【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 w5 E5 U1 K2 C  b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ c$ T  x5 k/ y8 F$ [) _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ @5 a! P" \* p9 `" }5 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* p2 h6 t% ]% G9 M3 L5 QWith the moon kissing it every night
8 Z4 s5 v# l" d" N% C  k# ]- QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# B8 c4 k* }8 J* \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( [7 T8 m0 n% T' QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# K5 h* k& H2 t, g: [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, y( S8 _! _! Z: rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: U0 c  W! @- V% XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  b  ~0 ~( D! z0 k4 Z3 q4 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- ?/ w6 V  l4 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ p. L0 A+ j. {) \# z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! d0 \7 x, [  I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ~& ]+ V) I4 e- w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ ]+ H4 p" w# e) }1 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ]7 z( y' V# Y# G8 ]; S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 K5 G- s8 r6 N& L( o8 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: O. i" N& \4 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ ?4 ~# I) X; d4 }4 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 J* v/ l2 j' A2 X' `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 l3 z- a& Z. i: ~+ ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 W; `0 A/ k# N9 b( o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. T! ~  m; e0 Y6 E6 L+ K+ y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( {/ g2 v; l- ~1 L* H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. D: X2 D5 [" n7 g7 Y0 x- G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 n% [7 |2 W) K% V+ y" Y$ x: L. i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( z% l+ C( r* n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 h9 l  u: K8 B- B# E! {2 }, k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# u5 {2 L' x  d7 c. n- v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* [! W1 A$ y/ p3 R7 N+ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) H: v0 s8 z7 R% M( S2 A5 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 I  \1 |1 R: n+ r8 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, M6 j: P3 U; K2 H: Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  j0 q: l% }7 P  R2 Y$ h+ ?3 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 Q3 V+ P3 b7 ^! e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 g/ a, }! f. G( u" }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ W6 ^# Z9 q; F4 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ L1 x2 @) R# E% ?% f( x' y' W9 U- a# i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- q/ p0 ?0 }1 y) s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>