【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) j# `3 K; z/ E  fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 Z4 l; X1 G; j0 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' m( O) ~7 s; N  K: cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 A3 S( r* D/ _, N/ b, lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% ~( c; t4 y) Q, u& l5 W8 a) ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 V8 m! v& V7 `$ rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- r3 a3 g& m5 j6 a! _/ S  FI really want to know just how much you love me
: K" E3 h. c: }  E8 v+ h* {+ KI love you I love you with all my heart
  U+ q/ _% E7 `/ u0 D. wNothing can compare to my love
9 u; k8 s9 a( p/ d' jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' u9 b' k# L" t, O- X/ PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 W: L! o: o; \: vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% I7 V8 h9 G4 ]% V) e7 P3 g# hI regret not dying
( k& n7 B1 W; VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 r' e4 W* `& j4 m; K. }  Z$ eWith such a tongue as yours,
# N, a: @7 i6 v# x1 f1 J! ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* ~' r5 r: V; o: w# X4 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ k$ B) n% y1 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  ~8 E" e) Q- f0 H( H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 p' n* E4 ^* ^% t! g6 r6 Y4 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 V3 g- w; t3 k/ m# u  D" q( b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; y0 Q# A3 O6 U9 q/ ?8 J: x8 \& L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ h5 B2 J  G( `( k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# Y4 X+ D' b/ z8 R+ O& [* e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) p- D1 `& S2 S, C6 K; z& R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 B1 D0 Q3 O2 |, K* K# [+ B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( d8 O3 T* y& y8 `: P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 `* W# C; ]6 X1 v, U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% q) A5 p  h8 R* u! ]4 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ Z1 R2 K, U+ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  U0 _$ o, W  t! k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% H, v0 y/ \1 O, J+ I) a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' z& C* t1 J) L  ]0 Z7 H/ A<P>I regret not dying</P>
, J3 i1 ^  b, X2 A( B5 z5 S! D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. L' t. Z2 r5 n. P# ^4 v: R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# K- H  y' [7 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ Y4 Y5 h: n6 T& i  S$ p6 T0 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Y' S2 x+ F6 v$ N! r" l& n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 K0 `0 e  Z1 {' @' S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! Z" G  c9 T" ^. }6 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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