【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 o7 L) B) U8 i# h9 K" n( uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* L) J, W! E( a1 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' `" e; Y1 }- t& O! gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ d8 Z" H) p5 i1 \7 m2 I$ BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' E4 \; Y8 R8 M. j& J: O/ xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 L' w) P* ?- pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ q& I' x7 H, ]7 @. d5 C. W2 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 I1 e, Z2 A8 ^0 `* NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  m( u2 e- ]% \9 z8 r6 m& C, A7 E2 s  ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; {1 X* Z2 w, j) l: ~9 [3 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 S8 I8 ?2 l7 ]3 t/ m2 y. ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# T+ f  \, j% y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' b, [/ S5 X0 j- d. F1 b. H4 A, o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! }4 C6 u! }* W) a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& u" g- b! m; X0 ]6 l5 l: w2 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, j% h5 A& {5 i7 O7 [2 L$ n9 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 \6 I7 P7 s) j5 ?4 ~: |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  |3 b' o3 H* Z" Y. c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( x9 D# H' _; ^: h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. S7 y0 O7 ~0 p9 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 z: X/ B5 K" \' \; B' T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) D# t$ m: w* n0 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 D6 l0 ~8 s2 V' t2 H8 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. }5 ?" @8 p# d0 q8 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# d( b2 q+ P9 n& U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) \0 C( B3 @8 b. f3 ^6 i; x! z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 j3 z) L3 y8 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ v! C' F  d( I2 z- ~" p' F3 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& n1 F0 L( _0 a( \# l+ K3 t  z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 D1 {8 \4 q7 k3 R! [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- O# L# e& u& E, Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 e1 k! T( m$ @# s% j4 A, J3 `) `0 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" w6 m+ l" C) Y. z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 f. A% Z* h) q# u/ ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 m/ q, @* R' ?- Y5 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! \* C9 a4 d& D8 J- C. q/ f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ [1 ^- @5 Z. v1 t# d( a- V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! X% h. q4 G4 P& q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ B5 S* ?2 J" k" O* E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 A4 g, T) Q! H( W& o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- W+ X+ _6 k9 U5 k  U, U5 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>