【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 p" ^6 @4 q! w6 {" G4 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ Z$ i5 W# n; O' b( o! J. w$ G# MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 a# k' P- |4 F) Z! B8 e* k# ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* D4 Y0 w/ H9 W" x2 z& hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 G0 w0 K$ {! gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& @. w7 r/ S  J( kYou needn’t fear anything
3 W. k, n: \  f% dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& C3 f6 i4 H# V- eEvery other word you utter is love
2 `8 m5 Z/ \# p+ ~% kI really want to know just how much you love me
3 f1 J/ g+ N( n- A9 q7 t. XI love you I love you with all my heart
; N7 p: b* o; h. JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ p$ T2 K1 L5 b% x* E/ O5 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ v' k: Z5 c! G0 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 y* Q' M# l1 i/ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 U- `5 w3 l2 \: A/ AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' X$ a4 k& T. L) z  a6 G" iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) J2 ]) A+ @% {3 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- b1 O8 R  X1 T) L- ]; |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 f( S' V( w) J: a4 t( d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 f$ [& o) C; k! w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ]5 m" }' ?  O8 C9 r2 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Z) Y, }6 Z3 q4 J; Z( J9 n3 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 w, P7 R9 s+ J1 H3 h" O( F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ O! z  w6 M$ `9 H  F5 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 r! F6 [2 N4 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# g* G& E" A' @' W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: x* g- T$ R! O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! Z  l1 h, W% c* |0 B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; l0 x, N1 A) J- _+ H1 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; j1 |6 [' L: `* @* i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ b0 Q  \3 y) {3 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 {, [( a( o! x/ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
. y9 @  u, R8 X( g3 `+ _4 _4 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' p' {1 r1 y' D: t4 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. U/ O/ O" S  K, d- |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ O( v" L- C& M7 d9 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# a4 N  {3 ^& L2 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& q8 ]  k  g" J5 w* t: \* W" M; U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 K, g6 T4 \5 w' b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>