【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 k- m) p8 _/ A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* h$ `5 X1 J+ c3 F/ bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) k% l9 C2 \( cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ?5 D- _' L! J+ P2 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 B+ P) j  O1 T/ H; ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 E6 {# p8 A& {; Q/ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, v# v+ D  i/ Z8 |. ~You needn’t fear anything
5 v  B- l1 H- g1 {0 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 ?! s: C- Z3 t% q& w4 }I really want to know just how much you love me
: E4 y0 ?; I- c( m* J4 v, qI love you I love you with all my heart
9 F# w8 w, p. a% N: J9 y2 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ S, ]+ `/ R* D5 e! EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 l. D* j( ]$ DI want so much to see inside your heart
1 A. N/ }+ ]$ x" X  p) ]0 ~2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 `9 b! j* |9 Y( Y: l8 a9 y% d- PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 x2 @# ~/ n6 I" z$ j2 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 z# F2 o3 A5 y. x2 O. I1 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 j: }% ~/ z1 I' T- F9 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: R4 [7 B! w. F* C/ N" s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( S+ i( D( }, i6 E, _! k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 T6 n$ l8 ?- m4 }) n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. u2 X/ Y1 d$ ?( H) ~6 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ~: w+ N4 ~2 J3 U- a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, q- O  I+ ?8 K5 t9 }" b% X: M, m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: E8 X, ]) L; u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* h6 T0 ?' f& j. ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ F: O3 H' t5 ]& V<P>你无需担心</P>
" X: s- U2 c" d' p8 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: b% \+ y1 e6 O5 P1 T1 A* r0 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 J+ h1 H7 C# p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n6 d  J: B- h9 m( e# i; X7 @* l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' M+ U) n) J; M  J% @" B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. y' B7 W! O" I. F* n/ Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 d% V% b" G: v& L( G9 P+ ]& R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' c/ Q. P+ H/ A+ q# ]8 U4 P+ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# f2 Z9 S6 I, _' j' q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 O' H7 {9 O. `! ^0 F) s' S, D/ ~" v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 w" A8 e9 `5 @8 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, ^/ ]# T, Z# b+ g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" l2 h) j+ E/ V5 W% [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 z; @, Z/ O( e1 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ a$ @0 {' p. \1 b: b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ~2 l& V7 m5 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 `5 s1 u& }% _8 x; ~3 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# V  Z& A" w: j4 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( A( W/ H, f% l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ D  U+ p4 g3 ?( p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>