【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( m7 }6 y- u% u: x$ T& B9 z. d" ?; h- W歌词我附在后面。
/ d' H% C6 I" A' B: c  h4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% F( \' R6 G+ ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ D  B. v# y* {7 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, E9 X) m+ O0 S$ ]1 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) p& t8 a5 d) xWith the moon kissing it every night
3 L8 f: T& I! NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 q: q) u  p/ }0 qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ z, T4 \  X+ L4 c, GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( |3 M; N' q# r3 ?* |2 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 ^7 L/ h8 E- YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 s7 @3 w- u, Y& V" [* V4 W- u. B1 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Z- `; G7 n! B( z& ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 ]  ]) q& I' `: r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- O. R, W2 A( M* \, e) m" b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 E% f2 @! |/ }: q+ ]9 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ^4 Y0 b) y' j0 e  f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' w( s2 r# E" B' V4 d& g' j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& a  @1 h" R' E6 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 j2 T3 d* W/ a1 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 b# A+ c. y: b# W1 d+ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ O7 K% K( i" N1 \0 Z9 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( _9 k. F2 |. }, W8 _) E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 c# y# x5 A+ Z$ A/ R6 ^% K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. m/ Q# s% B3 K0 R: [1 U) Q9 h  [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. P) j5 a1 j% c: G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; O$ H1 H0 H+ w' `, B: @5 {, T- u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 n1 }6 u. V9 L, f( a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ q- B( w( v$ L8 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ~& V& b  {3 Q: K( V* |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; ~# |: G8 @8 w' L* [, j8 c- u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ G* [5 u# F/ n9 h  Y& S! `1 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ B5 j! A& |0 J7 A* [! o( e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 g. x. G  |5 Y& d2 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ x; T* u' d7 z) n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ O: I% r3 v/ I4 a; ~( H8 Y$ R  U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ E( Z) H  k/ z1 o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>