【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 h$ u4 [* t+ N/ G4 i/ cWith the moon kissing it every night
: U1 F# p9 o& k( xSeeing the sky content with its love
2 F, c# l$ I. ^$ G# G# vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ h* |$ @; |; v$ a# _4 J; t0 N% {Every other word you utter is love
$ v$ k  ?4 @. N! o4 Q; kI really want to know just how much you love me
( v- A* C) Y/ i; O) j0 MI love you I love you with all my heart
3 u3 V) [1 D4 d4 T9 C( ~2 ~& ~% VNothing can compare to my love
/ s; ~4 @  |% S' T% h2 Z4 U% E1 r0 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) B0 |/ o5 O' ^0 a' e, N7 K: i$ AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 q- K/ U; Q1 t$ H2 Z! eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ d) ?; i8 P8 R5 q$ Z( iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ]  W4 ]& s  a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ {$ Z- {7 k( d* Z( O2 p1 A, V4 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- ^+ T3 F) U; m' R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! r0 f* r& m+ d/ k1 P5 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- A( f2 _4 o" T/ Q% Z8 Y/ G8 a7 N% V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( x8 h* }. }2 P( m6 ~* q% u  C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 O  E6 w: v( H" B: a0 ~. V7 v  M) s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' n- M1 b( k, \# y- h$ q3 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ Y' \: m: ?6 }% b9 q, A2 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" m! }/ P. s. r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, I% O) [" T0 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* p% W1 ~# r3 }$ c# E! i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 d* E3 ~2 Z; o9 ~9 d' e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; G3 Q  c2 G6 q% d3 i/ {& f2 A# ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ d/ V9 k# f2 q/ L9 \! E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 W3 M& G: t7 G) W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 D8 `: A' F, P. G/ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- H- w' }' Z6 L6 e( }0 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# P) `5 P, x+ x: x9 c7 F; b; ?# J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m) Z8 F& J" O+ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
# l7 n! t) |% q5 [- P% {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* m) D( S7 J! D; w6 }+ c! Q1 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% [' e: B! l/ Y6 x8 B% H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' m. m8 N/ Y% n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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