【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 `' c. D0 i% x9 a7 R) T. K4 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: Q: D! q, N* i% Y% Z: _, TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ e- v9 O# L9 G, m5 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 }; v2 @. s4 X3 G- E# [3 aSeeing the sky content with its love
# D: t( s/ b1 D% a7 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ f9 Z0 W+ n; ?1 j! dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 K0 K; J. l9 l- c/ O! F! IEvery other word you utter is love
/ m; ?, g- F) tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- V* Y) o  r0 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( T4 x: F7 e6 L0 Z; \' pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 T, S1 N7 b% T, v2 ]6 jI want so much to see inside your heart
* W1 F9 l- K$ y- `% X9 h9 `/ k  ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 v. |  h9 V* ^. h4 w( `+ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 A% r: \* D8 ]- O. v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: e5 C( f  X$ G: i8 J' A: r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' Q2 G) q! ~) L$ O8 U2 d. H% s3 i: o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* ?% _  ~; Q- g1 \4 j* I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" u6 D! _& g/ d7 K6 s" b+ H# d% m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, B: E) V5 r8 M9 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 p( G9 B) @5 I9 y  @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* t7 r" n5 d* \6 O' ^  G  |9 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; s3 T0 v5 B# Z9 g; R8 A6 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& m% J& J2 v/ I5 `$ _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 U- f% R4 k6 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ X. B5 k( Z: T; [  w4 P; \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% O7 h; m* q0 f. Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# t! h* q, g  ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 X8 K+ M: |4 Z" I* [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 O% _. z5 L* X& u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 r5 J7 f, ]6 K: {8 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: E- V9 R5 P" i' K+ i% k: m7 v: o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" ]+ d7 r. W# H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 e6 _$ ~3 E/ \0 e  Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 x0 Z; `0 q% `. ]8 h7 h( M- Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s$ M# ?/ p6 Z3 J2 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. D6 ~$ m8 n- X' u) b6 k+ t. _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; k+ o  k  `! `+ H) i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 k3 N. W% V  E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 A* E9 M" \9 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 Q+ ~, \  }4 x2 E! U/ ?3 y1 t# g我请你剖开它

* G  Y' O8 L& y) U7 h7 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, g8 h, [, M  R: A* z1 y; \3 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>