【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' E+ Y9 H8 w! ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; C7 c) J& i, {9 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 w( p0 r( J, ~9 z; R/ [The sky is happy down to its soul
0 Q' l2 K, n$ ~3 c9 m3 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 Z; L) w3 ]# [: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 @5 g9 [) {. x. i; C. \2 l3 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ E7 j  M4 N! ~) x4 |# ~' G/ @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' Q3 Q+ m6 H% C8 B3 S9 p7 I) rI want so much to see inside your heart
% [& d5 L, i9 ]" PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 O+ X. o1 H2 V% {" \" ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 P+ K  I  n1 k. fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- a$ h  _. o# Q3 Y4 @9 [5 NWith such a tongue as yours,
1 V# Q, \0 s# P" g8 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" n5 o/ D" ]2 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ d2 R- r7 h" n) e) G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' i7 M& j1 C1 E0 G7 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( u  n7 I, L& ~! L) L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ L9 w' A! S: X  i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ B! ~: ^1 [% z# p$ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( z9 `" H) c& T( b0 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 E$ d6 C8 X+ N. V0 I3 R2 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 o: n4 F- B6 L6 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# M5 p- s( B5 F% u9 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ~7 n- U) q& F& c6 S3 D4 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ a& Q, C* h1 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* u5 i( ^9 [; M% c0 P- y4 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 @! j9 h! m) d. u1 a! V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Z! w) V1 V$ ^: Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) h4 E. G1 ?' q& Z' |6 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  S/ C' x: m* g& H+ f, U! l, P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( i5 I0 g: v  L0 ]  B2 x* {' X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 R, |6 Q/ z, a& ]0 o2 j: X; c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ f" o4 b1 V! L7 M# h6 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 `# `- n. e4 q5 f+ X5 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' {$ y+ {" ]4 l; \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. R; e, @- ]4 j6 J( o5 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
" ^+ R% |7 s' T- E' O4 w  X9 }$ q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! P: D- `4 }4 ?& K# o; ~* N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) s, A+ u8 S1 P- Q  s1 [' h" y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: V. o2 x1 f5 P5 ]$ l( ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>