【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 O' _+ z6 z- G0 J0 X! D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) s/ L( P/ `5 E/ c# Z5 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 x: m! G# q8 A' WThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ F) f7 e) d$ F0 U+ e. RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 p: D: Y: N" P1 M$ K- SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 }: `& V& p/ d, v& j& h. HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 j8 W& G/ W5 A% v: t8 ], iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* w- K9 }$ `$ f- t" ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 k2 Y! x! P5 A! G- A' V; I  uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  z! i# E) _: p; K* n2 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; m5 x! \, m/ T9 z' y: C2 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& C; S4 q  F& y( d3 r& O7 Q8 P1 n. ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ?7 ^2 n! |# |6 b. W) X4 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ T8 r# a7 W& A8 f( k4 x/ `  n8 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' x9 c' ?, o. {9 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  [6 Z0 R, s% e- x3 I! c* Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: U& i+ c, D  ~8 F- w* z+ ?6 h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 A) _+ y# M; @+ J5 k, o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 N4 f9 h* _8 T8 u7 x<P>你无需担心</P>
& }* Z! h4 `/ ?" j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Z6 j2 r5 C6 a) u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ \, E" N) S3 ]6 Y4 n- W6 y; U  p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. C; a9 y5 O% v9 y: d+ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" O: I3 Y: M# ?$ E5 w" P- j& G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% _4 n4 P1 T. V5 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# q" b- A7 G3 \! N" x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ]7 p) V' x5 Y; U4 E& S3 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 }* g' t4 s- m9 o* z& f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& y  i1 Z' U: D  e. y1 L! u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ |- Q9 u9 P. _# s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ ?9 b/ O2 S. M' s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, ]2 |4 O* g' Z8 C* Z5 q3 b+ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' ]  I  {6 e/ O! t% a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; T7 k7 S0 @0 @3 _! [, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 H' d& }3 E0 H5 |# z' i4 R# B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& k2 U+ _, @7 }, u) d+ O: C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>