【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& ^& s+ y9 R( m" r" o8 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) ^  n; f2 }1 {- A$ xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ S" m3 j! r  E' ~* O; w( `$ A. bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" \8 O  l8 ?9 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% R+ e+ A* G7 |1 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  A: \8 L, r) T6 X0 @8 p* xNothing can compare to my love
! H) g. z* m+ y/ j$ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: g' V0 E- k: C  [0 b5 ^5 g; XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, c' Y  B+ G9 W0 o. C5 CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 g( a; `  _& ?2 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 `, b3 T9 U. `. I' H9 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 ~: l1 \+ R% d" r. G. }! c' I4 i) sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 O1 ]! m& K# V  l+ i% NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# y) A- {) Y! U) s  Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ `0 |) c9 ^/ P+ Z0 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% |7 W  {$ w! P- w% ~" F4 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! e9 U' ^# ]+ ]5 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ~( P. ~0 w8 ^- e; M% b' B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. n" V- h5 |8 g8 y1 {+ q8 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, W$ c) X7 C5 n1 U7 L0 s% W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) F- P- |" W, L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  y# U6 @0 h. Q; F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' r& r6 F0 [% b5 o7 B5 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 _" F6 R& k- H+ j& t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. L# H7 b" v) R6 R! }) ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 f* L7 ]1 {/ r1 J+ u$ h( x& e7 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ i. e) c) B) {1 y; R. I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ J) ^! ]  ~1 D- {( V3 Z2 Q2 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. f# o4 I" q9 M- z  ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- D" G2 G) [: \# R, j$ ]0 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' p2 c  ?- b1 l2 I# z6 y3 o6 V8 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 k$ |5 z+ L. {2 [+ _; e5 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) `: A0 S4 L" ~; W- G9 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# u& o( Y# G! P: l  B/ s3 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 [9 P6 A1 R2 W; V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, w  u+ o  g4 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ b$ G# S5 L4 u3 \0 n/ a, z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- @: G$ {- V: V( S7 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& T4 [0 ]+ y7 A; E7 ^, p9 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ A' N; @1 \" q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* b! a  S( Y& W0 ^: T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 Q) R) A  Y" G) W8 u- [4 B( {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>