【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" o0 s7 I7 \  J+ R9 R! k' h$ J, }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# A& M+ m' ?5 ^% y4 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& V' ?' [7 h, G. v% @) {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- G! U' c; a  k' x4 S8 F- WI really want to know just how much you love me
: G  k/ u. h- P9 F; tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" I8 i9 w4 r5 [- q' q3 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. l1 O6 h0 v0 q! [+ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ Z9 V3 F5 ^* X4 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. m/ Q5 z/ q6 N& n" YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. P) l2 b0 b6 ~7 \% t# H' h* f. @( KI regret not dying
2 T; y' l' Z( @# ]/ D7 J& r0 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( r, r! @/ T) P1 F, D, `7 O, x8 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 p0 O/ ~, h# D6 N$ K4 s- ?" T3 A+ TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. X, o* e# }1 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 a# g& A2 v, {9 y+ K% ?7 T4 B( _) P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 ?' H2 g# }5 \; o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- T  ?9 ^& N& k- s, y  X' d; g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* Z/ O. ^* K! Z/ U$ u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! C0 o3 C1 |, Z- N) A2 S$ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ M1 b$ {* \8 c6 _; \, G4 e% h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ `' Z: b7 L' W, v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, `/ J3 S1 k' O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 \8 V5 V1 \- Y. e' p7 R. L% g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! P! C! S/ u- a+ u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' _5 L8 }' A. v0 j* d# `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 b. I+ M3 `7 ^7 e) {7 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 O9 _3 _/ a! j) h. @$ q! r' \7 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- i; t1 |+ u, q- A" P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( L7 Y0 G; P% x+ H! c+ v: e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) p$ Z4 A' G" o& O; c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 n% {: M( K% n) f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# O5 m; v( L0 h; F; J/ u/ \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Y( D: i( z  E5 r4 n! s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, Q; S9 b% ?0 S" s( V. F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 S  q- w+ L: }8 D0 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ z, X, x* [# p  _, s<P>I regret not dying</P>
( J: j7 h1 P) \  Z% c- ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, {9 {) U& }  T$ L: t# m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ d, M! p  a4 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ u9 \3 L3 }0 n" X$ l* U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 U6 g& u; M. W: R, Q- w2 c' @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 X; L/ \: ^. r0 m+ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 Q  q3 j' V8 p我请你剖开它
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/ H6 T5 J' `6 `& ]7 T' y: k) j6 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 X" X# E5 c; M% i; {2 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>