【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 j: k  V- R% g" a8 i# ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 |, e( P! b2 A4 `" A% uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: h1 ?9 Y: E. `2 A$ h9 RYou needn’t fear anything
6 G: x, {( n& e$ j0 J7 e% vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 u2 Z% i2 O! U1 U* Z; q7 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: G- }, Q4 v  I8 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 g- P& m' v' sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; L% ?8 c- k) G; n6 A1 wI want so much to see inside your heart
: v4 Z: G% C+ r3 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 Q3 h9 t$ d" p, k% w3 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& A  ^/ p+ P& z  E4 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ O) R( k1 _4 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 G% \. g) i3 i* s" E5 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. a- A; d4 F- D2 z* o% E+ |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& h- a- E, }# `+ G) Q; A, Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& O2 K0 Q/ P0 u) o4 _. ?9 u! a5 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) q2 ~* t, u8 e. F# P" U$ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ W; b' C4 }5 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( o5 l" a5 S' |5 p7 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ K2 n) b! G' d$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 H% J( ~$ M) M9 Q: b! O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- B1 ~2 v4 ]; K/ V+ ~/ s7 v' W- {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 D2 h" T6 y" L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- h0 p: V4 K' d- [. i+ o( U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 [$ n; Q4 J. D* `/ R" m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  L+ n0 [$ Q0 _4 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ c6 v! {% Z! s0 O$ t8 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! B- y% X( f. {& t7 @8 U4 K; M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ]/ N3 X3 l" }5 l5 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  x  \, H  k! }& {; ~+ W, C1 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: p# R+ T- ]/ x- k4 q6 q* ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ]) e$ R& i1 K( A<P>I regret not dying</P>
' l- W- s3 ~4 L( {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; n9 f" {! A; p+ x# o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& [! X, X( `: D0 q8 d- X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 p  e# Z' F9 P, X# D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ^2 h: U/ x6 E8 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 U# x" i1 ?6 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ |( ~: N2 j2 t; a6 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Z* \* u$ Z' ]" d. L% W+ N& z$ T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>