【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( z8 z0 N0 W+ P3 U' FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: r- Y( v- l5 `9 j9 w; X9 ]  T9 @) e! KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) A- I$ |7 F, w/ o4 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 u1 }, @) {/ z' X. uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 M* h# b+ l2 Z8 h! wI really want to know just how much you love me
  D$ Z' `3 Z# l/ U" {) k. oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 f, j; c8 w% bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ z$ X# O' m$ G- h/ SI regret not dying
5 h% ^5 {3 b! f9 K4 D% AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; |0 m$ Q% T& [4 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 w( x" C( E  ?7 V# {3 B4 o$ C. T4 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( |4 u  e6 g" v( \+ A7 J6 G, O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 f7 ~' u& n6 g% Z1 G% o2 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  T$ f% }) X3 E( G0 F6 V+ a! h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! h3 G9 F+ q" u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 E8 \! g$ r5 \' ?2 o- l( m/ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. I6 F4 f  K! ~& G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 R+ H7 q6 Z, G* T7 p, F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 `* B/ j! w% L& `& t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ]3 p5 H  L- b# R$ S/ Q0 }- E/ a( V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- c9 u4 R& I5 B. E! e, s4 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; _, K2 B  t& K/ y* U7 V' t" X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 ]  ]; f: v% \# e! ^6 Z" s2 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 G2 u3 A2 K9 |4 i: a% N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- J( b3 a8 I* |6 N& U7 y" M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( e7 h* B0 t* X9 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 e0 _$ A3 l7 j* D' \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, b- Q, m' V% j# d: s& k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 e9 O; q6 g8 [: M4 m  M: I) |% T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, A% v* |- g8 u1 P: U' \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" n" y9 Z5 t7 U! p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" C9 b: G$ {& k  u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( B% i# d6 P* e' {+ r: ~# b2 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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$ |4 z1 R5 v1 W( O" I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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