【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* y! D3 R  N- d/ @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 O! H5 q( ?4 [' v2 t9 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" O  p3 D2 R; Z* q- tWith the moon kissing it every night
' e( \* J- [; m  g- ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ K/ z  R# Z9 W# r' e, H% I2 @5 BYou needn’t fear anything
+ {/ V! M$ y) eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 z1 U% \, W# ]& D& MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( q( S" V! V, m' X) TNothing can compare to my love
) w& U6 I& f" J, d, C1 n- r- d) TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 o1 _5 b3 C3 Y! u/ k; XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; Y9 I( Q4 t$ n2 c3 _2 U% W# JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ?% M( x: {7 l0 \& ?$ qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 b% h: H5 |3 X2 s" II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ I5 o! [# k6 H3 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ P, t! ]- E' v: t5 v) S7 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) i" D: G* \. ?) ^: `* }7 I' T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 v* F6 q- L( u. O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ p0 p, l& Z; W/ t: t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& C; n7 R5 l( w) }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! U6 ]. s* z# G* F2 a" a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* W/ x% T1 O* v3 t- g) @/ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ d: H% S2 b7 i) d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 M, i9 ?6 V8 M! N; u0 d1 H, _( _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 j% J3 J8 G" Y3 y6 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ O8 f& [9 I+ ?' q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  y# c* ]: T$ H+ E+ c. {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# H; t/ d5 ]* f; k8 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; ?# @8 s5 j- x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! j& V. p8 q4 Q! `* W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* X, x' y8 }  I7 q5 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ A9 h+ i- ~+ N/ h) e4 t3 E7 ^, d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ R- o; m: h. ?$ ~! V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" _  j- N& N$ S/ T+ }" X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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2 r  Q9 b* v: y1 x( @1 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 L5 F6 @" s  a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, h& p; r, `5 X, W% l' l4 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 D, x7 e0 a# p% A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, n! }+ _9 o; y/ S" ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& U& b) q9 L% l9 ]# u$ [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 v" G/ N4 J! e: d- g% U5 F我请你剖开它

6 e6 l; @9 s, c$ J6 P* g( e* V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>