【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- ]: F7 f2 z6 ~8 n$ A5 z7 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" q, R# f( U3 ~5 b. {! r, KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [5 O. G) w9 E+ L3 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
& X# [! q5 r9 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& t$ f9 n  {6 v) n3 l* pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( u* c. h0 Z+ H+ Q; f3 f3 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 F7 e$ E! k/ {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 e# p5 W: v  I/ x% u6 g, v, jNothing can compare to my love
  c- l/ V! ^  M: L/ r* J- x6 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  A2 n- l) J1 ~0 {. ?' v' ?# hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 e# `: T4 Q& F' k- HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 }4 v) o" c, d; C: {* bWith such a tongue as yours,
0 [) _$ _* h2 O% i( {2 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' N+ i0 {: i7 x+ g( `, d# _7 }4 P  Q1 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. F( H% x8 r5 r7 i' n& D+ {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 S' @5 @7 w- E# F# N: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" u0 f' p( a% Q; J8 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' l7 D. c( A3 Q* F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ _( R% O' ]+ z- S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 `% `; W& `8 V' y# q6 m4 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" b; m/ t* c4 o4 q9 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) T: M& L* [- u# @$ v" @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# q9 U# H8 |6 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; b, u/ {; [+ P1 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 w% I5 S" `* W# a% l5 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* w: `: [1 I: _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' J" S, P8 D9 r2 ]+ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 @5 e: L2 _3 S0 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) r% J1 e( y/ r+ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 h  V! m( K' ^& P4 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 D0 ?/ j6 w0 d0 c6 _' i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 F  J$ A( z( i/ R7 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 n; q* b; n, |; ^( F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ E- g, Y( {" {8 M. [, O3 Z/ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
% l. w) l, W4 `. ]) M" N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! i/ s; y& D1 h; e0 [( y& A' k/ |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% D+ @' x6 v2 \" r0 l. P- H1 c, s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" ^; M; T) z: ~: K. k" Y: _3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 b& j8 l1 O) F/ K& I( `  a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. M4 D- S: l4 p2 E4 n3 z& i- Z7 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; \' J2 F! `: a8 j6 ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 p$ u. b$ {; |2 h' U' x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>