【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) K- Y  P& w$ F' f' Q* w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: S. O: B. }; k: R- R( V+ O$ D! }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 `5 _: ]- R) Q" f$ d0 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 v. Q& m# y4 ?# u; ISeeing the sky content with its love
. U# ?# r9 `2 A5 o4 g+ }& ^" ^' _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ?1 s: s& a+ r0 u: U5 `Every other word you utter is love
/ n* d4 f1 x9 s. h% y' Y. M: aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& q( ]. G. r# {$ V5 ~' bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 X- E6 S$ ^: H' V5 Z, Y) u. W  dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& i; K9 z3 g* o$ i6 BI’m still filled with fear
, X/ g- }+ L+ uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 i6 F2 }* J; X3 L) m5 c+ l2 yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 h. }: C+ n8 hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& J0 `( r" Z$ V+ M0 K/ d( |9 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& s( I0 s; c+ [0 G2 v: ~/ y3 L- nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- U8 W( {! q" L2 R9 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' w( U5 L1 `% U5 f1 _/ V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! C/ R& u' u. F5 P; X: ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 n/ D+ C  f7 y4 a: w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 `# j* @# O, q" |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& ?3 D' d' T1 ?5 v3 L/ B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 K; Q# b4 ?5 w- q& O4 u9 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# }0 _  y# W$ Y) [9 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 U+ l  s$ s# E: s( p1 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 b- {; N; ^+ g# o1 g+ Y! M% L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, p% _  K5 K( {3 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ ?: l  A4 e. T, `+ h9 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ C: ~1 _  _6 f8 L! F) @- z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' R2 a* h1 P7 ]7 Y* ^5 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) L, A3 c# V; _+ X9 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 r  s1 D' ~7 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 m) |, D* Q" V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- r" x" n5 C1 [3 J! ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( Q; c# Z9 z6 s3 L5 x) l6 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( v/ X& n3 U; b# M0 [+ P; m) e) W- ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ l0 F9 e$ y+ s. u; e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 K; [, e- p3 C( `9 h8 o/ L* ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% {9 G  ^' w6 _1 j0 B1 P5 G# E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 _( g1 f. Q+ c9 G. g2 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( [) G9 Q" |- ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 H3 n3 @$ ^" @- @3 X5 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
# r5 K% B: Y* V0 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 i* z3 q# U6 c  C) {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ ]1 u4 P+ G9 G7 |4 j. P: ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: M4 `& b: d- R: ]' e) V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, {+ F9 F* ]2 `5 L) y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! f$ b% l" _* w$ a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>