【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ V+ s1 W2 _* F) gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 l- t; T1 o* X. w4 b4 [! h  iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# J" T3 O3 W; S' `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* A$ B% @3 o+ p$ k9 r' b! LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 ~! f: p8 {. i3 AEvery other word you utter is love
3 O) c) @+ Z# R6 }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 B2 i5 E8 z) z3 n" ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, m! ]% \) B$ w1 bI’m still filled with fear
' u7 Z3 L" p0 w. |- HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. C- E- r) u( s: u9 C: [0 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 e4 P, r; `9 B4 E" ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% w% E8 J5 J, m/ \8 d3 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( q" N, D, H+ m/ Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. K, q& l: Z8 x" h! r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ O; A. H0 o5 |6 s) c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; N' i7 d6 S4 ?" s1 l+ X  h0 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 r4 c* R" n+ Z, d7 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 g4 T; L9 L0 p/ H. S6 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 z4 x& G* z# B9 k! M. \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& v- ~# f# f$ S4 S' j% h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 v* i2 a1 [* C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 B, ?7 b# U$ ~: d8 d+ z" W+ [3 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: ?- i/ D3 t) h! W3 ?9 q- @: A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! J! i1 m& j) E- |& d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* s. C# ?/ Y  G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; v# b7 }: `: j  Z8 {6 e$ Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  }" J6 Z; D' ?0 [7 m) d+ i& D) s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* P+ x* k/ ?: n" M) }/ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ m- {& F; \8 R( z7 Z0 C) E) s& G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  I9 C% _5 Z  Z8 Y, R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 V2 ?! v6 {1 Y- c, Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- T. ~$ s8 b, V  q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- S3 W0 Z* f* b7 s* X! `: u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 k& y, H% Z  o5 z2 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: l: r0 ^/ R6 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 {% t2 z/ g- ^" I& n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>