【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. K7 p, S' |! D1 v" p歌词我附在后面。
$ a" b* ?9 {% h6 q# X- pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ [  S6 R7 H1 {. X5 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: |: b. T; u- F: Y" WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' V" c; ?  f, s2 c8 QWith the moon kissing it every night
: E3 |# l' G5 P5 uSeeing the sky content with its love
+ C# p/ f, o, f8 P0 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 T3 J/ K$ C5 q# c) jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 T3 {  B6 m% R0 f0 f1 yI really want to know just how much you love me
( ?; R" _8 _+ R+ vI love you I love you with all my heart
6 T) ~2 y9 L7 I: \! `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% c6 l( w$ I+ @9 r' v. bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; ?) n3 j! X) @5 [( JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ V( F9 N/ h! f1 F7 o1 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Q4 u; ?; Q8 }9 W# VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ r  K' _  J0 H& D$ A4 dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 y7 t8 r" H3 S" Q, G9 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' O% F0 M7 d4 O" \2 t  J# m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 d$ ]3 I! r6 _" U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" H6 ~# R5 G0 t. H/ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 h; h! R6 ^1 X  T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 U5 x* ]* v% L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, b! W, a; _( L; e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! f. t" V7 D, u0 ]. ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 V1 G( z" H( }. f( k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) B! x8 T% s! @' Z3 n  e. Z9 ]$ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; |) s: k& Z2 Y4 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 t& A, z6 D6 t: g* F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ?! \+ S. U1 x: F+ U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! N, N% V! |& Q6 A. W+ L! c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& |: V" @! P% l( \# A- i" L1 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 s$ B9 G. H0 p0 ]& f9 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# O& z  G0 y7 x: J' O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" A! l& w9 h" K5 R5 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' }! {2 p& v; j" O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, X# j4 q, `' }& }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 z! s7 l5 P% C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ _0 r* C( y. w# b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ _; I& Y/ R! q) ?5 R6 [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 f3 q( d6 `9 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: u! Q; G$ e7 J, y+ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 d0 J4 C) |& s( l# I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ~" M2 v. k8 E1 M0 D5 }! ~' ?" m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ]" k, |/ U" r  Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 c& g* T" I6 ]3 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 ^" e: M) |% K' F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 q8 @) v1 m9 I( S2 [* w9 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Y' O* d" j7 O9 ~) f. @: c) k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, {9 n: H+ |3 D. B我请你剖开它

: _* {7 n  L0 D+ S& Y5 u7 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>