【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 r! \& _* N, QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- p9 o, U) \* X1 u5 Z4 {- _  zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% f8 M- j" f2 |; ~2 O, ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 u+ f$ t# d% zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 O' f9 t# Y1 y7 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 l! E& o' N- O7 d2 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% u$ q4 U% @. L% IEvery other word you utter is love
6 e4 ]4 |2 P3 b+ {& gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  P" ?. l! z. B- I: oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ M3 C! x( o+ x/ BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% r8 W; k9 ?; p2 [& x7 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 C; I' g7 u1 ~/ NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! u, s; ^$ N  i# jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 B' G0 @# [1 }, XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 V) I; R$ j2 N, L2 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 l0 [- D  y7 J# e$ o3 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Q: [, y( B+ P2 b5 ~2 M3 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ S) p' B" V( u: o7 E6 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; t+ m% ]+ Y& ^; L. g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# ^3 \3 r/ t" g7 ]* U* L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ]0 k* b2 S) [; _7 H! h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" ~9 L1 Q' j2 i% ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 [5 @- b5 u% b! k$ D9 P! C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ X/ {  V, k* x$ h( [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' B5 J, k" m1 |$ l# b7 a8 ?2 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; O3 x; U, Z/ _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* X3 `' S: d$ n! A  y- s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; R$ F' C; \1 S/ x- g9 U" k3 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; P# {) }7 |+ n; X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ?" v5 ~- B0 o# r' d% ]; F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. D- k# e& v- D% E+ V1 J! J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" p2 U# L9 b9 O: u9 Y7 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 B9 a' T3 J- o6 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, [' c8 a' C0 m5 u0 `5 D! |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 d7 Z+ l* I- b1 }' a9 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 |# ]" A- U- B! [2 ~# o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 E2 t" s: B; V& v' i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) }/ Y! q" e- }8 @: J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 W* C! K  E: j' G6 K* i9 r0 c) R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 M  I. v: i; U) ~) I) T0 E0 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* A$ n) s" V* u9 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 _8 S& y) f+ b: @: ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 t. u. k- Q8 m& _$ |2 Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 F) F, F7 L  m' s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>