【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  h( k6 _( I" X6 u1 x/ v! @歌词我附在后面。
2 m- ?* K# v8 d' S" ?! C4 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ w% J! }- h2 {' a9 L- t( ^( XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- {! _0 C8 l0 @& f0 Q- A9 c  XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& j7 N0 X, t  D  SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( C; L( x- }& Z. ^) Y: |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ `; q- e4 p) O, L; V$ P9 _3 iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- X' e% o  d5 ]7 e* P" d+ _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  d( }7 w  V2 R, L$ M) s$ YEvery other word you utter is love
% Q6 ~- X& p8 ^( [1 E) M2 oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 R/ d2 c  _5 A  WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 L7 f' b* S) y% ]. w0 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 h8 K% B% `8 R/ \4 uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ]4 L! J# |$ h: G4 A) [  ~" DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ x  n0 {+ n$ t/ s4 YWith such a tongue as yours,
7 U& X$ r& p) J/ b9 L, wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ N! Z, N% d# s# WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% A( H+ A8 v, \( X; Z+ a+ aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' i0 N+ w# V: x- c2 J& w! ]% v/ _+ y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 }# n4 x9 b* L& p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ d3 r( j# c; ~6 |: m( u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Y2 S5 Q% k' b; b. r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, [1 a. p7 X; a  T: D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( b8 T7 C7 S  [, {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 _4 n* z1 ?+ F/ F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 d1 T% e' _' W! c% s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  r' \$ D& Q0 k  q0 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ H/ J5 ]- W3 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 d0 r) ^  h6 V' F6 G# u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: B% A8 f& O2 i5 A" f" S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 c: A% k( u0 U8 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ r3 h  t0 U/ K7 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 |% c% c/ [. x' _# E) E$ w( L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: J2 v, d/ `9 F3 s; r& y3 t* |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 R/ d( ^1 o6 a/ M8 E6 f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 C3 T5 a( X- h7 b7 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( C1 d: p# ^7 l0 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; l" T: X$ a9 c6 r9 t1 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- c! A6 S: m" o4 e0 C6 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 l) Z7 o# X0 `! v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, s8 o" a- E6 _& p; l7 h2 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 k" ^1 W4 c$ S1 @& V! v: T- C0 w& U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% s5 C5 @9 n  K- G6 b2 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>