【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 L7 a4 E: o3 [3 F0 d9 G( e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' V4 o8 \1 F, L  LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `- V( B  Y. e" c2 I. eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 d) `' e2 q* t8 r( s, B; ]  oWith the moon kissing it every night
3 Y, S, a9 H# L( pSeeing the sky content with its love
* K: B3 I1 ]/ |" _+ pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 w1 n* _5 F0 L% L& K1 K; ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 V: q4 j# S  z0 z  y/ o6 hEvery other word you utter is love
, J1 Q# ^) D$ B: n& @! @I really want to know just how much you love me
& @: I- L( v$ p+ NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 K3 a) _) [# y  n$ cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 u) k: M2 g: e, ~3 Q- KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 d8 V* `4 q: N% b" b- E7 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 A( m: L3 u. [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# A" S  U6 [+ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 Z) W! d1 z- F3 S) E+ Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 f$ T0 r3 G/ p5 p: _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ j% C9 q& M# n. ^/ _7 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# {" U& v0 q' \) Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( T9 G/ H7 p3 t2 l. j0 h0 M9 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: p3 M% F5 o, Q6 {  g% a$ T  o. K3 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% c- n1 C( G4 r4 ~6 ]/ d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ~. Y. p5 x  k* [8 [: [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 v. ~' F7 y2 A4 u2 S0 I+ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 J& L' R# {6 `8 W, \) j<P>你无需担心</P>
( A6 Y, P) p7 B, n2 a8 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( V& T) \7 ?9 B: \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; I, n7 y, v( N6 F' M' i! t' ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 K* X7 U- }2 P. Q. Z: J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# W2 D  G0 @+ r: ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 a: ~0 v7 }! ]( ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* F# W6 ?- x: M0 n: k- K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 q- R2 y' ~; c  g6 t+ ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 z5 T' s! F0 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& o& Z6 i7 o  |) t, m0 c8 Y. p1 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ k# ^/ P3 f! j% G1 H0 [7 B# c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; z# [  z# U% e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 w" T* C5 \- I5 z2 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>