【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( ^! m! N9 e6 I0 }" A0 F( u5 s歌词我附在后面。
3 }& j4 E4 J7 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* p, c) p  [3 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [' X9 B- i2 {# [) BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  O3 c* e/ m* [, m3 a7 a. NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* [" e% w8 ]' d5 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. ?) Y% G8 X! y! M; X, ?7 x; i! zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) b" d$ u1 L0 G3 ~3 ?- c! sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 k. B' F6 Y0 D2 Z* M+ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U7 ?$ y2 J! ZI regret not dying
6 F% o# Y4 X6 p% h; ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# e* I/ g5 v  ?* i. e4 _1 E. ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 Z, E( d8 q- q2 I2 J, oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 [; y2 h- K0 D; L- Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 \! \( ~0 X- j7 ~; L' c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 \& M. S( H  v/ g+ V7 n' N! m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* w* @5 X* J+ R4 j! C- o2 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 n( A* y3 K: G9 |* l$ V9 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; A6 U6 q# h! j9 C. J7 p& {2 f! s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 H) R9 i$ R2 }) ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ a0 |4 A& E4 d- b2 [; ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ a' |  a2 s% ^8 [; Y" I: M* }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' f( d  h! k' z5 g9 d" |' q6 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 v% s7 C" _; `2 }  K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, {2 s4 ?1 p4 N$ ?# s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  G  F9 S0 r) z2 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* m6 `( l, @3 f0 T4 q  W: n$ ]$ \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 l& }, c* G7 W* p/ N+ }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" h' J' U* z2 k8 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. ?9 [3 q, q$ q/ l  @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ S: m; e3 W% @/ V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 v3 n& p# C) Y5 M) b4 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; h9 w# _. l% r+ w" v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 n! v+ H2 z6 ^8 L/ y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 _% W1 O( I8 O- {  ?% k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% g- x$ P2 }# X3 _5 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( s  @5 t* {" U1 I2 ~8 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>