【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 _) t5 {0 Z4 T% K) v# S. I, t4 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 a4 b' B9 C; h: e5 w0 t/ a3 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 e; H1 B- H, M' L! E2 S) LWith the moon kissing it every night
9 [6 M: U8 Q& v6 O# h- r; T8 x; FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ n7 G: Y1 c0 B9 E2 rYou needn’t fear anything
) B' n0 h8 x. f8 J; \7 A9 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: z( D+ X1 x9 a0 N# AEvery other word you utter is love
. y. z* Z0 a# O8 i/ `2 v: N" DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 @/ r# ^! w) `" W4 JNothing can compare to my love
0 t5 U* `8 R# ?1 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 f( r# Y, V" X' ]* JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 f+ P# K& X0 R" a$ w; ]1 vI regret not dying
! A5 D0 n9 |' K  Y+ @! B9 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# J- q: X4 x! [3 N8 P. ^! OWith such a tongue as yours,
! a& B) Z( _0 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 a  I2 @' w9 F# zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. h" }. x' y* l+ q, O7 i  LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: h4 s. u2 x& u7 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' l# M. B! {) P+ ~! s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* B, G6 e" [7 \' I$ G1 h. f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  P; d$ h( }8 E0 H4 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ m: G: J$ n. }8 U* k* O3 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 M% L$ e0 @/ @3 W, n" U! |$ G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 G4 A: Y( G1 y3 m2 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ v4 B9 k" ]2 ?" e* l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" B; C+ \( @) a6 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 s. K8 w( ^* x9 M4 v6 n" d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. p4 J. a  X6 ?7 t1 U# E& Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& t$ i$ a* ~) H; S1 I% U: y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) V; m/ R( W3 a" P9 V! o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% X/ |% k2 ^, i3 ~( p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 {0 Q# j4 R& E% r6 ^( C& k- N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ J) v' r2 `: k& n4 p; [: P( k. z  r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& ~' S$ |3 v/ M* r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( i5 `# l. i" x) k4 i2 n& ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ?# n9 U# }" }: q/ J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 W/ i; B3 j& x& l5 B& E" t! {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 S' o" A+ \6 L* B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' r9 C+ D6 n# N6 V" T+ n  O2 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) z2 j+ \& R( L2 f. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# c7 @% J$ k5 t  F3 N2 {1 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 e9 h- q, j  I* x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( t% Y( Y# H/ r- ^1 t  z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 i5 P* S% _( ]- s, V* Z. @+ W) ]+ q7 K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& q+ x2 R( Q- p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>