【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- E$ ^) J5 K7 e4 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( T) J  y3 O" l0 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Q+ V' d9 J3 \  g6 f% l% XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  K  ]/ d/ t6 ]/ ~, H" A# f3 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) r. h. _$ ?% Q! w+ n3 [4 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 N$ V! [0 \! Z" Z+ BNothing can compare to my love
$ j! }. t% {8 T: ~. L4 i: |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ G, V; o2 |2 I+ B5 w# L9 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; B9 D( W8 c$ e2 Z- q6 D" B0 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 T7 _3 \, k0 w' C- oI’m still filled with fear
5 N3 P2 Z" [9 b1 o/ m+ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 |* B+ Q1 a# R3 c' u4 k0 {) M( kI regret not dying
7 `) g# i' H! h; ^5 F8 H2 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 N: o" ?& \) h% V, y+ pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 }$ s  k1 J* U& Z$ y- z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ T4 U' ~  A  Q( b: N( {7 y& N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, q% X. p  N. a& S, ~4 ^' @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% C# g7 O& r4 `1 Z8 [5 h0 ?: ]( W3 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) W0 Q" j" W- T4 J7 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* S- H+ U) ~, _5 H" B6 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! Y. \% M( u% \6 t# C  n+ O+ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  Y1 m% _! g# N- o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) v+ A+ P; `7 r# b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ~& V4 V3 ^# Y8 y7 @' t7 U0 z, P1 x: z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! C/ b7 r9 j3 X! p2 M1 H& |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 L- z$ O6 A2 ?& m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& t  N! f9 O0 ]# v% `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 O% \' h2 e" v0 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- z; ^0 m% r: M6 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& t% [& `9 h/ j; w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  W6 H' B# c! P& r0 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 }5 Q/ t1 g% w' A3 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; n" c' ]) D3 e7 ~9 S4 a' d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' h/ |+ g4 m" j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 y4 H. @2 h. X  N) Q' T2 y( ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
- y0 J# H/ k" r9 z( O! K4 Q4 H" W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Y) E: h( n, ^2 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 }3 k4 B1 V5 G9 c! ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" E1 V1 P# G9 h  }* G. ^$ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J9 ~3 ?. C+ M8 n, G; O) v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! j0 N" e( L5 H+ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 l  V" O1 c# |" o5 Y, w9 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, B" u) f5 y6 K! L2 Q. ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% ^; ~1 y6 W* z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% }; y# c% H% \" c  a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>