【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' m; u9 M0 t. s1 k% wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 x/ j1 m, P0 U0 B( x. UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  G) x6 d: \8 D- W( p0 f  p. Z  ?  V. K( OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 [! a) i$ H2 s) W0 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ~3 C" r& f, Q8 r5 T; MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 H; Z( {9 k! f6 X" F% y1 I6 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: _: o# N9 D- E1 ~4 X6 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 P( y" F" ]0 W  uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 d# m4 v- J. D% e' sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 s& A. u3 w% }, q; wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& Y" q, {& H4 i6 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) |& x2 h; V" j+ I2 a. v# T; S* B$ uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: |% w* H% x5 l/ [$ WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( w2 M2 x* Q8 y1 H: O3 `* M' ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" l) B, B' R* k/ b& G/ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% c6 G% G/ d6 E( s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 N! ]# m, A+ q" ^4 p  W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ h# o6 _  g. S0 c7 t0 H) r2 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ B# J$ x+ z: g4 m8 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* `: i0 e" z  ^& G3 U: p) B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. M/ q) i( |+ S0 |7 j* I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ~$ Z$ _* t' v3 P- F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 \* w( ]% K9 v: G) y8 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ Y% y: r/ a, K/ Q) g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) U3 G. T: P0 z- @; B6 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, A- J+ s" {  ]. a, k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! Z! H; m& V9 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 W9 m5 C# q$ h" J& k! Z. Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! x9 D* g. R, f6 m7 x! B6 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 `+ g' i8 L; t9 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* Y6 i$ N8 C6 H5 R0 e; r. ?+ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  ~  N! S/ P+ D9 y3 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ z+ b  `' q7 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; E; _/ g; H$ R4 q* ?, v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" T+ K" {  h' e7 `  `' ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' J6 Z7 s: w5 k9 `  C- ]/ E7 \  [2 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& T0 D- K' h4 f' k: ]4 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 M+ d/ O( k: O4 z- H5 X0 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
( }3 {" F( m; X. u( N* s, F, X( ~
& I8 P' |( d5 q% Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- {. T0 Q# Z6 F: z2 K4 ^; ~% M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>