【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# `5 D) Q! S% G! p' c  a( s歌词我附在后面。
" c% [. m9 @# {1 u% }$ E: xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( J) H3 K, E0 n1 y+ H2 }# vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 P' }7 j5 W6 @0 [$ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ m! D' Z3 ~: H1 D; R7 |* aWith the moon kissing it every night
2 C: h7 K1 q$ y# n7 ?0 t6 R& YSeeing the sky content with its love
# J) t1 r+ G3 e; j5 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, V: x' @# y* U' c+ jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. f) l; L) z4 F2 N  k7 G  uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 J. K$ t" k0 c9 uI want so much to see inside your heart
8 t# k, c+ w: p- k$ c7 Z3 D* U: aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& h% X0 T. O5 V0 p1 I+ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 k& o. S+ c! j, pWith such a tongue as yours,
6 H0 @* x; g* d1 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 P3 @7 k& C/ M( VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 B5 X# J- {5 E6 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 U# ^7 `" L5 v' Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  S& c% |+ E% H/ }+ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M9 X+ E/ S" C0 p  w7 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# `5 K3 T+ p' e9 o5 }% U( E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# G* N9 l  j2 p- G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* ^) L$ w# `, N7 c  c$ [# J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( l: `9 e$ m) O1 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 \+ [- Y" x! A9 c1 N. T6 `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ o" Q5 ^. W9 z  ^<P>你无需担心</P>
6 t7 X2 Y; O+ }7 [1 o/ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# {  y7 o% k+ U5 y, F) ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( K% f: V3 d' k+ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 k1 V7 S% C* E7 q) _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* N$ o3 T2 x" H, h4 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' z2 D; I' |8 p. L7 M4 L" K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ r/ w  T/ X. s$ P7 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, C' \' @/ c6 X  r4 K8 x1 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- d0 i1 L3 f2 o! U/ `8 |7 d! h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  a' w5 R, `1 t0 c8 c& ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# E  c; t: ?% K' H. M2 D" J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 G3 ]; Y9 K, E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q' |6 C4 g( {6 s/ O# U) t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! T2 Q% O9 G/ e$ s6 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) p% h) S' e: w1 `3 C/ M! E, h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 q- _0 v7 {) b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, P' r6 J* U1 j' w! {/ c7 n/ e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 i, Q& B& _  E4 i  y5 ?& X, t' d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>