【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* j" y4 S5 A# G# C歌词我附在后面。
; P' ~5 ^1 C; f1 r; VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) n0 S: N3 e2 |6 Z' \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* w4 O- C$ w6 T$ i) E) _9 c5 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, b' @, R  V, h$ ?* |4 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* W2 Z6 q$ k4 k9 N$ a6 i2 UI love you I love you with all my heart
* i& O7 Y) Z/ v/ Q3 o$ x. nNothing can compare to my love
* r& C, Z5 W' E8 u  |; s& j$ t: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ K! Y2 f6 c, ^% J2 ?- b9 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; E: T' U0 e  F: z- dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- W. x8 ]" ^7 Z0 A' X* bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 F& I: u2 k6 e, iWith such a tongue as yours,
: F$ r; i) {$ F4 p' V( C- ~5 N' J$ |1 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; @5 g' R. z; V6 Q9 s' LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ k: o& j# t& G5 K3 ^7 Z9 X7 E- _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 v2 O  C0 X2 M: _8 r. a* c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ x2 L7 f# G& |+ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% H8 R' P, ?! h) E8 X( A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- X/ O& v; Q2 K# L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 [/ F# F- b/ V; b: U! v) {+ i' V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. M- N/ _! c, N0 t& X* L. }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ K- g( _/ h9 X3 L6 t; y2 P; n<P>你无需担心</P>
4 J: b/ C& ?8 b9 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: f4 n. U! q6 |/ H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* f  N4 s( O& s6 A" a. p- }  N" Y8 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- l5 P9 f8 e. y# M8 g* P' A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% N) J; Q% n. |  l6 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ?! s5 [3 r0 C) j( y0 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ]! e% V+ a# H' B5 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ j$ R5 T0 n) F- V! S8 f9 r) M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ b+ k+ b, x4 S7 [2 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& t, h. u; e" F, `5 R( i9 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& ?5 @  i- W& Z7 H  h- Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 I, n$ F2 b" k: U; e3 f0 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# d9 `+ P$ }7 M8 m4 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 ?% g2 `5 b! u8 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* U  S4 g. h' w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ c% R9 Q. Z% S" ]# |* m* `& Q( m* e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# ]3 Y$ R7 i* h+ X6 `; Y" x! m  s2 o- f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 u% a; z! i5 H8 t" H) H, d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 h# U8 e/ ~3 \" B4 P6 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- u) x5 k- K2 c7 \( J4 t我请你剖开它

0 H) r3 D' ~% e5 l" ?$ @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>