【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: ~: q$ @+ u( z, F" ?& h1 y5 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 n- ]0 O% r* E0 f- O/ eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; O) V: g% E$ |" J& jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 W+ }4 a2 v$ ~& O% s' zYou needn’t fear anything
* h1 `4 R2 }: u, j. WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" {6 g1 f" f, e! _3 cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 N5 g6 M. N; x7 R* ], m1 |+ A* {Nothing can compare to my love
- c' u7 Q4 \. {( M4 i) r" ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ U8 y! y- f0 X* w0 D( ]& ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: f+ S, E5 d" A7 C4 t1 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( b; \; F  C2 N, ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 }7 k3 u% G. P% U* uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ?& a# m8 b: e" z! f6 ^. wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* k# L# o# m; q6 k; r1 ~  S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& r" e& j5 _7 |) q( S9 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ l0 ^8 w1 |! W; a" k* t; W! E  a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 s+ J- [/ M7 a7 n( u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* L5 Y+ r0 ?- A; P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) h5 Y6 Y! D9 B3 ^, @* d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ X6 {/ @; w5 B4 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  M1 I1 l2 G$ `9 c! m) q( M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 V% R& f9 k& j8 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# V8 h# g3 e1 J+ n2 y/ \0 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ~, u6 K' V+ c; Y, }9 I; H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ u% m( S. z% ^( W; ]7 L1 z& A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& A/ _2 w% a1 q) \/ B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' y$ J* l3 H/ T# ?$ u- y9 b& T( e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; W+ \6 h7 W9 ?7 a7 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 a+ ^+ k' W7 O0 n# x/ w" u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; o. j7 m. g3 s: U+ J5 W+ X0 C4 x  w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: }* ~" e$ e/ x) r) n$ Y# W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) D1 Q& g) n' g5 Q/ m- f2 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ m4 I  }' M  q* @& u- r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) j* \; |$ `3 h  o; K# U, j4 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: @/ u, X0 Y4 g# @% s$ H' w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ T4 L) ]: d' c. Q/ Q& j4 t% }5 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 V' Z1 q8 ?. `6 h: i/ c. G5 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>