【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 f7 l# ?2 E8 C6 {5 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; z' @6 K6 \, cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 {( O" q' }$ C* z. bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& a+ ]2 @. [7 w* c7 I- VYou needn’t fear anything
9 Q. T! @+ G7 F* [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ J+ D5 R1 n$ X5 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 `! u# K: h# v& a" N9 b: C; kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 o# e1 J6 b( V3 }3 a# P  pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. _: G* ?1 q! ?1 G7 j% nI want so much to see inside your heart
6 A! g: K" v$ N) X: |, f: KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, {- _( f3 w" R& ?I’m still filled with fear
3 p" R* L" B. ~, @2 q  E% sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' ]5 y8 f7 _! U- c/ I$ f6 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* y0 k- D7 C6 U. j" T* \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, p/ G! O: I* c+ o( l2 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 g; g( \8 w) |  T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' J% e, u8 {# t& l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: P% H# }+ u6 X3 U, g. ^4 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 b0 `. _5 z$ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- q5 C* L- q' Q4 d7 y4 s4 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 h5 D2 r8 o: e- B" j! M. S, V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, z6 Z/ U, w. J* [) e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( p7 }9 X! z$ }2 F# E" o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# K% \8 k* l5 W0 [4 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z3 p+ ?- r8 X8 {% n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 D" L$ R, I- `* E7 t% }9 R  F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; Y3 k8 o" H4 c3 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- r( W3 d8 j8 W  j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% e  Q. `. _4 D9 Y7 R$ T( p5 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 T- `! M$ s/ V8 o' L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" y) ]) B2 D$ S$ L( b+ u" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 d3 d8 z3 E! X/ ^3 o( a! `% _2 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, W& m. ^0 W2 ~4 \" I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. r, A& |, n7 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. O9 J" `, _$ Z/ b) u2 q) {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 J, L; h  y9 y9 x  k+ Y2 @$ X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' s" W4 i# H  d* ]7 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 I0 f; u! I: w2 Q4 M9 l7 u5 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ |7 [" X/ z6 k  [# h  U# B; ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  R, H" r0 F8 i9 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 z/ G& J9 m+ K* }: `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 @! D  |/ G' L, V' g- S3 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>