【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) E6 Q' c( }- A4 j) ]5 q% j4 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Y7 h0 x9 w; n0 u. ]' N- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, I+ v+ _, ?! V, f& K3 ?# q, ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 y% x6 p4 O9 Y3 UNothing can compare to my love
% t- l0 n/ a' y3 g) H6 R" ]0 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 ^6 |5 H' {9 S& ~3 i- ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 j2 {! ^( D# S* l; l, yI regret not dying
/ n2 [: i2 F* [* ]; v3 a  K# _4 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 c; D7 s% ~$ sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ y* P! w# M  c: a" iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; W0 C! ^7 D# r3 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 D$ w7 T  K% ?% a+ ~1 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 i6 D) H9 S1 [7 q, w6 F; w& A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 f3 B7 j; o; c0 m( u4 R5 z* X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 L& Z/ R0 _$ I) g4 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 B- R* q4 v. Y1 ?2 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" }; H+ A8 O/ E. A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 h; f; c3 C" E2 c9 s. j- P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( `+ Z$ ]( I0 r9 c6 t/ [. t, X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ s0 v6 T* a/ ~7 z; I7 ~, |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ `- ^9 I% P: k$ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" E; L! `, p+ V! S# t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# G9 Z) }3 I+ n7 B3 G; g! X/ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, m4 n. W- \7 ]1 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% {& @7 Z' r* L+ l  A( U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ A: A6 j& K' W- ~$ L7 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 V# B% f' r5 v, f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  a: V2 ?4 V; ^$ z9 v' n7 R* A: d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* B* ]( b: m/ z% b+ a/ d- c8 S0 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! l8 h& H" \- x( x2 ^# E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% h. x4 I9 z- M) D  t7 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
: N! v. M5 o5 Y( t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# x6 J# b* e5 {2 F: k) J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 L- i- a+ ?3 {1 p/ E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- U; Y, D# `; [2 q2 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: G. ^% g, b; ^5 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 p8 J: ^& x, j& j! I5 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" C# C/ d5 v/ c% m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>