【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ u# s, I/ ^- v4 Z5 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) ?( ]0 k3 B+ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* t+ Y7 k3 m/ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 p" @! E2 X0 z1 c& `" q4 v& DWith the moon kissing it every night
7 I% R/ v2 J; _0 QSeeing the sky content with its love
" t' m: L4 j5 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 D* c! z6 s. Z9 w2 w. QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, q8 x0 S, p5 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, j) ^8 |) t& o2 d- MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. U$ g) m& ^4 q# x+ T1 ~2 V# uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 B+ ?3 u8 h" s3 e- kI’m still filled with fear
# b" A' \( g3 s5 A& ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 ~& m" m, N" l# G. {- `5 _0 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: S# n; J- @7 Z8 o+ ^  J0 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: b, B/ B9 ^8 J$ h' e/ [8 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# u' t; v/ `" f1 ^/ x) WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- m0 [, Z9 }* p4 U' h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \( W6 h1 l3 I/ j2 u$ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 @3 `( Y& E( n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" H& _# {+ [- Z' E0 \6 w4 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- h9 ^3 l% N& V3 y5 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ u- s$ C* n6 {# H2 i0 z) B3 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) |- e: w% u' d2 |# |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) W- v5 f7 P: [7 G& l" l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. n( A8 C, h# a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 P4 T* G7 J1 m) ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ S. `# r5 d2 i- M& [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ t0 G- H5 M" E/ S* x7 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! N& ~# x# B5 u. c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 X* ]8 t# P! q0 M% C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 h9 {. f8 _) M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% Z6 y0 t6 r* A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! @; x2 c3 o9 o6 O( ^. r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 F* y) u$ K; i$ q# x" q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! c& D) N- n0 t8 _0 [( T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- q' D1 d  A. p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& B/ F/ l1 X8 ^2 R, p- N0 X# o1 q! b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ q& Q$ H( s4 y: z; P3 l6 O6 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) a: W5 i+ z/ B; u/ u# \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# q0 G$ q/ N2 m0 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 w  E2 K+ x1 K- y4 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 k0 p8 I  ]8 x4 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 G! F) ~, X+ _: G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! E% ]' l/ w+ ?6 L我请你剖开它

  z; S: x5 F( `- f9 {* m$ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# O0 r1 X9 q7 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>