【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
( H# k( @7 T& ?( bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

1 e+ {+ _/ l% ^4 _- n再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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1 o% P5 g1 c% b8 u( L+ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  q2 ?- B7 _/ `夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

) P# J* |8 ]: {- _9 }7 E% ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
( P' s6 O/ ^  k: T. C0 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, K* p: R" q% S# t6 {* S月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 q3 W' V% h9 D1 u( R一片丹心 照耀夜空

  H: _% n0 X  \. ]With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ J4 Y1 T4 x" h  [5 _: ]夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
; X, f/ ~, j) J- J% C, X$ |You needn’t fear anything
' u0 t9 d/ I: {  h, h: @* X怕这怕那 又是何苦
' L# b( Y3 P* |6 \. B3 O5 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, S7 Q" j, o9 P6 U+ U# F我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
" T1 c% J) F0 v" r) X# e3 @$ KEvery other word you utter is love
) r6 z+ Z- I4 T+ a& i: u" C口口声声 说你爱我
8 c4 C! w, Y5 UI really want to know just how much you love me
" |5 h; Z5 @5 @( n真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 m0 t/ V: [7 G" [: i$ T6 h" D; ~3 ?爱你爱你 全心全意
" ]. z8 W" F2 u0 V8 |0 p. v; z( GNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

" ^; B( h% z9 H' }- h2 Z8 c8 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. W' P: s  B7 M1 g* i, e9 b能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
$ u+ {. L5 P1 n: }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 q0 ]9 V4 O8 A% H2 r整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
* A1 {% r; n! @3 H7 r我真想看透你的心
8 b, m# j* s/ x7 ^8 L/ ZI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
: B6 j% e7 P* l4 {' |7 [, f5 CTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
* Y6 ~* a5 ]% q% q5 q: E, iI’m still filled with fear
4 t3 b0 q% B9 ~4 ]* i9 H4 c/ i& p可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, V6 _3 k; F4 v你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
; f0 a$ l5 ~# y1 EI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
- n7 m. ?! R6 P# qIt’s nothing close to 100,000
  J/ ^- Q" [% E. l  M  @/ b1 b也恨不得  多如千万
3 x7 B1 l7 ]( b: T1 K# l! UWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 o7 ^* a# N) P" R, ?% @能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# m, [) H* Y: f9 @. D( s& R若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
5 L) t  L1 F% ?# bRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

, T/ t- e% t$ Z8 c! qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 O4 o, n2 s0 T0 u& ~从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, {( P$ S, Q$ Z0 R  k/ x4 G爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
/ q) z! s2 y7 p; ~( f5 XFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
. j" ]8 s1 V" gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 @) O1 H5 [$ A7 K8 N* {( x/ v$ H若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
- Y0 n$ p- F" C+ h! NI would probably know how you feel
2 ~, m; H5 W/ o1 T0 K( D/ r或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
, n# z7 V8 X3 E/ [5 U, ?爱呀，爱就一个字
! [& o- b6 I& \! n  U; |Why is it so difficult to express?
# ?" q8 T& T2 J& x+ p为何如此难言？
" u5 l1 k3 U4 S2 wI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
2 Y8 H* y. p5 h4 H; M: W) P7 k! {But I never did
! L( S( K/ w% \* n6 B6 w0 l却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
0 X& z6 A- p- G- ]) |3 l: Q. KIf today isn’t too late,
1 H3 X+ N2 O: z! w. d假如还不太迟
5 D+ B- \9 K) L4 M* N8 X6 g+ ?6 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* y- d# a0 p% q, M/ W今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ S$ V6 u( k+ t' u; {" V不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
9 @0 P1 m. Q: R7 _5 G* [6 _. S2 s可否将它 托付于你?
" ?- Y- G9 r2 Z  j$ uEntrust my love within your heart
$ t! C9 l- _7 a9 @4 ~. m/ x8 Q从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
8 @& t$ D( U7 c" [& {Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
  i6 _- L! Z* B/ @I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
4 H: }" P3 b& e) S/ g6 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
+ i2 M+ \$ x& i8 t( ^4 mIf today isn’t too late,
, n! c: O1 d/ i" T' m  U( [! S0 |假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 t: f# h; S/ [# B2 _2 z不愿这份爱 逝如流水
; k  `1 G0 p6 U2 Y- L1 HCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
) P% t' p* f! l' u从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

# U. M( m  g; s3 N! s1 |Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
9 G+ x$ o) f$ n. b' HEntrust my love within your heart
8 h9 T& m- L! e4 ]& H从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
9 S: r3 M9 b' X5 I# ?2 L. N& \: V老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
% h& u, w2 Q7 }刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
& F  V- Q6 p9 l3 Q, Z; K% L) W刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

+ V/ e; T# G4 ^6 \$ P) b不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。