【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* V% ]7 C5 @$ B. {% n+ {% gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* I; e6 y) I' P( @: |2 p) t- }With the moon kissing it every night
. ?/ g; W! o+ S- h- tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 Z9 U, m3 K3 s: ]7 n7 U. hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 D# @  z* [  M6 l0 m' ^Nothing can compare to my love
! [! F+ N: S9 V6 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 B- j5 f' G% PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 F2 y; j! B& P3 ?# XI’m still filled with fear
: L$ d) `# d/ ~& z+ x" m9 X1 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# \. l1 K& \; J( ]- N4 LI regret not dying
3 U* }+ d+ T% m, _- vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% Z8 s3 i5 K; hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& Y( n/ u. }  {: ]3 \" n' R) aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 }& j3 N6 x4 {/ K% u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* z- H0 M% g3 A, v8 Z$ a# B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 }" v( g# l" C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" A3 w( x( L4 ]7 @0 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 _; J% r9 T: o/ \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: e2 e% ?; a% ~1 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ m0 B. f% Q/ y! V3 K) a/ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! [/ @' D/ u& z4 S9 U1 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! M# s& Q3 O5 H# E, b2 Z1 Q& K& B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# Z7 D% m+ u) M" x& _. [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 c& L! B4 U( g; S: Z* D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 r0 g; F. g' @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; ?2 Z! M- u" L1 H0 U5 t9 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! J9 ~7 i6 b  [2 o) n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; d) o+ f; V4 g4 C! L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 a9 c( O, {: a9 U6 y( t1 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 j* }& _! a# Y) p0 f. j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 h4 O- J: J$ }& m, J9 G$ k  d8 U, B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 J) v+ F; G! J4 _8 [7 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 m( X4 W/ l* P' x' [+ u! I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ E0 @7 m# x3 q* z3 D. g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 F% m+ q$ v' b( G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  i$ O2 P6 l9 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ w6 l3 U  D2 ~9 ^$ \9 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 }' X& {9 Z( b/ o* O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 n8 r: p9 s6 D" w' I% f( w8 o" h0 p. ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( M8 f+ F: S0 ^1 x5 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>