【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 A5 \/ ^+ L8 S$ ]8 E1 w歌词我附在后面。
& m9 i% x- {2 S( ~, {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ?8 |+ O- i; l- GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 g5 D* p6 f8 ?# n: fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- J0 |9 ^* d! S. N& d5 `& _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ I2 R9 \$ Q" @( w0 o9 {: p/ XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ c( |# k6 n6 D# x# }5 ~/ Q" w% ?I love you I love you with all my heart
; y+ T$ t* ]0 O1 o" |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, d/ H& R" v$ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 y* s  n7 j4 C( aI want so much to see inside your heart
* Y, t7 k3 M. }" O1 p  |# tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* e% f. e5 i& t8 y- Q8 F. \I’m still filled with fear
. T2 u) W0 r4 ]4 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 H, [8 G3 S9 T' _- L  R$ W4 g/ S$ DWith such a tongue as yours,
" |; ~; @' }* h- nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 w& u# M2 l/ h( ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; k  _- w: ~# p& Z7 ^. I5 q" }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 e$ G" {# g* i! ~- ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 S6 c8 c: c9 m9 B* k0 \9 H' |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 q* o2 c$ x0 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" q+ r' |4 h: {  V' a7 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( \  ^7 q3 `, @1 y6 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( i, c# p$ q7 j- N/ e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, F; `/ V' @$ t; l2 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 b) P; M$ u' M: Z. Y4 [/ m, U% R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* I3 L. T! H! _5 x% n* E5 x' B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 W) \; W( p7 T5 u# |  E5 s3 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 H; Y- W) P8 n4 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  Q0 R! k2 ^+ y' B( E; q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 \# R" ~6 b0 {) P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ~  I/ a- [5 y$ t  H" j" J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! _% P6 h" i, z) M: P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% @/ M6 N' ?  [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: w  |/ J( e! U9 Z/ u. L* H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" {& Y0 d0 M/ |: j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# V9 X$ U- `* Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 l5 ?+ ]7 ]4 d! Y% v+ _我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 p) j% [/ d. N' b* k( l- h  k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>