【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# Y( v- N0 n8 C2 ?8 l歌词我附在后面。
& K, f  Q. _- W, GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Z  L* z/ K5 f7 _6 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" y. g: O3 W& ~" A* M) J& ^8 y7 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 s3 E- I' G' {% y; z3 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; @; f: L! ^+ e( ?; q% hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! I- |/ _( D- T/ b, B. NEvery other word you utter is love
; ~" T) C6 E0 _) xI really want to know just how much you love me
# E+ Z, O2 @0 A. ?5 s& PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  ^* C5 f0 G+ R1 D# u; P% rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ ^# `8 v% ^1 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# ~% S1 E1 [3 Z- F7 w: d& `I’m still filled with fear
6 p$ x0 {# o5 W: ]% UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* i* z; ?/ K6 L' @/ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, A- L) ]$ a9 _# N: N1 s! p' XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* X1 F5 B7 ~, y$ h8 O6 b: T8 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 U! F$ ?$ k, D% i* h9 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" I6 o" y9 l' c  ]) K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 d, ]9 a; A% ]2 G) [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! X+ x5 {( P2 C6 p0 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 J# K; r/ w8 m% v3 N; d5 p4 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ l& E6 C/ _# C2 f5 I# `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  M9 e) P: O: s- a4 L- u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 Q2 X$ `7 I9 W( Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" _( U7 z* V: t# f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' u7 `& h: H" x* `9 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  P+ l; ~5 m* e1 f" U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( |, \3 Y; J* e1 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 y4 ?/ W" K2 V  w' I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ [  M5 S5 ~5 z( f. ?. s* Q$ W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 H% t/ i* }' Q. Z7 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; _2 d* W) {; }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ i" a; Y5 c7 L# h' x3 q7 C2 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* I1 Z/ T5 _$ {! D) Q+ I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 S- U" h9 s  O! Q, Z0 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% J$ f% b- m. P3 X- Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- F. d) i1 w/ w; y3 m2 V5 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. |( Z- H5 v8 c0 {. }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) c* D: r( E7 l$ F<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 T) J( L$ r. z: s- G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ~6 u. [7 q. A. W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  X, f# s+ B2 O7 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- e& ~6 |* z4 d/ p, N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 m! |8 l" f2 I$ p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 S" q9 b0 m/ r$ o9 A2 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# k' y/ M5 z' t# A# i: r: U( t& _, g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 Q0 U7 {* _4 |/ ^* m; X, `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% G. o) ?+ l: P9 k8 S* k9 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! \4 L1 x" \- q2 k7 _我请你剖开它
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2 ~, }& |- ^: v1 W( {1 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>