【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; U. e* C$ r9 T1 p5 f5 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ^' ^# z( c$ }1 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) }2 m4 ?$ O/ b7 p7 w# \Seeing the sky content with its love
. _1 q# o2 n  k" _7 r6 E& hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 u3 }) d- S( M, \; oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! y' Z  C  U# KEvery other word you utter is love
% A  i9 x/ O% h8 oI really want to know just how much you love me
% S2 m+ v( R9 B: D( u: e7 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 U$ |: ?. z' b/ I  mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 c" E2 j+ D( cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% |4 B, n+ ^* x$ D- @. b8 v" EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 _% c7 V: n7 q# _2 EWith such a tongue as yours,
  O" S( ?, o. N3 |& \& v3 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  a/ C" H+ Y* x* d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ `# p, ], z5 B* j( j# w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; V0 X) B/ x% ?0 b6 s! c! t2 s' F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 l( F, P9 V5 v7 }  B* V; Z! J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; J4 e4 P2 Z, [, u3 q& Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! f# G7 O5 c. C$ T2 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( U1 q& z; {5 ?3 b- B) B- J+ H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ i7 n' Y3 s+ E( {: I8 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ B. i. w7 T' p% U* @/ M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 f4 T) I- u, B4 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 }$ v+ j: U+ V% p, H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ y" f9 `; f8 P+ @' S; T: }) h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ V2 U) \, A1 t" Y6 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% \/ Q$ J0 h7 I; h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 Y0 F7 H$ u$ ]1 P! C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( K& ?+ t# e7 f2 d4 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; V& |8 K' p6 w1 k6 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 N) @, v9 }! J" ~" P4 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. [' v4 i! O3 ], W) H8 N; m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) _& v) g% S8 `8 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' E! w6 e- F  S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* c! e* d! w) S) C- h0 v- G7 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( b# ^+ D, ~0 y  Z% b- Q3 B0 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 V+ [/ U  Q5 b  }7 t3 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 X* T, O0 G; l6 c5 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 a1 ~0 E' g# T  y! [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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