【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 T8 T6 k( N% S; Z4 m5 s8 H6 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 f; J9 ?" |3 W$ S8 P" cWith the moon kissing it every night
9 b4 O* n: V& P% A# D9 R! gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 G8 @8 c, Q* n2 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  w2 }2 Q- T) G1 v% ]& O+ H. ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: X' c" v5 m' l3 H* Y# R5 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
/ ?: v2 A8 F# q  oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  V  I/ d2 H  O- V1 U' d- _6 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 M( T4 I& P" gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" u" o9 Z- n% M3 q' M( `% MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 D+ O2 ^+ s" U1 u4 R% [6 z5 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 c( c' q  z9 F/ x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- }# E$ e% ], {6 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* q8 L/ U/ F- `- R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 s! g" I  x8 b0 z' E7 c. x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 y/ w" R9 t2 _2 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ N2 ]9 q0 X- j2 r# W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: {2 T4 H3 C& G4 O3 X0 J9 C3 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; o& m* F- M# ]1 D; p1 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ U+ l- \% d+ j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 c' R# A  `7 B7 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; O- M0 L6 ]0 `* W3 R& Q5 P$ J* j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ o3 B5 h( l: _; P5 G2 Y- D. O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ^7 ^' ?) R1 T4 I3 t( n. t2 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 ~1 e  E' I- {, N- j4 [3 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 k* v5 }0 ]/ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. |' Z* s; R$ F% [5 R7 t  f! W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 x4 F; q5 b- p. ]/ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 L2 ~  }( y  r8 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. g- C& }- S, u/ |/ T$ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Y' U  L; A, ]0 q+ r# Q0 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 z8 E9 I# q9 t- p" D2 I+ E4 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! i! U) p1 E6 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
) b) R/ R2 m) l8 Q9 ^4 X# |- q% H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- ?! S" o& `  z% v# N) e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- H6 ~6 @+ k4 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 [4 {( G% L  M2 w- _# v/ U8 n9 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 K! |, I/ C7 H5 D1 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ _' Z- T# q* c5 V8 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  e- G, c/ J0 ]( c" n8 r  z: H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>