【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 g# m4 v  L9 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 F. k; }0 R% q% eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 o1 @+ o7 b- m, JWith the moon kissing it every night
( |$ ~8 I. V2 G7 a; B8 M3 cSeeing the sky content with its love
; e1 n. O0 }2 z$ x6 z& i4 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 ~8 q. S8 D) j# d& Q. h3 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# X9 x/ Q3 Z+ `' U  t: Z& mI really want to know just how much you love me
- Q9 s6 o2 W- j$ L& e2 m4 U, ZI love you I love you with all my heart
: Q) Z8 n, H/ }% y$ }' P2 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: g5 v0 {! ?& h; j* p' DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 q+ B0 _# Z4 S7 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; B1 f6 k6 r3 hI regret not dying
! ?) s. [9 R/ R# C, MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 {% h  z6 G% {1 q6 j' bWith such a tongue as yours,
5 ?- n- v6 t, I5 a; r0 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. C4 P: X0 v# x5 P  I& m  F: AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 @8 m" p+ W# @+ M4 A3 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* ^0 D" M0 b1 i3 C+ }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 u/ }% O1 t8 k' A' ]+ S! N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. X, N# r9 J2 _! d4 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 ]3 D- G/ s5 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ~" W/ _0 }7 P" J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# I3 ~" I$ u3 u5 h, A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* Y, l2 z% U( p  S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( \# s1 I4 n2 z2 K! w: x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& R8 W( j+ g: C2 p% k. B6 _1 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' e: ]8 J1 \: v/ y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 M9 M+ \3 _1 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ m, i! i9 _* {% q8 x4 X' i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ g- K" f9 V/ K: Q  H- A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, k5 B3 f# o  J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Q& s# H. ^' p8 C$ p/ k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& I+ R0 _2 W% _% f9 V8 \0 E8 [* `) O5 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# b0 S9 r1 t% y) V' ?' \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ c( k3 h+ ?$ w! X- b* i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ V+ K9 P) T% k5 v. Z4 M2 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) V1 p  [; u2 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 u6 m6 T$ e1 y3 c3 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 B3 h- K" P7 n5 a3 a# y2 @  W3 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 p8 ]5 R9 ]! l6 L( m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; ^5 m$ c  f1 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# z+ |! _" Z5 `5 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: q# n4 P  S5 u) y2 F; k: J+ I- N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( ^' e& \2 E" K  Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>