2 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, d, _$ Q4 J% m  S6 b! u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Q' f/ W& `/ ~6 z1 C+ k7 m+ o' t3 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ K, \( f8 ?! `9 H( G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: P6 K9 B( E, A/ \/ E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' C4 n  U" F4 N! R) a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' [- Y! A# T2 r( A/ {$ l( ~; y* }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' L" T2 n7 U# R: i7 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 J' a/ [2 `: Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ n. u% j3 q  C# r; y) y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& ~/ Z0 f6 Y% w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* |1 R" M, H$ x  H' y0 P2 L! X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>