【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# f% [7 D; S$ W6 V# g  h: |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 M: }8 [7 [+ S8 _, lThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 X' c0 p* h. e2 [( \1 nWith the moon kissing it every night
9 C( w2 t( e0 w+ F9 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) Q, |- K0 ^4 J& E+ d# q. `! w( |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% N+ a. P! N, u5 c0 xI love you I love you with all my heart
% d# X, S4 g" |8 l, uNothing can compare to my love
- _8 w% M9 _: n$ |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" R! [# X, n5 j% M- X% WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% O. Q% a7 {) b6 O% UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! F/ @! r2 g" y3 b3 _/ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 c" C5 U, t3 ]7 _$ f, D7 F3 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& K8 |2 v4 [: m3 E8 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 q& D# {" ^; `1 X$ \  n# s: X/ [2 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 g! K7 R* h7 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: n% e, O5 ~5 V: J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 e% u5 j$ Z: N( f" n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 ?: Y7 h# x) j4 [& s/ d5 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 d/ e! n' Y2 w6 R$ v  G# E; P7 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) C1 x# |9 Y1 |* a; Y/ |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) f3 c' ]3 s5 j' I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* f. r* ^% L: k- O3 [  n4 Z, e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 @! J0 O& R2 k* [& D' W. K+ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ N: F, e8 N3 u6 f- x/ V3 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. L% }8 O) G, f. q, i( b7 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& j% \' T- t! s4 q  B5 q) L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 v. \8 T" `$ J1 P- D* f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ h8 f! J6 P0 p& v3 K) v. _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 Q& H8 m6 P: q- Y& \! L3 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 Q$ G$ Q# \# f. ?* o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 ?1 Z) v/ j' ?0 ]/ u" J<P>I regret not dying</P>
! q9 ]5 \6 d; c: O1 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; H0 a; g: E& N" v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ r# b+ J4 q# Q* O, J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: h/ h4 x6 j% J5 s& A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ m; ^. S" p) z2 ]9 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" |7 {0 ]- q  ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 }7 ]6 k: h5 F6 N3 F6 ~- v. k9 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>