【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* f5 X  D! y8 u1 g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. Z3 L/ s. O9 D3 ^. A* d% G1 @+ c( FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 d% g  d* [/ S# h+ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ p" Z& U0 F: z" e2 E1 [The sky is happy down to its soul
' Z' L: u* o2 W* L: gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 r0 ~2 r4 _3 B! t( g. I- K# _5 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 h1 P8 u, g1 s' B0 D, {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, g4 T4 ]8 V! _I really want to know just how much you love me
* b2 }! ^, e$ iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- @. G4 I, d  \  n! z" b' L, }0 H+ \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# \- a1 R, W  j3 Y: a' m; g  ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 @8 }+ J" A% |( UWith such a tongue as yours,
, j7 p' U; y+ ]& B: qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% a* ~- e8 @: Z2 p" i' oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" r7 x, Z: m0 f* t/ k' U; l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 \1 Z3 @6 e8 T( O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 A8 z, y* {% t' I' h6 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ A% ?1 i/ m  c0 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ y  U: ?- a1 E$ @# j7 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* A; z, N  D7 Y  f/ G0 t; E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 d, ^7 c$ }* I8 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 e4 M2 q. Q3 J, C3 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! q7 I3 p9 I3 Z# }2 x7 ^, k  o; [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 V4 J+ w% V- Z8 T! Y3 y5 Z+ R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ P5 s- |# U; W; {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) e) `8 A# r+ m( q2 X+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. y& \! r% a, u$ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ ~2 O4 t2 S* `% z4 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ~: c  o* G2 q2 i- Q0 C6 l6 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) l6 H% G0 m  h  |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 E) D( }/ s1 P; ]) _/ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) S; P8 I0 n" I6 i8 c# m: T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 C. q' w# R5 N% m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 h# o1 k# S. g/ Q3 N0 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# u+ }: Z: w4 O  U: V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* e4 L* {4 s7 p: m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 g( H( h, I7 h$ i* V0 h) m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 v5 |3 _9 j& Y8 \, `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 e" W- [( e. O9 j2 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- r# d+ C0 z' v/ Z( k& ~) v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J; Z2 Y& t# ]& |6 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 g+ ^0 @  w7 ~: q' r' _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ f" U1 J% E$ ^6 Q  \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 h- Y8 ]. S8 F- F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& g9 C. u6 R  \" j我请你剖开它
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' B+ L0 ^0 ]! a5 _! }+ Z6 d( A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# g: U$ V% y9 k( ]( p$ j8 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>