【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' _. c5 C4 ?% bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 B+ N8 J+ m- ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; n( J* O1 M6 H- @; qWith the moon kissing it every night
! J. ^: _: }; ~6 I5 n/ C" f1 eSeeing the sky content with its love
% d1 j/ C& d" a" JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 g! ^  _6 V4 @, B. q# Z3 WEvery other word you utter is love
- S. _4 n, r) ~" n+ Q' Q$ z  aI really want to know just how much you love me
! j  r: D6 U# Z! O/ j5 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- u3 `( q7 X! Z& k8 N( ~+ \( Y' u  [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& o* |: ~  Y3 x  K; ^7 @/ a. u/ BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 r3 n4 U+ M) `/ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 a2 y; n! P$ k" O! uWith such a tongue as yours,
& R5 X; P. W# c: b$ UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- x; m% G) b+ |4 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( W0 Q9 k6 n3 S& x; u9 m; ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 }( ]9 D4 I7 n0 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 M. q: c$ e) A' l/ y! K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 q7 P' X& w/ s" T8 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 s& u, C4 {2 E$ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 E- y: `' {0 g8 }# N$ r) q2 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ `- U& @9 i7 v. F- o& a% j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 X3 y. l. r$ b( N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 H+ a: G8 Q6 ?" a9 `) X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 d& P5 z1 |3 y% a6 f0 w# t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" R3 S: S% U, I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' S7 }$ l& F# n" `+ c* y8 h  J- I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 v9 ^# g$ q5 y. p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 J( ^7 F. {  p$ c5 [5 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( I$ T3 R; _$ O* x0 M1 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% P# q. B1 e4 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" N0 X) j8 d* r" J0 i9 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 b8 y- y# e/ B4 O% b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 X  Y- x" a& h* f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 K0 T2 }  O* E) X$ t6 C7 O7 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ y7 ^$ N  u7 r- L2 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" [4 q" h+ F, s  t& g" J* S5 j$ \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- |9 n& H( }6 m( O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 f  C7 d& b. S. w- b  Q9 c8 w7 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ S$ j8 `* p' _# r6 w5 X7 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Z. m7 T6 g# ^& [6 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& }4 R& g. S& I* }5 |: H$ I' |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: w3 b% J( X1 E) R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 Q: I3 }0 W) y! {# R/ p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( a% G+ l4 |& R, U' w' W5 s0 A+ N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* i7 e, I3 n% x/ F# I3 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 M6 r/ D; }6 D' ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>