【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 _& J: p" K+ [' EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 l- j: K* }  \0 B5 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# B: C/ ?# }  R: K+ |1 |. k# P, VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ x0 b' t* o3 ]4 I0 t+ f' O2 S. OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 D5 |. t. p# @2 Z7 O3 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 U9 Q9 B. Y; ]* h/ g6 E# sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 F2 Q* E8 W: n, F/ T2 hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, J3 K6 H/ e$ o  E! q+ {' iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! p) G. A9 |( F( S/ TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# f& s/ c) H) e4 E( e1 X# cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( r: C; E/ [1 x6 q' z4 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 P; V5 X  k, Y  f! p) Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Q. ~. Q/ X; L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 W* _# R5 C! R& L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 _6 R. M6 M- p* F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 v+ y0 B2 d  U! X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Y3 w/ Z% E+ T2 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ `3 n! C6 X/ {4 F" i. h( n2 b0 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) o  @$ W* v. p' R* o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" v- \  d: I* O" T! G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& P- u. o1 h: T# T; b; U5 T3 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 p; z+ @5 B1 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; F' J( |+ X( w7 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; N8 h' K8 F/ e/ b/ }+ O1 M$ b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( l2 J# y) c/ z3 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ K2 \: ?9 ]6 i3 i& C1 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 N6 I9 O# m: l3 C+ e+ a0 i4 d8 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 h9 E0 t1 u# T* m4 F/ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 l* U5 [3 j7 a5 f! J+ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) U8 ?1 F% ~2 m; I4 N1 S! Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 y* Z3 O# l, x" m: M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 |$ m9 r* h3 e7 v$ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" M9 @: S" Q6 {1 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. l- \0 T& Q6 N- U+ Y6 T; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' Z9 t' }/ N6 G! Q( {% a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' a7 P: w6 F$ R( X! }. B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 b7 T/ _, g7 V" O/ q% ^& V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 [1 A/ F9 {, m* k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- N, @. d5 R* Q4 V我请你剖开它

: l3 i' S. T( m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>