【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" a8 [4 z) B6 {, v# @; {Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 Q3 q6 t) M; q8 Y+ C3 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 W  V& e2 r3 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 t6 e) o5 ]& p; q8 LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ `6 c' R/ F0 n  i4 }: IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 s4 h8 }8 ~* Q0 ^( EI love you I love you with all my heart
8 J/ q7 l! I2 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 K" S8 V' ^) C  H& c% `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) b, ^# S4 ]" f3 S1 U; {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 j8 u. w& u2 e5 n  kI regret not dying
+ ?2 B- V( y' K% }, PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- f- u! ?- T/ b5 I) z' f) L5 }2 nWith such a tongue as yours,
+ r0 A4 l$ v4 `% l7 m+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- D" v! c! X8 J8 `5 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' E8 X' [0 A  O9 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  y$ F# Q* u  h2 k) E- G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ l3 B" c" }4 P0 F) V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 U+ n" `) |$ \  e6 z9 q0 R5 ^( a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ G+ w# `( {1 Y' \1 H7 t, N/ M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 E: q0 C3 t/ O- A# V1 F, }" M- K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- C" N. p0 c/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' G" U$ `4 Y: c1 d0 }  B0 C5 l: C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 |6 F$ x7 R1 z! J: U4 f" G; G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: g; D: B+ K' J. @  ^6 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; j% u2 ~2 g7 Q* G8 l" r) }$ f; V6 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ L; T4 M# y: h  X. [& s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* e8 Q( p$ a. S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( k9 T( ^% ]  C2 a, q4 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" K" h" m$ G/ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ c7 y0 X3 H2 h1 R0 k" i6 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& J1 Z& p$ W& p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ j0 l$ N' E. [8 r+ Y' ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% ]2 k$ d. r- W: P. a6 Q5 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! E2 ^% S: u) c' p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 D& Z/ Q7 q/ I; x2 p9 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 P& s' X- K2 F/ J+ `, ]: f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 o; ?3 ]4 ?" F" m5 H' `/ @* T# E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 e$ k: ~' t- Y) ?6 J/ |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 R1 \. C% h& S  O/ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# R& F" j" z4 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# i/ D* v$ P& E* d2 Z' G% t( E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ q# m! Y. ?1 R2 S4 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% I! S" I% ]) D: m7 t8 m& c' a3 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# N+ A% C/ o3 a4 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>