【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 ?# \$ P( R+ R* Y+ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 D3 y: j# ]! l( }& D9 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ j$ J- f" c7 K/ Z& i4 Q3 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ s9 }" Y1 s; x) o$ L  nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" t* u7 m/ N; O& kYou needn’t fear anything
: z' n3 G+ p5 p# E, c- c# t3 Y! X9 `9 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, A/ F$ }2 D1 x  q4 R# Q( NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( o: p$ J( j, [! @% e8 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( x$ a6 ]' M" nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 C0 s; c4 [4 C5 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: Z0 c, G' p4 F- R3 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, I) i2 ?) A& V4 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 D% e$ s( M* {1 z* R0 {8 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 q" R# _, [1 S" C( t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  H4 r' X0 Q3 l" z) X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" K2 W5 {7 T* G# V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 l/ J) g6 J% h% a- s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' U0 V$ \+ w/ K" ]8 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& f8 V" [( ^$ @8 t) D  c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* X: Z+ q7 A9 t" _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, m1 G4 T$ L9 P+ n2 H$ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% _6 `# Q1 B; I* O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 o9 P( t0 y% C7 O2 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ _' l; ]; B# S) Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 r7 X6 ~. [* L3 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 s! V) K/ A: x( }* W- [* L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  d' p$ ^% y( @* V) E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ X! o8 A/ ~) Y4 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% K& b- |8 r# q% q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ }9 `/ s- d3 l% Z% Q& x6 W2 m7 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 d  T0 s; v# p0 \1 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 E* }. {5 s: K) t% y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. b( v) x4 F. ^: I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! x2 s/ p+ L! b' @3 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 Y, T' d- N; M! j( ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& A/ v# H& ?, v- H- w) |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 p  N$ i% I$ g+ i- z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 h% y8 l% q% P: j6 `/ x' h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 h5 e" N: Z0 e: r1 B+ J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" I% ?! T- f8 z3 F7 G) e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ p; y5 @8 t7 r1 D' W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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