【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ d* C% X# A  V8 n% {! f4 G& V5 N歌词我附在后面。
$ A) ~# a5 v$ v3 z7 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 e8 H8 u% }7 V  Z5 D  T: TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- V: M0 u/ ^( {3 p4 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 g- \- h5 f; x& a5 k6 a+ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ j) H" V. E  x: o4 T+ GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 e1 }4 k- B# _: w. LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. r1 b8 q8 N, {9 j7 k2 j. ~6 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ ^# ]  @3 F% I& M9 p5 b' Z% ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ J0 j0 w# x) V, y1 a% ^  l3 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% c! [9 S3 G7 u$ |, K$ b- J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 a7 V5 W4 c/ @: L4 @7 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' g4 w3 P8 g, x  J5 u) J3 _) A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* l  B( a: P* M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ C0 E" b3 ~: i6 o. l& {# \' Z' @8 g/ A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: T1 |8 o/ p9 d* \, D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# i  @# n& A! c( E. {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. R0 @3 z* }2 d0 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( n; _/ ~9 j1 i  J; h0 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ b( S; ~2 a- I0 z2 w3 X+ U& B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 G6 d& y  q' G, A* d( D# R% P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% G& n' c' }3 S5 I( N& f: Z2 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ~5 c, e. b! K$ M" o' Z  N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 n5 Y4 K, C3 s+ V' R/ L; X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 v& A4 F& A. q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. n0 M* q3 k' ]& r. d. a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" _6 I0 X/ @( j5 l' e% \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 L( A  J+ d  X- q0 P& ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" t+ [% \- x/ e7 e7 {8 f. s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  w- I1 q: y9 @. R# m7 J+ R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" u0 k: g2 X% }. F  |我请你剖开它

( z5 F) u2 Q2 Z  s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ c- ]8 R! {' p1 c0 A9 `5 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>