【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% P, v4 s, i# c6 \% j6 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. q6 p: C7 T! H  Q, N, Q# g; @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ c' ^3 l7 i! q' ]! \: DEvery other word you utter is love
2 x3 b7 n0 [. \' ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  c, t$ V8 p8 k  W' nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 k% A2 c, l0 S7 N/ ^+ @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: x$ c0 _) y5 Y. M* J6 F6 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 O; J6 L3 B4 u! W' ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 x; S- B6 b9 C4 X" N2 R3 [4 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( A8 p6 u: y3 j% s9 \# p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ t, I; d  N. z4 m; }2 i% A; d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 `! a' O5 \! L* y% u$ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 b0 N0 l5 e: u  a9 Y. ^! j0 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ ~1 F; H% b0 D& E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# [8 n* s3 E% L. M; b" c# n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- @- A9 M, c1 t' y! x4 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 g! G8 e8 x  z4 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( K6 `1 b8 C" \1 Q3 ^. a% T( M' p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 k; d0 D6 y. \% d- j+ K' o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 @8 P2 X+ w5 {: w3 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ Q  h- ~- c% i) R' k" E7 k$ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }" P+ C/ `4 t  |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 X! M& _6 O5 i, S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& Q+ E7 I1 }2 t8 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 s* n$ s  h; ?# z' m, N1 B, h9 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& q3 K+ w2 }" `4 ]! c$ N7 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; X( a3 p  _" T0 U8 d2 ?- y" |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 n$ H% ^* w  \9 s! P& a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* T; w! @" l) H* Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% T9 E* U" ~- a) Z" l& ~8 x8 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
% O. A+ w/ I6 B6 y- V- J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 U; z* j' |8 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& a0 b, ]/ m+ D" @7 d* q9 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. z$ R6 t9 U. X& J5 k! C3 ~  |3 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 S, \+ \5 i  ]/ ^$ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& P. \; d$ l4 A: B/ O2 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ x' N, N6 ]% O! s) F* m我请你剖开它

& y0 ?  ]0 ~( z  u) W! e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 D, H. k* Z, J, O# A- l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>