【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; v( s! W' }5 g. W歌词我附在后面。
" v% K" v  q9 v1 o) aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ?3 G. Y7 L& [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  K6 {2 _, \, ?- Q; qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& s+ c) K+ U  o5 X( m8 fEvery other word you utter is love
2 j* r$ _( W1 i# Y7 j! q2 p; WI really want to know just how much you love me
. _- V9 b" H( \' xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 I# T; W% s' r: ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( f3 ]  E, }5 O0 DI want so much to see inside your heart
/ i6 q+ D* X5 q, c7 ?, iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" _" x) ]  w6 o! L; e; [9 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, _: M$ K. v! J0 p, X- \With such a tongue as yours,
1 e& r7 ?- _% U) v) t) X8 p6 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 W0 E. J( K% B1 m* o" G# P: ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ g9 B9 \" N, f1 ~2 N9 u  g+ s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) l( h0 [  b" l( C# v" @# ]) p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 d$ [# t1 x( d2 i, g+ ^% A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ]+ W' B/ k4 N- `1 O: N# C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! w! ]3 k7 t1 W  N; A5 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ V. h% Q  Z5 i  D4 Y# M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ~' [2 O7 W* }# n4 B) r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 `$ ^' [! B: y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; A/ k- W* M7 Y0 t<P>你无需担心</P>
- n' J- e4 }  W0 c2 @% s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  L8 d  }2 G# e# v5 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% B+ b1 J+ Q0 L5 d! N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 |) _! S  ]0 F) N  I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  j! z: Y- T& m* V, p( d! {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ K7 s; l2 k3 A. ]) B4 d6 c3 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 A, A0 @2 A! C; [) T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  _0 Q' C7 L& a6 S0 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  p: r( Y, x* @5 B8 b- O$ Q* O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 K( O3 a( |- V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 J2 [. Y  m) |: [9 Y- i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 F% b: O) K0 b0 K4 t; o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# v8 i  f4 I4 C1 y) O% @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. y, q8 Z) v1 n! C2 U& d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ `# t. b9 t) t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* S/ Y- s* q+ @2 ]5 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& ?  [3 n5 ~5 Q) I  H2 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 L3 K  g) F0 u! W1 n5 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( T- [, A2 G: ^+ ~我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>