【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 ]; `# @) T$ R' g/ g  N2 J- \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 W) Q+ f2 s& r3 B5 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) b4 w: |/ |5 D- R8 e$ qThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 C! I5 F2 [  m/ FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( F  P! r% S4 C' ?, j( fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  z: N2 m+ p+ ?! w1 T1 B) A3 ^- aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 H8 e6 S( N  F; c; a! W- FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. t) V" b$ {/ Z: }7 N, R4 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' c% k6 l# s; I5 eI’m still filled with fear
: z" c/ O6 x& o/ J# eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 V1 v( V9 B4 v& P; }  ?3 I" kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ]3 o4 k' K$ b* j2 Q* n5 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ h, ]& |7 y% ^! V9 u+ b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  [( d& J# g% z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  i1 ]& ?' s7 j7 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 `+ ~' d! l% \" g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; c, @% a. k' H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& j! r% i* _, r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 G: M/ X5 S0 h  E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) {( T+ X/ v% o% ~: H8 ~$ H; y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. N! K3 X" ^4 ?: t" C# ]+ e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; V& [$ R2 H+ M" J3 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 H/ @+ A+ j" _. L( w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  A& C8 T3 s1 @4 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 t) _5 u* `$ j* @# ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 n$ b* n) x2 o% H1 L3 _8 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: y6 O; q3 A5 l: [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ Z; @, U" Y+ o7 e% q7 K# q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. D4 v2 l) z% x  v# L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: B) F. b* Y( ?6 r1 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 c4 k% Z; c' y6 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 _( e. X2 m) D& P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: |2 N/ @# D: f+ a' C3 g" ^% I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* {0 c3 z- t% ~# |  K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 b5 L5 C) g# d* Y" a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 |1 E* L, F. L5 U. U0 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* m! t, V6 P: u% D: [' ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
) J# M9 F  P! w, `* p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) v  e3 b- K6 K7 H/ L3 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, l' n2 T0 C( l. W9 H. C. ^* H" y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& i- P9 K, L1 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* \8 x0 B$ ^/ \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 }8 ^1 C! u1 K! E. ^! W( r& a我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>