【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ V5 O+ h. E) D1 d* O: A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  p& Q, b, c' J6 y1 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; Q* r4 @" a5 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 q  z7 o- H! [1 G5 zWith the moon kissing it every night
6 E0 u3 r  N* k! |* n0 lSeeing the sky content with its love
+ k$ p9 n, ^* h  CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' `( o0 U- w7 |$ T: _4 D2 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# ^1 R- [' t# i" b3 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, x; b9 A) h' w$ E4 A% E  l; UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ^9 X$ _% a; E$ D9 e3 |% T$ G0 W2 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; s( e' J5 A8 _. w$ F! U4 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' X4 B% P% F3 Q% v: ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 V1 H& ^. T( l3 Q3 I$ {: p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  A. }4 }8 V7 K! H6 R, s4 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  `0 X) r2 Y7 V' N* {$ w3 f+ h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 U$ A; I7 D6 W9 P  [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* d7 m1 h0 [1 }5 j. V; [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' w: k5 a% {! Y' K# v" t6 \" `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 N3 M& Q, `7 R- }+ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 K: D3 J6 V" n7 [  t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% k8 P9 N9 ]! p$ }& X1 [% y0 i( [5 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: }+ b8 x; M4 P" ^5 ?: n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ s! f% B, n$ ~/ r* x) z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 E6 r9 b, E2 t) f" E2 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( P$ ]2 [( e( W# |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# ?! i# G0 [( X4 n% B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" O* a, c3 V0 ~3 M8 H& E0 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( `: m5 h( b: U! S7 A$ Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. I' S- o' c! w7 [3 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" {9 \  }5 l! A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# d& O1 y* c5 ]9 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* ]  V2 Y) R5 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# g: a6 Y) Q5 h5 \  [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ k4 Q) e4 L6 G7 i6 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ y) A2 `5 ?9 f2 \4 T* M' w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 m$ _% J9 M5 o6 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 a/ B7 m" W" D5 g7 k' ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 z7 m8 M% k7 ?2 w# B% K* x* t: y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 _! V- }* \( m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z" G0 _  R; ?6 \# A' ~, w7 h. B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 `1 G% P* Z; q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>