【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* I. t: H& U/ ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 X3 D3 Z/ E  m' x( ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 S( ^3 y; S  x/ E% I" X4 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 B0 `* S5 T* ?5 U# w& c' L8 t) OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ m8 j% |) k& M1 Q1 r. k" `8 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. O" l1 M$ d4 `  U" i$ P6 gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" E7 h  Q5 A) D3 s/ \# E; fNothing can compare to my love
- A0 _! _" U' m- C# mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 F4 J4 I+ y# |* |$ bI want so much to see inside your heart
* @2 _& v3 b/ W! e6 \1 r0 M" NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 N) I9 t4 K8 U9 w$ w+ r4 O2 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. ]$ I4 f; B, G, v) uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. L! I" t" K' i) X6 `4 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 H8 Z& Z# F" B+ }( J. i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" O  u/ G; t) L; X. I; G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 Z3 q+ |$ q; Z: `* b' K4 B; p* w1 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ }" X2 J* G: ~% }" l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 a, `$ F9 _0 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& P5 Z4 e. w% _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& W/ r! }( ^/ p, |# Q7 v/ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ^) ?8 u' o8 f/ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
3 ]1 |4 k, `" S* [& l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 p' H" R% C0 }7 s, L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& L) _# J8 b. Y3 m* Q1 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ b: t- `+ [" _. [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: l& q: x; s+ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- ~- b% @( a# ?  Q( b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 I0 s& s1 X2 `# ~+ I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) Z. Y: L% j. [/ ^) Q4 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  R/ w9 P2 z" R9 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, |9 h2 t2 v. J% V+ R# u5 x, T1 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) s1 l9 g# u8 S& S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' ]! e# e3 r  G( C: \  ?, d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 \. N  v; @" p1 K2 N- A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; N2 G4 H- S4 ~! N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 R6 Y3 j' |& C* C( Z& G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ J3 N) I- b9 z4 a* Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- V1 W- o$ c& }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `1 y! M$ X! i/ @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- q% T5 \) q4 L$ a; O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>