【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) `) o( C  M8 D) H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, J  ~# W7 ]3 A7 M0 d: Y6 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 H+ w. }; p; O: B3 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) j4 Q; j, z$ F6 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' J! y/ l, L4 z9 B4 a. ^The sky is happy down to its soul
4 o! b0 w/ ]2 N% Y2 |) _; tWith the moon kissing it every night
' F. `0 H4 O& t; \7 L6 i( U9 {! wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, u# t* z& S9 |2 ^: eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, G) \7 o3 A0 {( `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  D$ h1 A: y0 E2 @I love you I love you with all my heart
3 ?% O% |) s! \+ y0 V/ CNothing can compare to my love
& _' m6 r& S# R! P  R- |; lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 m2 C5 C+ p& t% {- f* s  iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 F$ {4 D3 [7 `3 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 s: S4 g( G! R* o8 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 k. V9 D$ H  K/ k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" N0 m9 q* V9 X+ f. O) E: R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( U! \3 A8 G3 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: z% x% @* u; b3 E, F; o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 x  E' E* B2 b  V5 K' N& D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 [0 w' @, ~7 h( x  ^* v) ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. G" R  p- ^4 @) x7 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* U4 T7 D2 F0 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 C( P8 r. x3 U& s6 Y3 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ]5 ]) ~8 r" Y, j0 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ v0 ^, A6 H# I( q0 S) T) E/ p' Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ h7 A( r# P* `+ A* F" s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( O7 B8 L; a4 e& c; X9 D; y# a) ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Z  P( F, `& e2 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; M/ F+ N) F" @. Y5 S' B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" |+ W" j# r- l" O* o4 m" T0 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ b' k$ B1 T" I" p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 k5 V" l6 ~9 Z) a" M- v2 R: i, w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! d( n) D9 i8 f+ ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# ^, z4 X$ `' w* V4 v2 [4 l( P! h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! h/ W1 ^8 C+ C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 A1 E. z3 ]& G0 X! {" H6 `( f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 E% W4 Q5 C& h2 D6 L, y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ ?5 K& R( x0 n, ^1 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, W/ ]5 ~3 |2 N6 `8 V8 V( B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. O( n- e3 \6 [3 \) H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>