【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; j2 M& U1 N  H1 i; {+ @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 _! ^( d. m5 ^; f: CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( R/ ?4 a1 ?' m2 d* P1 S' C# CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# g. S8 t" I; ^% Q- cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# n6 \9 A+ w/ n' iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 T( m& I, Z* A* M/ I& O; vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! ~4 L$ r' `0 a6 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' l; x0 V' @3 n# gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) F# |& ]/ Q* C* H' f2 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% w8 S8 U' ]$ g- s( {, L1 E4 FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ]3 j1 _+ g" u; ~1 `9 O. |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 F7 Y  Q/ O5 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 u6 L) E- m  G; ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( I; d& G0 O1 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 @; ~: C8 u0 |2 T0 h0 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( v5 [/ n4 Z& N: e# [" H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; O0 c0 Q9 g1 p- m( `6 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& u3 x8 _/ z" R) b4 k# `# c2 `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 F2 H/ ^0 N: x! h. R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% Y0 B* I9 ?9 u- ^& ^! ^) P% \$ b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# d; I  o3 t  t8 b2 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# x, x4 u4 w' V+ o; g. N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 F! z( k% M# K' X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, _6 B1 G5 }0 U' Y" K1 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 i! W$ k% O; M# f0 B' R. t" w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, _6 j. }" T- R# @9 J/ ~" {( o% [6 Y. Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 q( C' w, |; Q! |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 N" r3 {2 b2 q& F1 W4 s4 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% S6 G0 s. H9 q) q- t5 E6 X2 g  H9 R: C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 v- V5 s  y. K( e& ?0 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' l( E% ?) l2 s! ^; ^) @) K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Y, m0 u- {$ O2 H) a. O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: w1 o$ k, P& ~) Z/ K1 p) k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. b0 h6 m9 ]8 C6 a' T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  m; w% o* \* j! p$ ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, u8 R7 r2 d" V5 h/ Z0 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! h6 t: ]/ B) s/ U  @0 K. q/ t" z. N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>