【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 m* g& {- U% ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
, Q! N' T- ~* }2 Z- @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" }# r9 p  `/ v) g& YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: G4 l! j' p& d; i, `6 k4 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- I4 I) L& O( f6 ~+ z* oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ c4 G2 q1 y+ ?1 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 R2 n. ~8 @' mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' E- Z8 {3 J( sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ g- E  C6 Z; J! j7 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  k+ O2 K3 E% d  \8 h/ h% t& cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 D, z4 p% O6 _* ]7 d0 c8 E! B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ?7 I2 m4 ~4 ^8 j( Q  h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- Y2 ^: n: j7 g0 F: ?) g7 v7 a7 @" M' _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  F, {( l2 J6 @9 [9 M! ~- h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& E- P+ V; @9 x1 M1 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! o+ ]  z: O8 m' W4 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 y6 p7 t& v1 u" y) d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; M. n5 Z. P# ]0 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% C, \7 U9 g& k# Q1 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 l8 h" w# |7 Y! ]5 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( @" G- ^2 }# V4 }<P>你无需担心</P>
7 w" F3 X" S* B' r) m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. }( e; G0 ]8 F/ S9 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. k4 d, u. v5 W$ e5 p2 |+ ]& q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 q# q6 B2 y* |4 ^8 P5 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, M& c& t& }  D- t# W9 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& M( U) e/ `5 W: J+ _, U1 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) Q' ], x# a6 }9 C; U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( m" h0 m6 M6 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: ^; S( O" j. S5 X: B7 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ o; y; \. a5 v3 V3 Z) l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ~: i& f$ [7 j) Y+ c. k( |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# G0 G, _6 ~0 K. o5 ?7 [+ Z* r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  c0 v9 ?. o7 _3 A4 K  s6 G+ Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  O; Z% y( E- R# a4 Y& w2 l6 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) i  A* P& Y# W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* [+ g' N9 V5 b/ V2 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  ?% Y0 n  A% L6 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ W2 q5 U2 ]( Q: o, A( P( _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 f* B6 N, M, x- Q# ~. R) L- k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: F# v7 F' ]) C# x1 D% S' b/ ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 w! h+ Q  |( o5 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 {) \' [% m3 ~1 a! D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 v2 Y0 a. O! O) L/ j+ O" m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* _3 H6 r$ E+ t' P% M/ h9 {$ N) c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 n4 I$ A9 A- V0 d9 s我请你剖开它

& p1 J/ P7 U) J. ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>