【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 r- \- O7 h# W) d+ ^3 o1 Y歌词我附在后面。
1 @% l" |! S# n2 [% \; UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% g9 N9 u. {8 ~8 @% GThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 N* b& P2 f& B! ZWith the moon kissing it every night
* ~0 }: r. k# XSeeing the sky content with its love
. ]( Q% v2 r- ^% B4 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) ]# A6 }& T9 D8 L8 {I really want to know just how much you love me
" N% [' H' |( @  g1 a  n; sI love you I love you with all my heart
. u! N" c3 I! x% MNothing can compare to my love
3 e) V8 w, X; R6 D  \& {+ ?/ sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- P& A0 c/ w7 q" |6 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# Z% @1 K8 {0 \' ?& w1 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 M3 }8 l  Y" K. M8 `: `; UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& u# @) O, e/ d( uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 M+ x$ v. K3 [  @8 V% x8 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* _9 q8 ?# P) q, o/ A* ?5 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 X9 G6 @- B( X; j0 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 t9 J/ l. ^- F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 ?' H; }' v, H7 E' ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `5 ?% Q& V. I8 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 |9 U8 {* \- g  [$ I7 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* `$ E; m8 v9 G6 X4 q6 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' S' Y/ t) @+ i; a1 C7 t, c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 S% @: R( E$ k+ D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% v( K  z. `" l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. H2 M, o  Z3 S8 R& D1 D- ]* A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 m& P& t. X/ a* i4 Y' ?8 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* p, l" z# L* i' Z! T* A# H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ y: ^1 Y5 Z( q7 @/ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 y2 a( y* ]  w% ^1 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, x- ~) L4 e; V) Y3 r' J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 K2 O5 o6 u2 H( x- Q5 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 |+ n0 k0 N! \, c2 `; Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  N6 {* a- R+ I5 y" [: l# `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' _3 ~7 `/ a5 u" z: p% a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. G! O( s1 z, b! P6 S1 K8 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  P- ~# `# V, d1 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# t/ ^/ U9 R0 B8 H8 H' t我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 v6 c- W6 O) p/ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>