【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 {7 N1 H" f2 M7 T% S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 r3 w2 o! J! C! i& xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' y% e" _+ L5 N5 \8 g, Y" W! `With the moon kissing it every night
2 u0 |# k5 @: I4 n0 ]* \Seeing the sky content with its love
( V+ i& _7 I; nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 J. b, b* x0 v/ {/ dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ V. K, f! \, O, v( ]# vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 Z- Y4 v) H/ \7 P: aI love you I love you with all my heart
! O1 X8 i( B( I1 @% ENothing can compare to my love
9 E- j: L/ y# x9 f: OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 q$ p6 p$ y4 y2 ^& }4 C+ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 t/ ]3 m2 T  I' P6 t/ l& V( yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! j# ~6 T; J- [+ cI regret not dying
* N( H: e2 J8 X+ {5 y3 W  `' ?; yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" @, ]2 Z1 S5 ~6 r1 M8 O: ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 Y" s# g8 R* ~# ~* R- S0 ~: k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 K7 x& o) x" ~6 [& A- ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: ^4 I% i: n& o6 |6 [" s8 Y& S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Z# N) K. p. v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& q5 j: l/ T8 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. w$ H' e6 B1 h9 A; }' k: t) `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* o- s7 e. z! K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 t: t# A& o1 D# {! {" E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" J. x5 t- r+ N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& d2 l# w$ R5 ?' J" U8 }7 L7 h6 ]9 y" v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! T2 m; n: m- X+ a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ?) y+ Q) y' w; u  J$ j7 b1 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, |- V. ]) z3 c4 i- h& y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  c  e: P0 G, h# ~: B( ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 Z/ A  l" p" j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% G( K+ A% S& l+ B6 l. |/ ]1 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 V, U1 X; N% \) t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! k5 }' `, o! }2 g8 Y; D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. t3 T1 A( y0 b5 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% ]* `* y3 m! @7 z2 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D$ V* Q1 H) x$ h$ `, N1 L3 L* R+ v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 \+ L2 O$ I: b: n6 r5 q( }4 K- U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) E: }* ]: G3 B9 S1 Z* N4 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Q! o2 X+ r7 {, o/ m# E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" M1 x( r( G) H$ L, `" Q# J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! C2 V! W1 ^: |- P2 t, V; |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 i5 W2 t% g, L7 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: u0 n! R1 \, K' }" O- X2 `7 j+ G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 L: u+ I& l  ~* ~: z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 g6 G* f9 [( c3 r. [# J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>