【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ }3 u# b( P! R% {  mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- l: }! b9 W6 P0 G0 J8 d6 C4 C1 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
2 G, S* B( r8 U% u- zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 W/ @9 x6 g* b, X) dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 X- D( a" _" L7 j+ d6 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, X1 R6 y+ q' s- sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) m( _5 w8 `+ U/ Z2 p0 j7 o' ANothing can compare to my love
5 J- H4 x3 z9 S3 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: r3 C) d2 m/ Z" p7 g8 lI want so much to see inside your heart
% \$ N! f9 n$ X2 p' l+ c) II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& d+ n" ?, n+ s; II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ W4 N! g3 e: f( U" ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: h. G1 a- S' D: a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 _! j/ I3 B3 w* Y0 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' w, `8 j. @$ c6 N4 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 i0 `8 r% Y2 Q+ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ |/ N1 ]; F  k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' k( W; y, A4 y2 }" R1 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# W9 X0 S6 y; {& |0 d1 o9 y, i' {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 y1 ?! g% y. u( ~( z. G: ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: p% X% @# I. Y( Y: O3 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* a" K* N% X- N7 P: T: J' h6 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 F) m6 O; x2 X0 [; `4 t( ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 ]4 p2 ~$ E: m4 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* [9 i8 ^# [* ^6 A0 F7 l' z. G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# D3 ?- d6 K; @$ ^; G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 A: W& Y' v/ Y& [5 m/ O! h1 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; g/ @7 J) w' e7 h' }' {& [4 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* J" q0 j! e6 e) O" j5 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- X1 V$ x9 G9 a4 _/ _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" l8 z" @" L2 L0 w( p. ?# j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ]$ \  G5 q' F- o) F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 s! a3 `5 e8 @8 I! J) @; U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ N' {* x0 O7 h% v& z' E9 H4 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: i$ s; i1 h" C, ?! G2 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ \4 T% d$ F7 t; X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 l3 S/ I/ a& Y: H( t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ]. I! f( K* o; X4 s' A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- S1 _9 Q' u" }# n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' q: T. W0 R9 s/ R! Q* Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# c% g- F- S; i$ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 G  L' g- \0 m( X, o3 f- C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>