【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& }7 r& O+ o* l) l* OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ l+ S8 y4 K4 C- o" \The sky is happy down to its soul
: }* h; o5 U' G$ X6 D; L" M# @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 D; Y5 M, E% s, c% M# {7 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' K: p6 U3 z: v/ I5 d2 G: aEvery other word you utter is love
# f! ~7 {7 e0 j8 w  _( X. Q2 nI really want to know just how much you love me
6 v1 G: \* p4 c9 \5 Y! Y! A6 N# YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 _; q$ C- L& b" J+ M. d+ SI want so much to see inside your heart
4 w- _# G4 I- n8 e! mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  }+ t( K/ W, H: e* i% u5 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& B' M& f+ z# K: {( w  |9 U% hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* |# A# V. P9 @7 p1 R5 L, v5 v" fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  Y* u2 S6 `2 F& y9 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 a8 }! Q7 \" ~, D- B  V3 M( f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* b: r7 h' E8 }: Y+ y% t. m! |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 i2 J: O8 r3 V8 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& J- w  u9 l0 D7 _9 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 N4 P0 ~$ [- c/ O3 K5 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 [" `, G! ^" {" q6 N" J6 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  v, r$ h" E3 t! T1 S( \- A! Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 h6 D! X1 I2 E& K2 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ _3 V& @% @/ J# I4 ?% j& L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& i% U" W* e* A' t9 W# K6 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% b7 I  @6 X) B5 z+ _1 d% Q8 ]4 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ f/ d' D/ R9 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 d& T; g$ ?4 c# f0 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% C7 d! W9 E2 M( o  \6 v2 P" L) p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 @  M* B6 ]3 @' X% k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Y9 W1 E9 S+ v" T7 z. u2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 e% x5 w) n( ~; ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# v  \( P1 z: c+ R% V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; v# X; O( w' h3 U3 D1 W5 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 J- g1 a' W3 d/ E, a! K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: d& P- j" G4 O/ o) J* U8 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 W5 [* d* ^# c- u0 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( X7 K) G/ h/ a. u% ]  v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& I3 n, o( C) x1 D6 D4 [  }7 X7 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 k8 v+ h, T# L8 X$ G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. R# T, t$ g% T9 `0 ]9 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>