【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ l6 A: T6 g5 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 D  Z! b% [4 ]/ s1 u! E. h" yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 J$ @: i; l. a4 N7 X( MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ I; E" ^1 A5 t2 V5 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
* r8 F: F0 n* U% R0 @' ^With the moon kissing it every night
3 X. Y- N6 u" [5 s: H5 \Seeing the sky content with its love
% n; N( ?+ r4 o8 d' C+ }3 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, V& q$ [) q& }: r4 _4 l- |/ `You needn’t fear anything
2 N* o- S+ c  ~* y0 F: ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ?5 K1 g' E8 K( CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, C- h0 Q/ g$ h! Q: m. OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% b& N6 S6 Q1 @- B: H% EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: j8 V' D+ i. M* ?( B. TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 A3 {' c1 ?' ~8 u* p4 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ f9 V5 G3 I: Z8 Z' ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 u: a( c3 a4 [! C  g+ r0 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- g  Q4 `2 J3 y6 c9 W8 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- }; h5 ]" h. z1 M3 W* [3 C4 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. q8 W' K6 Z& S' B" x8 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 T& S4 y' p, s/ q  ^: A( d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 m( P( `) `8 o; n! B( k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; r4 }" x( y" H6 M) v" D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' ^# j3 h9 o* z6 g5 m, L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ W3 d3 p! O& D4 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 g" f4 m# ]6 C9 g' S+ P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 t5 z* p. U3 v' M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' E4 ?( l& ~8 p& d+ Y, T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- |  m6 }' J' B+ t' O( @  J- O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 _# c/ G! `. {* i( ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 w0 g9 }5 d& J$ G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ }8 s( L( J6 l4 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ R, w1 i' {7 X. l" Q- ?1 _; S) n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; `- e/ W+ m3 j. L; E: t5 u: c" N6 f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ l" y0 t' K3 r( G# r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- W6 J" A( D3 U/ S7 D  @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: [  T2 L! v* z4 D4 q% X7 |# _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 k3 v  [, M6 [4 `5 C, I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 G4 K" K, ~3 E% o( p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: e0 i+ c) [% q. o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, b  H8 o2 x- |( i: r  M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) O$ m& f$ r, Q/ \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 b  g3 S8 e  w& {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 [- F, @! `: W7 G' ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
! |7 Q' P, _6 m% y& M- G; l. W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; J- U; w$ m) W' i) G4 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ O5 V, K2 @  m* v* ~2 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- z6 U! n% w1 G& H0 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# h% F% u% H$ ?# e: F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' P: D, Q/ V8 [6 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 X7 F9 W. J% M% d# k, F: K1 J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _6 N5 z- s; B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>