【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ l, z# R0 I% @# ?# m歌词我附在后面。
( c3 B" H3 m. c3 c) rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. s9 [$ Y1 k- G" J2 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ y2 [6 M: o' w) J1 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Q1 `) |; h0 c/ `7 M# a9 d" rThe sky is happy down to its soul
- T2 a3 [8 G0 I: t: CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ U  l/ L& `* ?9 a7 z2 Y: SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ k# o; z5 {# X( _5 D  R' gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' J$ p8 l6 F* S$ R& FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 e# C7 Q0 Z+ m' @I’m still filled with fear
/ y/ I3 t7 \: U* C& XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  b+ d/ K6 a- {4 j* a! cI regret not dying
0 y8 i- K% O- F/ WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; k3 S, d! {0 F+ ~; NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' U) h5 C' z5 x; S: `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 o0 q5 a" i1 x) q0 P  v* w$ o  b+ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% R5 S0 k6 d1 M5 a* g5 f! Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 H2 k- I. i7 `4 P4 `0 A% f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' B' `4 @' z# K+ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 g" s3 a" d  ~1 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ?8 c# j  s& b0 L% `  `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# S0 B" L+ T% L6 _0 q" A; s<P>你无需担心</P>
  X% Z, L9 ~% [$ A4 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) V/ c& r1 e! a8 u0 I# I, {. F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ W+ J' w+ \: \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 f; z4 U* T  p' K8 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 k" R) F. Y( a8 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 o% ]/ H! o6 L* H$ }! _+ k2 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, {5 w. H, }5 z& `' t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 v/ T% u" D& x7 h+ x0 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! G' [( z. f3 p3 ^- m; v7 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. M$ @  f1 b3 H! I$ y% n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 Z1 |3 T& f, G) A, i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, P, c  C$ S7 H; U! P+ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* G8 c% R8 X9 B. V! S2 s" B& W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: |0 g# v/ ]# {, L5 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& @% e! h3 `# q5 @  C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: b5 Y$ ], j/ a: ^: D* \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% W5 `# n9 f* U+ l: v# p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 z+ K3 `) e/ i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 n3 T& p0 N$ x2 z% |8 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  U& P4 M0 n, ?2 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 W1 a. a3 g+ y7 [8 L0 E  u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>