【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 {0 u. B$ S: b+ AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 ]( d; ~. U$ G) r# ~; ]3 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' @2 z/ c' s6 d; a' ]0 o  CWith the moon kissing it every night
3 h* M4 m& H" o1 Y' F" ~, [/ R. u2 [+ ZSeeing the sky content with its love
- E! U8 T: R& {& V: K, j% aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 m! M0 @, D0 l9 c, Y! m! KYou needn’t fear anything
, ~9 m- M3 r/ d) }1 m2 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& h+ O& R% e" wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; f; ~1 O4 l2 h# wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* i* P, f% I/ W: A' h/ u, JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ x7 R/ ^# u3 v9 j- a  JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- Q( _& q9 d( p% E5 Y' Q3 R2 n! ~$ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" b5 i, U8 H# o3 l, E0 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ P& g4 s8 `1 P5 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# U+ l# e) A4 y9 ^" K* h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& f' [' `; H' a  C2 @4 i* Q/ J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% Y& c1 Z' p( V0 K7 [5 q) J" Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" J& ]3 y1 l1 ~7 S" z- W' [* l+ @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 P9 J5 @1 S( I; |$ J! u* K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% W7 J* M1 Y7 l1 V% \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- Z$ `* o& E: |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: J: D0 |! h7 B: q: Q! R" H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" S- F( S3 j4 h) U  Q( n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ |2 a  G% _' h; A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 ?) f/ Z* x6 e3 r; n5 H# J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 x- X9 M; c* z6 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& W; I8 o7 n/ P  J& |9 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& T$ ]0 Z5 @0 M  q& [$ ^* z/ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& q% h4 f2 D- a8 P2 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, ]( ~# |$ u6 t! t! u- t( ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 i( _1 Y4 l. }* M/ _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( |" i) j' h- N6 n# L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( b& ]" \& ]# L' ^. K$ }5 [- E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 l( K; C) ~0 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* w# [4 e2 R7 s4 f4 q: X<P>I regret not dying</P>
. m/ S# ]- c2 C- g3 [5 J& s1 R- s, x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 F1 O5 x& t( b/ T% |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, I+ a2 }0 Q6 {/ v4 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) U( d& U/ y  m: I7 d! M/ I; M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% d, {# g6 B$ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 t" z) j2 y9 L1 b! j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- }' u- L1 X" O( }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 [/ U& |, I7 `. {: e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 O- V4 G6 G0 f) l9 I1 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>