【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' Y! s. ~' f+ \" F) D! NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ s7 i. l* \, O+ ]3 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 Q; }- y! x- Z1 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  T# Z: N# t* }7 T9 J# r3 L. B/ ^; IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% h9 X4 u' U! C7 `. z3 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ?5 r4 A8 {/ R& [% ~You needn’t fear anything
0 m4 v6 I. x- Z; DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 B$ r- Q8 e+ @  d0 ^/ `I really want to know just how much you love me
* a8 l5 A& q$ U3 G0 CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 {5 `& |" i" ~# W- A& W* E1 e9 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& o3 a0 @9 S6 b# m8 F) `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! ]6 o6 t2 |1 X& \( Q5 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* {7 r# b4 I5 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- @5 w/ a8 m. jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 J0 }" t5 _- V! i, z5 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, K/ ]( F4 C( I# X* t8 F* jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; n) G1 k3 h5 k0 v7 a3 z6 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. g! i4 A2 t' M- ~' \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# ]. i6 T1 y' R1 b$ t3 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; _$ C% V6 |4 ]. C& Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 \) Y! F) o. z1 r+ J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! q0 G1 i5 n# C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 V3 R% b+ [9 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& X' i2 m. H, S; A% V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; W" e* R; A% u* Q, ~  Y0 m# m. W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& x# U. [$ |. Y" Z4 n7 k' a0 s0 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* `0 p- x& \/ k1 p" v6 I" ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 ^; ~6 Q1 a4 O- C8 x5 c- J* \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 }3 `. ?4 ~3 D7 A5 K$ H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 @1 b- K% W2 O8 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& u0 ^& Z, v% x9 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ _& E) M# f% m2 Y1 n3 Q1 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ E3 b* @2 c2 W0 H- L) A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 X7 |. m8 D# I. W$ ?; U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 ?. `& N  K, s+ @. f4 Y; b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  t5 v: q+ W! b6 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- o& G8 R& W: U! h# x! B( S, k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- q) G% B# T- o8 W8 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: m4 y* H7 e+ u, n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 r' A: R7 K6 Q/ }( J% H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ X3 Q2 Z  \3 k+ V! W3 g5 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 |2 f& p$ N, @0 N+ Y: z1 S, }6 I1 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& E" z( W3 |& j; x( M* {1 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>