【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 |9 N# \% J# T; _$ V3 w1 ]4 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 p2 L' N1 q. [# h# T8 D0 r3 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: e* g( \) e0 d* ?' rI really want to know just how much you love me
- C5 t# T' k' M& _/ Y' mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% Y+ U$ u( b( [' \: s% O, rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ u; y7 T" r1 u, f3 f- hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 U8 r. u$ [# yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* C) |# G" z: Y8 ?3 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: I0 D. n! _) v& |9 \) U3 u. ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 ]) P# I% M; Q% d+ [* p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( v5 r! T+ Q4 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Q) n9 `6 A/ a' a) s: @, z2 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 [; J$ Z5 ]5 J0 g0 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 K8 N" c! q, V! z1 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* r" H4 i! @. ^, Q* _5 |, E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( h1 r7 N2 B# U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! `! A0 L2 Y. e6 x0 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& J& D" h" J( u( d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; p' s3 n& b& V: r1 i7 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 m. C  g8 M; \9 q. I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 {6 A: {) D1 f0 F% F: _9 `/ j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 |& ?( d  k% q8 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: S  ?% E% ?7 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* |5 N0 Y5 ^" Y, A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" n. E- }, h# u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" j# O$ z0 \2 A+ U2 V6 ]) i1 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 S% G1 d8 B4 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 g  f% n8 M7 x4 n0 |' Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 N4 |9 \3 T& P# j8 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' @/ z  d  }5 Q; \# L6 q! Q' X  P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, Z. ?" k, S' a3 u& x5 R* B2 z1 I+ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% p) x. s6 v9 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 I# z; P6 y: c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! z+ F1 M& W8 w1 k4 ~. X4 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>