【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. [8 h8 K1 m$ p( L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 p8 J7 Q! u* R2 A9 ^  jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 V1 m7 u5 D$ p5 q* E; A, f8 [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) C* ~  X2 r4 E6 r& FSeeing the sky content with its love
/ l0 t; x) H& G( wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( o5 X3 A" f7 }" F, YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- m& q+ f8 i7 `, n% n" rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  l9 G2 g3 r& A$ FNothing can compare to my love
" o! R% {7 f, ^, H( s. f, g- TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 \, p( q3 u. z5 S! EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; w" P; Y% y$ JI want so much to see inside your heart
/ Q! X2 j8 U! z1 v7 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; p8 p/ x+ |. L& `# q0 c) P; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 Q4 I/ d* `4 o1 Z$ w" y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. s- }1 b; n5 M3 S$ b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. G$ k2 R: d8 e' n& P3 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( J2 L+ G  i% d3 C' [0 L1 M6 ~* {7 Y, l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' E0 Q# f- [; G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, s- L2 l9 O0 X* P& X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 _. y% L! }& ^8 L4 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 {  o  n7 ~. q7 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* w: x4 j4 A, I+ N$ E4 {1 q" i% R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 Z* n& u' U/ q- [9 O% w$ g5 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! t$ t  W4 U2 |. `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ K# t& H4 f2 Q1 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 s) T' W6 u' _: j- |* Z& D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# S5 L+ Z3 n1 @9 n4 c- [* x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 k9 Z$ c  X/ K1 K& U3 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 B8 F3 T* I% Z) V; X' u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- y# s* f/ x+ a: u6 f2 J7 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 |$ Y' x; d1 Z  F+ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ L% _& y  m$ E& _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 g; D% ?% d7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ u6 s* W1 V  C: Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ^2 z! z$ U- m  d/ V9 h8 z8 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! a: m; M, j* M# M4 W; s4 f5 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 }! }3 s% C1 P$ }; i9 s: X: V. v, g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 M) ?; r0 o6 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>