【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' N$ N% S# v3 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  _3 E7 l  x9 tWith the moon kissing it every night
6 c4 k, N7 Q# l2 `. r- aSeeing the sky content with its love
! o2 ]/ b9 }( y% R$ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; e6 j/ Q8 l/ f" [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' |0 M' C3 E) ~0 X2 N$ y5 u4 oEvery other word you utter is love
  Y2 E# D: r+ T! P. gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& {) q  ^* `! @5 H' M# NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 O: `$ f% n, S$ V  i1 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ]/ D5 e! F" Y6 x  QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& x8 `; c: Q5 k- v* @, R1 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ?( }' S0 k8 r* r9 ^0 h& tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- Y4 p, U; ]' R* K* A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( x$ B# u1 Q' W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 O' U! G: g  D- x8 U/ Z: {& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: D; l8 f5 ]. A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ i  x- K8 i. a! \- r2 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! D+ {' e& \" O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( r6 c5 @9 n7 M2 a2 Z' R  m8 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 f2 a, I8 m  o! x) p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' J3 q+ |$ N+ M$ _. Z7 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% ?$ q2 `9 W; j2 @6 E+ q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 I# J6 K) D8 v, t5 Q3 H0 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" ?+ B- r" d& z; u, ]8 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 H" f" T; Y- f* }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, U& u; A: K( s) s# a5 V' q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" x3 _: A* o6 Y) r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 Y; ]+ w2 @. c+ S! ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' j- ?" I+ S" i0 ~$ Q5 y! @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 t, i* Q5 r; w* k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& g0 b8 r6 i/ h: B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% ?4 y  g! H: V: R* h6 {# A) @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; j" v0 G$ A6 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ x3 \! z4 M' K, S4 t1 u5 ]. r& K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ]# H+ j- R# M$ ]6 n& z; E& h$ E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- G! f% G  `/ _( ?! O) [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 A5 l" L8 [' q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; ^! Y% T' \6 {( D: b" c8 k" N4 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* P0 m8 T, L. t; f: \& K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" [1 S& T7 H4 R7 o; ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 Y& @: i8 C  ^  ~$ s1 U4 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>