【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ i. J, Y! F, f  V# H: XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ x3 e$ F* p$ {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* v9 D' I8 A0 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& H5 Z% b0 h# B: w" S) yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! q6 q0 o2 g0 G7 e) }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 |0 D( {; n6 s( Y! tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% N* L# Y3 M/ y, q  jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( d0 i; s3 B0 ~6 J7 j+ B7 L( ZI want so much to see inside your heart
  [0 Z/ ~5 {* p, ^: b" H' {6 D2 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 H7 N. ~. K/ HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; j* t4 v! x+ ^5 u; UI regret not dying
- l* u+ C- `2 m; W) H6 m4 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: P) w; d: W5 w9 t1 dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ e+ t) K# J. @7 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& O/ ]( p5 P$ P/ F6 u4 W  w) ]9 S& [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 s5 w0 r7 x9 c8 |+ q. p# N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# G2 @2 s2 y4 R( M/ g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: X9 I3 w3 F% }) l1 j* j! g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M7 _- ?8 r" ^" n. b- n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 O9 P8 ?7 k$ i6 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% `+ ^; q) j/ u2 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ P1 g, g& a1 U8 X, q/ U5 @. e( m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( }4 @2 i' Z  {4 s) {( B: U( i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 x: F' T- w2 D! z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# g) Q  D# `' L+ _' g0 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 i0 H  s) ]1 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 G% {7 e7 ~. s8 A( @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 c5 b5 m/ D; a' p$ V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 R: q& H- ]) H8 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( G6 R9 m5 V' @; @; w/ Z) Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ]6 n7 K- I- d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# q% D! ]6 V4 b2 [+ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" W% g( n" o. A. K, ^1 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' u* i  T- g2 N) W) r; W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 k0 S/ t- s5 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 n/ h8 y) P$ n/ H# K) J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 v- i; _1 H" [) Z( I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 V* g, D' d$ o9 h; k! ?  w: }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `1 n6 J# u) M. u# {5 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 a8 h; P6 g$ N1 X$ T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ]2 R0 b7 _* P* ?& Z  v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 O6 Q  j. d  h  B- z8 p& {! ^% h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 u( c4 J2 W& i& i  w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 x/ V! J8 R& {: m  u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F, `* T9 Y0 Z4 D* A$ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>