【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( z- Y% s) e3 c0 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 O, H# @/ N2 u1 H- mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 }  M- q. s& r9 D; qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- a( H. D5 \* [2 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- {$ k% q& q; G) X3 q- bSeeing the sky content with its love
- Y; n, q' X: yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: W& y- }% a* mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. H7 C! V' y1 \' d2 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" A4 S/ x) c# j3 u6 J2 F) DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" f$ d; f3 c5 z& x3 M, T0 |0 qI want so much to see inside your heart
; o) ]5 D; v$ d# x( U0 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 o# k0 Y/ d: ]" ?, fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Z4 ~+ p0 k; Q5 i2 O# f# PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 E, ^! ^- N8 [7 CWith such a tongue as yours,
- o0 P, c/ C6 i- p7 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# Q7 S/ c' ?. G0 g) ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 `% q. h0 p& u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 `0 g7 _, ?, F3 B$ O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! w1 r' q; O$ B5 d+ x& O. ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 R) Q# t% M# S/ g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  o" \, ]& `' ]& v7 A# ?) y0 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 j% E: R5 [. G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 ?/ z6 a% d* i! H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ G7 o; N9 u' c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `9 a2 }. A+ A6 j; E& T* a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ l/ b3 A2 f, m0 T- i; O1 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ V) l, F  `$ ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; \2 ^, o9 X8 Z# F) t7 \+ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 y9 X; q3 Q' f$ N3 Y5 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 K  @6 ^; e- B0 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 w9 C. |% ]4 W2 H8 b' d  E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 H( B2 T$ P6 Y% M2 n* d+ d5 x; S; R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, u) {9 @* a+ R1 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 M# ~! a, u& X) d8 t6 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 A) e0 g; R$ Z/ J/ m$ r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 P. @) t. ^9 q2 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! k+ H- B6 l9 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" M" R5 P" ]  n# }3 P9 E9 w* e. m& k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ @  i/ O  r7 u: q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& E' w; |3 G; `/ p; B5 _8 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 N; v! }& B; f+ g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. u8 G3 k! U+ j$ _  @- Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, i/ t" I" C' r1 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 e4 Z9 V  a7 C7 j9 [: e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 U. c+ p* b+ X- p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ X: ?0 L( g% F( f) o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- \' i6 G3 a* h; R7 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) G$ W1 k- T6 C/ Q$ c$ @7 f$ l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>