【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, w$ n) P( T- P2 v# w9 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 d6 v5 X9 q5 u3 Y! pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 ~  A8 l) ]9 o- fWith the moon kissing it every night
3 y/ ?& i  z2 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, K$ ?* l5 h; u* l& UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 E9 b( S2 `2 c# l0 y* Q4 _# [I want so much to see inside your heart
% s. y7 C3 T- T8 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ P- T- ?$ ^+ S8 v6 B5 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- N% D% ~7 w  pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 V: B) n+ d  P2 m6 C; xWith such a tongue as yours,
' C$ r$ p! M8 _& oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 v0 {/ b0 f5 r! o9 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' S& H  _: }! }  ~' aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ E6 `  L3 A8 A7 {  i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ~: T2 Y6 C! y% W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 b9 m7 k1 |$ d: B5 h- F9 Q- ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- S% T7 I' {  z; S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ T* b1 D0 B2 P0 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! r! ~& M7 V) R6 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 h( v( ^4 v$ Y2 O/ a" q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 u3 _3 _6 k: E7 Y# A+ D1 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ?- {* M0 ], Y% u  ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( u6 Q& W7 j* F) ^! u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ R: _  v8 g2 }, ]* C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, N/ i8 {& z- z6 J0 ]3 }+ `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% x& t& o) x) p# _* f' z" L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) _( ^; J$ J7 l4 \2 A; Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% y. g' Z8 s& j3 V9 I! _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& N3 c. u3 x* f7 C3 z$ R: o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ A' c( T) Y4 {) H4 y/ s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 j5 r+ ?1 |' l% W" v( R3 T- r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! m9 j+ R2 i4 S; v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. k  k4 \4 e$ e" u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& g( F9 }0 H/ X) V$ b) I& N; O$ Q# z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" l1 I3 `9 p& R" `1 e+ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# Z1 X* T4 @( d$ [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) W6 h  b7 u8 V. E- N' Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& N, M; i5 Z& C) G8 E7 H8 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>