【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# E* {- p" o& b* V! hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& r% p7 x+ D5 M3 S! cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( x7 Y1 ?; S1 o6 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ l: i/ ]# q& u7 Q0 rYou needn’t fear anything
4 M) Z+ n$ V$ mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 j/ j9 v! B* X/ C2 t& C; A3 DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 z" T# }: u) e; j' o  ]$ S6 UI love you I love you with all my heart
# c8 a: l4 t3 ^5 yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 D" y* _: e3 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' P/ e9 t: T) t; e5 A0 a) nI want so much to see inside your heart
  [1 T" `. Z' kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; b- P$ U/ v' c: K: |9 I+ ~* HI’m still filled with fear
! N6 G0 n5 g: \% iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( d+ u2 X+ ?0 {4 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ |! p! J3 ]( v5 U! H9 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 x! X% R9 f5 B, F! Z3 @* Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! o& J6 Z! ]: T7 w) W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 f& [# v7 ^0 W; E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 G. R4 |& k& w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 d* U' J+ N6 r3 f  V4 m) s; v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 G* W0 K1 f- C# F) ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% s( r7 i, O7 x; [* d: h- n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( U* O: b5 r( v7 {+ d& \5 H7 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; [* S+ N* P" B, X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% M6 q! g5 V9 A- Y. a5 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) m; b9 b3 u# `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 j; B- [1 F4 b/ G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) `0 \+ K! o3 }* S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 l) W% Z' \; Y" W1 h9 D+ Z. B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 r. |* Q' h# a7 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* t6 K) |- n% N$ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 y) k: f) r9 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 {! O" u) F9 T  }8 H4 N/ L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 e  j7 Q* E2 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 d/ |6 e! T0 ?/ X4 o; F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: c3 q$ Y4 l5 ?$ |! K9 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. j" Z& q. x, s: M1 s! G5 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 u# I5 Q6 \# }8 v0 i" c7 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" \) F1 z8 L2 Y: S# b) J% w% K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- r- o% ]) H) ~  q3 p. g& |+ }6 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  Q5 u* j# g: |: W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>