【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) ~- I* L+ E$ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; T& |1 m% e! N3 r6 B: `  Q! OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 `" E6 h0 j) k/ ^- l6 J1 Y2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% B0 K5 H. I$ C: I8 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 {) C% q1 E0 y2 d1 H% X6 |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Q. z- U( s& j( O8 i4 O7 f2 Z: ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 b4 s4 S0 V$ u6 V7 _, ]# }1 q& q% KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 {/ F# {1 i5 m  t5 {$ J8 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) [# \; S7 n3 s- J8 Y; GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) I! n: i, G& R" HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) \' \% s: V& yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# q( r3 j3 ]. r+ g+ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 A. |1 T: G+ B* N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ d. ]: @+ l1 z4 L2 }; c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: v5 D& ]% K6 u4 c& q: _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& w% q* l. I1 @/ V& w% i3 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, z: y7 o% P- [; s1 u) S; u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ ?; d+ F" k' c% S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ?" @; n7 f3 q5 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 g& M( K) `8 z+ Q  f7 }% t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 m/ Z0 j  i, j3 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# B8 |  q7 f, K' M: ~+ n' q<P>你无需担心</P>
7 G& J# |1 I3 b( {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 d" v: o/ J/ w) [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& w7 a+ D3 F3 w. R% s- h( ^9 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! l/ U( u( w6 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 i0 I0 d; x; |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ v0 r/ W8 }; ]# o4 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 B# \/ B+ x3 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; a, U9 p7 z$ A) \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- |1 e! _* a0 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% U! l/ k- h' q- C  K# l. D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! X( X4 |  t  l* L3 H4 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# E  i0 d. N. f' u, E  Q0 J: F- b7 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% e7 [7 p' T& N/ V# z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& Z/ r! b3 B3 Z4 S9 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; h  m2 [2 S; ]3 e4 L3 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( y/ a  V+ X6 ]2 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
' h3 k! x0 Y3 d$ N# p, i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 w+ H/ Y8 E% G8 Q; [8 r7 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ]1 j5 Z, c" J. `. o) |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 h9 R3 e0 x) C/ q" \: T# a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 F" t4 u. C, Y2 j& v# t& r, P& i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ W. M( o, @+ A5 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. F' H$ O' {( r& m% y$ g! _# K  S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 P) N5 @/ D' m+ s5 {7 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ {6 [1 ?) ~; b/ C( F, a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: U; ^# n1 n% D# b" u* F! l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" X& m6 E+ ?, a9 ?& u( ^! V7 B$ H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 p9 E0 o8 L0 J- M: m9 S我请你剖开它
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# h# o+ e7 A- j; k% D  b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( G- Z  F0 u: y, h2 w- i/ k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>