【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* i8 c  P0 u$ p+ ^5 o歌词我附在后面。
; [1 m% h/ I# z2 A6 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* O" K  X3 Y* aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, k4 Q4 @/ u! @; P% s. S, {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 t# l; c/ T9 x& JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! U% V; f% c: z( [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! V# G9 D" r- q! aEvery other word you utter is love
6 ]: r  i) [/ [3 ]+ u; \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  m5 e9 q5 y3 l: CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, c+ d* j2 s# Q1 p) Z8 L, }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 D; [3 q. J0 s% W1 L9 u3 ]( F6 dI’m still filled with fear
" b0 C+ G/ w/ I+ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& X6 p. U/ J. w0 T) ^& [- U9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ]9 t" m! S' w3 F: b5 w) \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" W$ `; z, }) |1 V, z6 U+ r) P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. l* [6 O1 H5 h/ g: R" x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) \9 q. [. t! [- l+ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 P0 K% o6 t; E$ A6 m+ w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ p/ G5 W7 Q6 ?4 k8 k3 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 x- Q8 j% V% L# R) h/ N7 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ]$ v( o+ S" k1 u* k8 k* O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 l7 |5 Y6 z3 A, p2 b/ K: }. _- e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, k/ T7 N% w1 E  f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* h4 I$ W6 Y( ^9 c9 z) B5 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 p! `/ m. b; R6 s& Q# b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 F) R: d5 h& Z3 k  ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# U, W, j$ ]1 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% d: k$ p/ i  |* X5 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ S5 p: h+ Z2 _$ j- q' J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* k* B3 a( R* _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ ]( b8 j1 V3 |7 G# j4 t) H6 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* ]; S( |/ h. _% [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) N* |# M! W$ U* i2 x/ }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 q& U  A+ Q  J) r8 y9 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Z* y0 |6 v2 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% R3 X. Z, }6 i% q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% c3 z; B8 X& V3 T2 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: E& a! Z& Q  w5 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 Q- {& i( J" V/ a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>